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"Farther and Farther: Chapter 4 Saying Goodbye" by MistWrites

Spoilers!

(duh...)

"Sky? Sky!" Blood splattered against the wall and the scream stopped abruptly. "You know, I didn't WANT to kill you." Sky smirked, eyes glowing brightly.

If you didn't want to kill him then why the fuck did you kill him? (1)

"Yo...You can't do this... We're friends..." Martin was pressed against the wall, shaking. His white wings were splattered with blood, not his own though.

Wait, then who's blood is it? Theres blood everywhere and shit and it's neither of theirs?! Who the fuck is it's then? (1)

"But Bodil! Friends don't ignore friends!" Sky opened his dark bat-like wings, "Anyways, I need Angel wings for my collection!"

Wait, you're killing this guy cause he ignored you? You didn't even talk it out like normal supernatural beings? Wow, you're a douche. And why would you kill your friend for his wings if you said you didn't want to kill him? (2)

Sky grabbed ing of Martin's wings and twisted it.

Why is there an ing? (1)

"Sky... Please..." Martin cried out in pain. Sky smiled, "Your pleading won't get you anywhere!"

Actually by pleading I got a puppy (1)

Martin felt tears running down his cheeks and blood stained the back of his shirt, right where his wings attached to his body. "Goodbye!" Sky called and Martin blacked out, wing torn off.

Sky better but buffalo sauce on that wing or take the other one. Because he said he wanted both, so why just leave the one? He'd even more of an asshole and I do not feel pity or sorrow for any of these characters. (2)

Sky had dropped the wing when it came off and went to another cage upon hearing a cry of sadness.

So he's just gonna leave Martin there to bleed? He's even more of an asshole! (1)

"And Jason, I hope you're happy. I loved you and you betrayed me for HIM." Sky pointed to the body of Ty, blood staining the ground around him.

Woah, hold up. Jason LOVED Sky? But then he left him for another boy? Wow, there's no the author ships Truelox, SkyMU, Merome, but doesn't ship Skylox. I'm counting this as a sin because scene doesn't contain smut. (1)

Jason backed up, "Adam, you don't have to do this! Please don't do this..."

Yeah Sky, you don't have to kill me because I had an affair. (1)

Jason looked straight into his eyes. "You could've been like me, but you had to fall for him."

What? Murderous and a supernatural being? Actually, I'm kinda with Jason on this one. I mean, what if Jason didn't want to be like you? (1)

Sky turned away. "I don't WANT to be like you! Killing your friends? I won't do that!"

I'm counting this as a sin because Jason stole those words from me. (1)

Sky froze, turning towards Jason. His eyes almost returned to normal and his expression turned from anger to fear.

So it takes the words of the love who cheated on you to change you? Um, shouldn't there be a true love's kiss then? (1)

"What... What have I done?" He ran away, tears of blood streaming down his cheeks.

So you are a vampire! (1)

"Martin, maybe I can save you..." Jason walked towards the Angel, "Martin, can you here me?"

How is Jason, a mortal, going to heal a fucking angel? He doesn't have magical powers...right? Also that 'hear' is spelt wrong. (2)

Jason shook him gently after putting a messy bandage around his chest.

Why on his chest? Why not on the bleeding apendage where is wing is? Or was? (1)

"Jason? Where is he?" Martin opened his eyes, "Can I fly?"

Woah, you're asking to many questions dude. (1)

Jason shook his head, "No. He took that..." Martin rubbed his eyes, "So I have one wing..."

So you should probably chop the other one off. Or can wings grow back? Are they like antlers on a deer? Can they fall off and grow back? Can they heal themselves? Can they pass this skill onto baby wings? I guess we'll never know. (1)

Sin Count: 20

Sentence: You can have one with out the other. (Wings that is)

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