Hey guys! I was thinking about rewriting Chapter 4 because I am not sure about that big time skip. Please review and tell me what you think. I just want the best for my readers. I still can't believe that y story was posted 4 days ago! You guys are SO helpful and I managed to get another writer to review for me! PLEASE read her story! Her name is Hey Itz Jen and she wrote the story 'Who Will Take Her'. Please check it out and help me here!

CHAPTER 5

Tris

"Will you go on a date with me?" Four asks.

I just stare at him in awe. OF COURSE I DO! But I want to play with him a little.

"Um, Four, you're a great friend and everything but…"

"But what? What did I do wrong?" He asks willingly.

"I'm just playing Four. Of COURSE I'll go on that date with you." He smiles.

"When?"

"Right know!" He says and puts a hand over my eyes and leads me on his Harley. "Close your eyes." He says. I do and he fastens his extra helmet on me. "Still closed?" he asks and I nod.

Just then the engine begins to roar and we race around the city.

"Where are we going?" I say.

"You'll see. Keep your eyes closed."

"They are!" Four just laughs and continues driving.

We must have been driving around for at least half an hour before we stop.

"We're here?" I ask for at least the 50th time.

"Yup."

He lifts me up and swings me over his soldier. He laughs and says, "KEEP YOUR EYES CLOSED!" I do and I start slapping his back and yelling absurd things like 'PUT ME ODWN' or 'FOUR YOU'RE GONNA PAY!' I know it's useless. He's the Captain of the Football team, remember?

Four finally sets me down. But then just picks me up bridal style and tells me to open my eyes. My jaw drops. He brought me to the lake. But that's just not it. He set up a picnic spot with LED lights in a nice yellow colour up in the tree that the picnic is set under.

"Wow…."

"I know. Christina set it up for me." I look at him, confused.

"Oh yeah. I told everyone I liked you end they all helped me get you." I smile. All the girls in the school, he can have but he chose me.

"Thank you." And I hug him as much as possible, since he is carrying me. He sets me down and we begin our little treat.

"Thanks Four, you really made this night special."

"You're welcome. The best for my girl." I blush and then something happens.

His lips are on mine.

At first I do nothing but then, my arms are around his neck to deepen the kiss. His arms snake my hips and the other presses my back closer. We pull away and gasp.

"So Tris, I kissed you and you kissed back so…um, does that mean um…"

"Yes, go on."

"Will, uh, will you be my girlfriend?"

I smile and press my lips against his. "OF COURSE I WILL BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND!"

I say good-bye to my new 'boyfriend' and run inside to text Christina.

TrisP- OMG CHRIS! 4 IS MY BF!

Christina3- YAY! Mission accomplished!

TrisP- thx chris!

Christina3- np. Gnight Trissy

TrisP- DON'T CALL ME THAT!

Christina3- Well 4 can call u that

TrisP- It's only for 4

Christina- LOL –for 4- any way night

TrisP- Night

I turn off my phone and smile. Good night Four.

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~Aspyn