School's out and I forgot to update this story immediately. Sorry but here it is with the reviews.
Cute as a button22: You will find out later if she is hiding something.
Dr panda: Well doctor, it's nice to see someone who can compare this with the old version but if it's not too much to ask could you give me your professional opinion on the changes I made on the later parts of the story?
Phineas81707: That was not one of my stories, but I'm glad that … well I'm glad that you haven't lost track of this story yet.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything or anyone except Erick.
(Ferb's POV)
Ferb: And that's what happened. What should we do?
Erick: What do you mean? All you did was go online, tell me that we need to talk, and say "and that's what happened". What happened exactly?
I rolled my eyes
Ferb: Sorry bad scene transition let me start from the beginning okay?
Erick: Hold on Baljeet wants to hear this too. Let him log on.
I gave it a minute and sure enough, it showed Baljeet log in, as well as Buford and Django
Ferb: Looks like the gangs all here.
Buford: What's this I hear about the two of you not doing anything today? It's the first weekend, how come you guys aint celebrating or something?
Django: Buford you misheard me. I said that Phineas was going out to the movies with a new friend of his, and that Ferb was doing nothing today.
Buford: Oh ya that's right.
Erick: Who are you and what have you done with Buford?
Buford: ?
Erick: Buford can't spell for his life and I haven't seen you mess up a word yet.
Ferb: Can we get back to what's important?
Django: Buford's suddenly being good at spelling isn't important?
Ferb: Not as important as Phineas getting a girlfriend who isn't Isabella. (A.N. tell me honestly, how many of you just screamed "It's the sign of the apocalypse!")
Buford: I just got one of those contraptions that translates your speech into words.
Erick: Good because Baljeet thought that the world was going to … wo wo wo, hold on a minute … Ferb, could you type that again only this time slowly?
Ferb: Well most of you know that Phineas met a new girl the first day of school, most of you know that Phineas fell in love with said girl, and most of you know that Phineas was going to the movies with her today. But here's the thing I just found out not an hour ago, after the movie Phineas and Rica went to the park for some … I actually don't know why they went to the park, but it doesn't matter. What does matter is that Rica kissed Phineas, then Phineas asked Rica to be his girlfriend.
Buford: And why do we really care about this? What are we? A bunch of teenage girls?
Erick: We care because of what Isabella's going to do when she finds out that Phineas has a girlfriend.
Buford: So is she going to cry or go on a psychotic tantrum?
Django: My moneys on the first one.
Buford: So then what do we care?
Ferb: Because Isabella is going to kill me when she finds out that I did nothing to stop this.
Buford: Simply tell her the truth; he is your brother and you support his decisions, and that she shouldn't have waited so long and now she lost her chance.
There was a long silence
Erick: Now I know that the world is going to end.
Buford: Not funny.
Ferb: Buford's right.
Erick: Does anyone know the way to the safety bunker?
Buford: You're to paranoid.
Erick: Phineas started dating someone other than Isabella, Buford isn't misspelling words, He's being compassionate, and Ferb said Buford's right about something. How exactly does that not indicate the end of the world?
Buford: Is Baljeet dating Isabella?
Baljeet: Not funny.
Buford: Are you saying it's false?
Baljeet: … No …
Buford: So Ferb, you were saying?
Ferb: I was saying that Buford's right and I should just be happy for Phineas, not in mortal terror because he has a girlfriend. Oh and one more thing Phineas has no idea that I talked to everyone about this so if anyone asks, you didn't hear this from me.
Buford: Ya whatever.
Erick: Fine by me.
Django: Got it.
Baljeet: I need to tell Isabella.
Django: What?
Ferb: What?
Buford: We're trying to keep the world from ending nerd.
There was a long pause
Baljeet: Never mind, Erick just told me how much of a bad idea that was.
Ferb: Thank you Erick.
Erick: No problem.
At that moment Phineas walked into our room and told me it was my turn for a shower.
Ferb: Sorry I have to go, bye everyone.
(Ferb has signed out)
(Erick's POV)
(Phineas has signed in)
Phineas: Guys you will never believe what happened to me today.
I rolled my eyes realizing that Phineas was about to tell us the same story that Ferb had just told us.
Erick: What happened?
Phineas didn't skip on any details, he was thorough in his explanation on how his date with Rica went. Needles to say none of us wanted to hear it again.
Phineas: And that's what happened.
Erick: Good for you Phineas.
Baljeet: So when do you plan to tell Isabella? Or have you done that already?
I gave Baljeet a 'you didn't' look (Baljeet and I share a dorm room).
Phineas: Well I was hoping that she would be online today but she isn't so I don't know.
Django: I talked to Adyson earlier today, she said that they won't have internet until this Tuesday.
Phineas: Then it looks like I will have to wait until Tuesday to tell her.
Erick: She doesn't have a cell phone?
Phineas: Not that I know of.
Erick: Then it look's like you're going to have to wait until Tuesday.
Phineas: But I want to tell her now, I can just imagine the look on her face when she finds out that I got myself a girlfriend.
Buford: Oh, I'm sure it will be priceless.
Baljeet: Buford!
Phineas: Wait, what was that about?
Erick: It's not important Phineas.
Phineas: Okay, whatever. So, anyone else like to share in any good fortune?
Baljeet: Erick has a new girlfriend.
Erick: Kristen is not my girlfriend Baljeet.
Baljeet: Really? You two seem to be getting really close.
Buford: Erick's got a girlfriend?
I ran my fingers threw my hair and sighed.
Erick: No Buford, I don't have a girlfriend.
Baljeet: She's the smartest and hottest girl in our school and you don't like her?
Erick: I never said I don't like her but there is currently another girl that I want to get together with later.
Django: You mean Katie? I think I saw her hanging out with another boy today at lunch.
Phineas: I don't remember seeing that.
Django: It was before you got there. She was actually sitting with us when one of the guy's on the football team came up and asked her to sit with him and his group of friends.
I felt my heart sink
Erick: You said football player?
Django: Yeah but he wasn't that muscular but I heard that he's one of the fastest runners and a really nice guy.
My face hit the screen as I froze in terror.
Baljeet: Guys, Eick is not looking to good.
Buford: Dude, you okay?
Erick: I'm fine just … good for Katie.
Buford: Are you sure you're okay?
Erick: Look I need sleep so I will talk with you all about this later.
Django: Okay goodnight.
Phineas: See ya later.
(Erick has signed out)
Well the lack of reviews is … depressing, but the story is starting to undergo a major change from the first version so if please hold on to your seats.
R&R
