Here's chapter two all edited
Chapter 2: The Sleepover
Later, that evening, after
returning from the restaurant, the boys thought of playing "Make It, or Play It," and wondered what it would be like with more players. That's when they realized that maybe their friends, the Chipettes, would like to get involved, and asked Dave if they could have a sleepover with the Chipettes, and surprisingly, Dave allowed them to have one, due to all of their hard work, lately.
Alvin was the bravest, so he had to call the Chipettes, due to Theodore and Simon being too nervous to ask. He grabbed the phone, dialed the Miller's residence's number, and waited, patiently, for someone to answer. The phone rang about three times, before somebody answered; it was Brittany.
"Hello?"
"Hey, Britt. It's Alvin."
"Oh. Hi, Alvin."
"I was wondering if you might want to have a sleepover, because we came up with a new game, and want to have more players, to make it more interesting."
"I don't mind, but it's up to Miss Miller, not me."
"Okay. Ask her."
"Give me a second."
Brittany placed her hand over the speaker, and rushed off to ask Miss Miller for permission. Alvin tapped his foot on the floor, as he waited for Brittany's response. A couple minutes later, Brittany finally, responded.
"Miss Miller, says it's fine, so we'll gather our things, and be over in a little bit."
"Okay. See you when you get here."
"Bye."
"Bye."
Alvin hung up, and placed the phone back on the hook. Simon and Theodore were awaiting Alvin's response.
"So, are the Chipettes coming over, or not?" asked Simon.
"Yeah. They'll be over in a bit," replied Alvin.
"Yay! I'll go get everything ready!" said Theodore, excitedly.
"Wait for us," commanded Alvin, starting to follow Theodore to the bedroom.
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In the bedroom, the boys prepared everything for the game, because the Chipettes would be there, soon.
"Maybe, we can pretend to play bedsheet ghosts, and run around the room!" said Theodore, already pulling a blanket off of Alvin's bed.
Alvin, who was reading some type of book, spoke up.
"That would be fun, Theo. Maybe, after a game of, "Make It, or Play It," okay."
"Okay, Alvin."
Suddenly, the doorbell rang, meaning the Chipettes had arrived, so Alvin, Simon, and Theodore, rushed downstairs, to meet up with the Chipettes. In the doorway, stood female chipmunks, that cause the boys to get cold feet, every time they see them. All three of them gulped, but managed to welcome them into the house. The boys hadn't realized they were blushing, but so were the Chipettes, causing both trios to giggle.
Dave spoke up, since the boys were too stunned.
"Girls, welcome to our home."
"Thanks, Mr. Seville," said Jeanette, still a bit stunned.
"The boys' bedroom is upstairs, so allow me to take your things."
The boys interrupted, simultaneously.
"No, allow us, Dave."
Dave was stunned from the sudden objection, but managed to catch himself.
"Okay, okay," said Dave.
The boys grabbed the Chipettes' luggage, and carried it upstairs. The girls followed, as Dave told them to have fun.
In the bedroom, the boys sat the girls' luggage on the floor, and proceeded to playing their game.
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For about an hour, the six chipmunks played, "Make It, or Play It," which was a lot more fun with more players. Then, just as Alvin promised to Theodore, they pretended to be bedsheet ghosts for most of the remainder of the evening, until Brittany suggested truth or dare, which ended up in Alvin having to kiss Brittany, Jeanette confessing her feelings about Simon, and many more shenanigans. In a way, it was lot of fun.
After hours of fun, Dave came to the bedroom, and gave the command, that it was time for bed.
"Boys. Girls. It's time for bed."
All of the chipmunks complained, due to not even being tired, but what Dave said, goes, so the boys helped set out the girls' sleeping bags. Alvin and Brittany decided to share a sleeping bag, along with Simon and Jeanette sharing a sleeping bag, and Theodore and Eleanor sharing a sleeping bag, almost as if they were brother, and sister.
Alvin slid into the sleeping bag, next to Brittany, as did his brother's with Jeanette and Eleanor. Once everyone was in their sleeping bag, Dave turned off the light.
"Good night, boys, and girls"
"Good night, Dave," said the six chipmunk, in unison.
While everyone else went to sleep, Brittany lied, wide awake, thinking of Alvin kissing her, when they played truth or dare. The kiss almost seemed like a "real" kiss, not a childish kiss.
"Alvin, are you awake?" asked Brittany, nudging Alvin.
"Yeah," said Alvin. "Why?"
"I can't stop thinking about that kiss, when we played truth or dare. It almost seemed like you were enjoying it."
"I did, because... Alvin nearly choked. "I love you."
Brittany's heart jumped, not sure if she was dreaming, or if Alvin had just said what he said.
"What? Did I offend you?" asked Alvin.
"No. You don't know how long I've wanted to hear those words, because I have felt the same way, ever since the day we met. I love you, too, Alvin Seville!"
Alvin smiled, and started to run his fingers through Brittany's soft hair, starting to fall asleep. Brittany lied her head on Alvin's chest, and fell asleep.
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A strange noise woke Alvin up, hearing strange pounding just outside the bedroom door. Alvin wondered if he should've woke up the others, but the noises grew louder, and closer. Growing curious, Alvin grabbed a baseball bat, and slowly, approached the door. However, just as he went to open the door, something forced it open, causing Alvin to lose his footing, and drop the baseball bat.
Before he could even get a look at whatever had knocked the door down, he was grabbed by the collar of his pajamas, and shoved into a bag. Alvin attempted to break free, but it was no use, the inside of the bag was made of a strong material, so he just curled up into a ball, hoping that Dave, and the others, would be able to find him.
What's going to happen to Alvin? Read to find out who Alvin's kidnapper is. The 3rd chapter will be told in Alvin's point of view. Also if you have any ideas for this,, please tell me in a review. Anyways, please review, and the next chapter will be posted soon.