I have take all the review into mind and i have adjusted accordingly.
Chapter 4
Matt wakes up to the smell of burnt curry in the morning.
"honey, I told you before you cant cook." Matt called out.
"excuse me, Matt." Kari said from the kitchen where she was attempting to make food.
"Oh Kari, I didn't know it was you." Matt apologized.
"yea, i know i suck at cooking. i was hoping to make you guys a thank you breakfast but i kinda messed up." Kari explained.
"don't worry about it but your gonna need some cooking lessons if you want to catch TK's eye." Matt said.
"what do you mean?" Kari asked.
"haven't you heard the saying 'the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.'?" Matt asked.
"my school doesn't have a cooking program so how am i to learn?" Kari asked.
"well, Mimi is in in a culinary program at her college why don't you ask her." Matt suggested.
"OK thanks Matt, by the way could you drive me home, i wanna check up on Tai." Kari asked.
"sure just let me get dressed."
an hour later.
"thanks for the ride Matt." Kari called from the Kamiya apartment.
"Tai were ho- holy crap." Kari said.
"What the hell happened to the apartment?" Gatomon asked.
The apartment was completely destroyed. beer cans and bottles everywhere, Tv gone, Gatomon's and Nico's litter was scattered in the kitchen, and Tai was on the floor while Agumon was trying to clean up before they got home.
"Agumon, what happened here?" Kari asked.
"and where is the TV?" Gatomon asked as well.
"well me, Tai, and his friends were drunk and having a party as for the TV i passed out early so i don't know." Agumon replied.
"but judging how every one is gone im suspecting the cops came by." Agumon said.
"Tai, wake up now!" Kari yelled while shaking him.
"Wh-what?" Tai managed to say through his hangover.
"I wont tell mom and dad but don't have any more parties and your gonna have to buy us a new TV." Kari told him.
"fine, thanks Kari." Tai said.
"now i'm got to get ready for school, do you need the washroom?" Kari asked.
"no, i'm good." Tai replied.
Half an hour later. Kari walks out of her bedroom in her brand new outfit.
"damn, whats with the new outfit Kari." Tai said.
"do you like it?" Kari asked spinning around.
"to be honest its a little to revealing." Tai answered.
"what do you mean you cant see anything." Kari said.
"we can talk about it later but i got to get to school, OK Tai." Kari said running out of the apartment.
later at school. many boys were whistling at Kari's new look. Davis just stood next to TK with his jaw drooped.
"hey, TK." Kari greeted.
"Hey Kari, nice look but its a little revealing don't you think." TK greeted back.
"your sounding like Tai." Kari said.
"well that would be because we're right." TK said.
"are you crazy Ts, you look fantastic Kari." Davis said.
"i think her old outfit looked more appropriate." TK said before leaving for class.
'ugh, well this didn't work as we planned.' Kari thought.
'i bet Kari dressed like this to impress me.' Davis thought to himself.
So what do you guys think now is it a little easier to read.