KOI MERA BHI HO
(Part 2)
Whole day team was busy in case proceeding…So much running, chasing and investigation make them so tired..At Evening they all met at Bureau with tired faces and minds…
Freddy (tired): Kal raat ka sara maaza ki kasar nikal dii ajj ka din naa tu.. Bura haal ho gaya baag baag ka aur case pher bhi solve nai hua…
Sachin: Solve tu choro..Jis clue ka peecha itni baag dor ki usska bhi koi fayada nahin hua.. Uper sa Doctor Salunkha..Una beech main chute kar ka jana par gaya.. Ab bechari Doctor Tarika akali kitna kar paten..Abi bhi report ready karna mein lagi hui hain..
Abhijeet: Haan Sachin..Abi tu jo hoga kal he hoga.. ACP sahab ayen tu tum sab Gher chala jayo..sab bht thak gaya ho…
Rajat: Aur sir app? App nai jayen gaa kye?
Abhijeet: Nai main soch raha hoon thora kaam kar lon bureau mein he..Pending hai..Kal tu pher case ka silsila mein baag dor hogi.. aik report ready karna hai muja..(looks at Daya) Daya tum chala jayo..main ACP sir ko bata donga.. Infact tum sab bhi jayo.. I m here.. All looks at him for a moment and then moves towards their home…where Daya stood up to move as..
Daya: Boss main yahen rukhta hoon naa tumara sath…Sath chalta hain...
ACP enters where Abhijeet replies to Daya as..
Abhijeet: Halat dhaki hai tum naa Apni..? jayo gher jayo..aur kuch kah ka rest karo..Main aye jayon ga abi thori dar mein…jayo..
ACP: Kye hua Abhijeet? (DUO Looks at ACP) Daya? Tum teak ho…kye hua tuma..Haan?
Abhijeet: Sir dakiya naa kitna thaka hua hai.. Aur pher bhi gher naa jana ki zid par arra para hai..app he boliya issay…
Daya: par Abhijeet
ACP (intrupts): Teak kah raha hai Abhijeet, Daya…(Daya looks at ACP with sad face) Infact tum do din gher par he raho aur rest karo.. Tuma rest ki bht zarorat hai..itna kaam kar ka aya ho..
Daya (try to protest): Sir plz sir..main gher par kye karon gaa?
ACP (ordering tone): kaha naa Rest karo gaa.. abi jayo neecha mera driver khara hai wo tuma gher chor daaga..Kud sa Drive kar ka jaana ki koi zarorat nai hai…
Daya (Again trying to protest): No sir..main kud… But he stops bcz ACP rises his hand in order to stop him..
ACP: Suna nai tum naa maine kye kaha..? Jayo.. Daya looks at Abhijeet who was only there like stranger and an obedient Officer with down head…Daya looks at ACP and after wishing him Good Night just moves out from the bureau completely…Where Abhijeet smiles at ACP..
Abhijeet: Thank you Sir…ager app nai ata tu abi tak tu main uss saa Gher jaana par behas he kar raha hota…
ACP smiles and patted on his cheek and Moves towards his cabin with..
ACP: Bechon ko dant kar he chup karya jaa sakta hai Abhijeet..Aur Daya ajj bhi aik beccha hi hai..yah tum he kahta hona?
Both enter inside ACP Cabin…
Abhijeet (smiles sweetly): Haan sir.. mera liya tu wo aik Becha he hai..(ACP looks at him, where Abhijeet added in caring tone) sach kahon tu sir.. Mera liya hi nai..Par Sach mein ajj tak usska ander aik becha hai.. Usski choti choti kuwaishen…choti choti si baton par kush ho jana bilkul bechon ka jasa..bari bari baten ignore kar dana aur zara si baat dil saa laga ka beth jana.. Sab bechon ka jasa he hai uss main… Malom hai sir..(looks at ACP with sad eyes) shyad usska bechpan adhora raha hai..Iss liya ajj bhi wo sab usska ander hai jo wo apna bechpan mein karna chata tha..yah jo becha karta hain…Bechpan ki Hasraten jo pori naa hui hoon..wo insan shyad Boorapa tak pori hona ki tamana rakhta hai… Aur main wo sab karna chata hon usska liya sir jo ..(little hesitate) Jo usska apna hota tu karta usska liya …(After few seconds) Shyad..Shyad naa bhi karta…Kyun ka Sab apna tu asa nai bhi karta naa sir…
ACP who was totally involved in his words replies him as...
ACP (absent mindly): Kabhi Kabi Apna bilkul Ankhon ka samna bhi hota hua kuch nai kar pata Abhijeet…Kuch bhi nai…Shyad wo majbor hota hain..Bht majbor…
Abhijeet (smiles): Nai Sir..Itna Majbor koi kabhi nai ho skata ka Apna Apno ko jutla daa..Unka liya kuch naa kar paya…kabhi nai..Ager wo asa hai..Tu pher Apna nai hai wo..Ussa Apna jasa shabad kahna ka bhi koi Haq nai hai Sir.. Sorry sir..par mera asa manana hai…
ACP looks at him in disbelief..
Abhijeet (jerking his head): Choriya sir..hum bhi najana kin baton mein lag gaya hain…Jin ka koi wajood he nai.. Main tu app sa case ka bara mein Discuss karna aya tha… And he starts telling ACP abt the case..where ACP was listening everything..but his mind was obviously somewhere else..Even his expressions were telling this..Ab tu sir jo hoga wo kal he hoga..Issi liya maine sab ko gher bej diya..bht thak gaya tha sab… He looks at ACP who was not replying to him.. SIR …? Still he found no reply.. SIR…? ACP looks at him with jerk..
ACP: Hmm…?hmm..kye kye hua?
Abhijeet (worried): Sir app..app na jawab nai diya..tu…
ACP (rubbed his forehead instantly): Haan..Haan Teak kiya..Asa karo ab tum bhi gher jayo..Daya wait kar raha hoga naa tumara.. thak gaya hoga tum bhi..Dhako uss naa bhi kuch khaya hai yah nai…
Abhijeet (nodded with): Jee sir..main jata hoon sir… He moves but stops and looks at ACP with..Sir App..app teak tu hain?
ACP (looks at him): Haan..main..main teak hoon..Abi yahen rukhon gaa thora kaam hai…tum jayo..
Abhijeet: Sorry sir..par muja app ki tabeat bhi kuch teak nai lag rahi..App bhi chaliya naa gher… thora rest kar lijiya gaa.. Kaam waam tu hota he raha gaa..
ACP (looks at him with love): Muja iss kaam mein he laga rahna do Abhijeet.. warna Shyad Apni iss Zindagii ko main Face nai kar payon gaa..
Abhijeet (confused): Jee Sir? Matlab?
ACP (smiles): Matlab yah Abhijeet ka tumara yah Boss ager Kaam he karta raha tu Teak rahta hai..Naa kaam kara tu usski tabeat kharab ho jati hai..Main teak hoon..tum pershan mat ho..abi thori dar mein chala jayon gaa..Tum gher jayo aur rest karo..Subha milta hain…
Abhijeet (nodded): Teak hai sir..Apna khyal rakiya gaa..Take care..Gud nite Sir..
ACP (with smile): Bye…And Abhijeet left the bureau…Where ACP was still looking at him moving…he took a deep breath and sat down on his chair relaxly..Attaches his head with head rest of Chair and closes his eyes…Few words revolving around his mind..
"Kye tumara jee nai chata ACP ka tumara bhi koi ho? Koi apna..?"
"kye iss raaz ko tum apna seena mein dafnaya he maar bhi jaana chata ho…?"
ACP took a Painful breath…
"Nai Sir… Itna Majbor koi kabhi nai ho skata ka Apna Apno ko jutla daa..Unka liya kuch naa kar paya…kabhi nai..Ager wo asa hai..Tu pher Apna nai hai wo..Ussa Apna jasa shabad kahna ka bhi koi Haq nai hai Sir..
ACP (painful tone): Yah tum naa muja kis kaam par laga diya hai Salunkhe..Kis kaam par.. ? (He opens his eyes with) Sach kaha tum na Abhijeet…Wajood he nai hai… kabi kabhi kssi cheez ka wajood hota hua bhi usska wajood naa hona he sahi hota hai..Bilkul sahi… (Tears appears in his eyes) nai Salunkhe..yah Rah mera liya nai hai..mera liya nai.. And after taking a deep breath once again he closes his eyes again..for how long he stays there like this he himself don't know…And After some more time he left the bureau by driving his car by himself…
DUO HOUSE:
Here Abhijeet reaches at home and found Daya is deep sleep..he checks him and then moves back in lounge..After relaxing sometime he moves and after getting fresh..He cooked some fresh food and starts taking it in lounge after switching ON the TV…when he hears some voice as..
Voice: Wah bae..Muja Kal ka kahna par Tarka kar kud fresh food…Very nice..Aur uper sa bulya bhi nai…?
A smile appears on Abhijeet's face..He does not bother to look at back but replies as..
Abhijeet: Muja kye zarorat thi Soota hua Shehr ko jagana ki..Malom tha chicken ki kushboo sohang kar kudi utth kar aye jaya ga…
After hearing this..Daya jumps into Sofa and Starts checking Meal as..
Daya: Jhoot mat bolo Boss…Akala akala he enjoy ho raha tha aur muja batana ka tumara koi irada nai tha.. hun… Abhijeet smiles and ruffles Daya's hairs with love…Un hun…mat karo..muja kahna tu kahna do..wah kye kushboo hai…
Abhijeet (still smiling at his younger bro): Tum itni jaldi jag jayo gaa maine socha nai tha…
Daya: Tum bhi itni jaldi gher aye kar Taza taza kahna bana kar kah loga (with stress) Akala Akala.. maine bhi yah socha nai tha Boss…
Abhijeet (smiles): Acha Acha bae..Ab mahfi mila gii bhi ka nai? Kahna kah tu raha hona Ab…Aur maine kon saa akala ka liya banya hai..Tera liya bhi tu banaya haina..Daya nodded and smiles..Abhijeet too starts taking his food..
Daya (while eating): Wasa Boss tum itni jaldi gher kasa aye gaya? Tum tu late ana wala tha naa thora..Pher? Kam nai kiya yah ACP sir naa gher bej diya?
Abhijeet: Bas kuch mood he nai hua..aur… And he stops while thinking something…
Daya (looks at him): Aur…? Tum ruk kyun gaya Boss? Bolo naa..Aur kye?
Abhijeet (looks at Daya): Pata nai yaar Kyun..Muja asa laga Ajj jasa ACP sahab..wo kuch teak nai hain..
Daya (looking worried): Kye hua Yaar? Sir ki tabeat tu teak haina? Tum rukh jata unka pas..
Abhijeet: haan yaar..Tabeat tu teak hai par…par..Yar muja asa laga jasa kuch hai jo wo kahna chata hain.. kuch ajeeb sa feel hua muja..unki baton saa..Andaz saa..Ajj Doctor sahab ka sath bhi muja feel hua jasa kuch garbar wali baat hui ho…Dono ka expressions kuch teak nai lag raha tha jab main Sir ko case ka batana gaya tu…Ho sakta hai ussi waja sa Sir kuch disturb tha..
Daya (making face): Tu aur kye Boss.. tum bhi aik baat ko laa kar itna koi serious ho jata ho jitni wo baat nai hoti… I thought najana ACP sir ko kye hua hai.. bemar tu nai par gaya…
Abhijeet (hitting on his head): Tum saa tu baat karna he bakar hai.. (little serious) Pata hai Daya..Ajj ACP sir ko dhak kar muja bara sad feel hua yaar… Jab uno na mujsa kaha gher ana ko..kyun ka tum mera intazar kar raha hoga… tu..
Daya (looks at him): Tu tuma bura laga yah soch kar ka ACP sir ka gher par unka koi wait nai kar raha hoga..issi liya wo wahen bureau mein ruk gaya..haina?
Abhijeet (nodded): Haan..un sa maine bola bhi gher jana ko..par wo kahna laga ka kam main he busy rahon tu acha hai mera liya...(looks at Daya) Aur Sirf yahi nai Daya.. Zindagii ka har mor par huma humari zara zara sii baat karna ka liya koi nai koi chiya hota hai yaar.. Soch ager meri zindagii mein tu naa hota yah Teri mein Main? Tu humari zindagii bhi koi zindagii hoti? Yah Job..jeena..sab kitna bamayini hota? Par ACP sir..Unki itni age ho gayi ha ab..Unki life main tu asa koi bhi nai hai yar… Wo kuch kahta nai..Strong dikhta hain..par una bhi tu yah kami mehsos hoti hogi naa? Unka bhi tu dil karta hoga ka unka koi apna ho? Jo unka khyal kara..jis saa wo sab share Karen…unka dukh sukh..jo un par unka kaha bina apna Haq jata saka…
Daya (stood up after taking meal): Haan yaar karta hoga..Zaroor karta hoga..Par ab..kuch chah lana saa wasa ho tu nai sakta naa.. (looks at Sad Abhijeet) wasa aik idea hai..(Abhijeet looks at him with hope) kyun naa..Kyun naa hum..(Naughtily) ACP sir ki shadi karwa daan..Kitna maaza aya gaa..
Abhijeet (patted on his head): Hey Bagwaan.. (Daya starts laughing) achi khasi baat bigarna koi tum saa seeka Daya..(he stood up to move in kitchen to wash plates n dishes, Daya was already there making tea) karna subha ACP sir saa baat…
Daya (laughs): kye boss marwayo gaa..
Abhijeet (naughtily): Kyun..? ab dar gaya..bae kah dana sir main App ka Beta hoon..aur iss naata muja yah sab sochna ka Haq hai…
Daya (laughs madly): Aur Ager wo sach mein Mera Baap ban kar meri pitatie karna laga sab ka samna tu main kye karon gaa Boss..? Tum bechyo gaa muja kye tab?
Abhijeet: kyun nai kyun nai…Yaar ki kushi main humari kushi…
Daya (looks at Abhijeet): Boss…Beta tu tum bhi hona unka..(Abhijeet looks at him) Tum karna naa unsa baat..Wasa bhi tuma he bht fikar bhi ho rahi hai sir ki…
Abhijeet (serious): Wasa ACP sir ko kabi khyal nai aya iss bara mein..warna Nakul ka jana ka bad tu (Daya feels sad) Yaar..Una Nakul ki bht yaad ati hogi naa..akher ko unka Beta tha wo.. Ager ajj woi hota tu…Sach main yaar..ACP sir ko yun akala dhak kar bara dukh hota ha Kabhi kabhi…jasa ajj…
Daya (feeling sad too): Haan yaar..ab huma lakh wo Beta manen..Par hum unka Beta hain tu nai naa..aik beta ka jasa naa haq jata sakta hain..naa unka liya kuch kar sakta hain…
Abhijeet (wd feel): Kash sach mein unka Beta ban pata..Unka liya kuch kar pata yaar…
Daya feels sad abt his brother.. He moves towards him and presses his shoulder..
Daya: Boss..(Abhijeet looks at him) tuma bht fikar ho rahi haina sir ki..
Abhijeet(nodded sadly) : Pata nai kyun yaar ajj unki baton sa laga muja jasa woh Dukhi hain..main chata nai tha una Akala chor ka asa ana..par kye karta…?
Daya: aik kam karo..Salunkhe sahab ko call kar ka unka pas bej do.. una company tu mil jaya ge at least…
Abhijeet: Kye yah teak raha gaa? Daya Nodded…
Here ACP reaches at Hospital..and after taking a sigh moves towards reception..After few mins wait he moves towards Doctor cabin who was waiting for him…
Doctor (shaking hand): Aiya ACP sahab…kasi tabeat hai app ki?
ACP (smiles): I m totally Fit…look at me… lagta hai ka kal raat ko asi wasi halat thi meri?
Doctor (smiles with): jee nai.. App Officer log bht mazboot hota ho yah tu suna tha kal dhak bhi liya..jis taran app zaberdasti discharge laa kar gaya apni Duty ka liya…(ACP embarrassed) Par..Par abi thori Care karna para gii app ko sir..(ACP looks at him) Kuch duties app ko dosron ka saron par bhi chorna paren gii abi… U knw yah pehli baar nai hai ka app ko asi takleef hui hai…
ACP (taking deep breath): jee (nodded in yes) sahi kaha app na doctor.. well..Kye aya Reports main?
Doctor (serious): App ki kuch reports he ayien hain abi…ACP sahab..(ACP looks at him) Ager mera andaza sahi hai tu..Tu I think app ka heart ka valves band hai…aur jahen tak muja lagta hai..Mera yah andaza sirf andaza nai..balka haqeeqat hai sir…
Few mins silence was there in the small room…
ACP (he looks at Doctor and asked in straight tone) Kye CID sa isteefa da doon main?
Doctor (stood up n moves towards ACP): Look Sir..CID ka kye criteria hai iss sab matters ko laa kar wo sab tu main nai janta..wo app ki bemari ki basis par app ko chutien dana ko kahen gaa yah under ground Karen gaa yah nikal danga..I don't know..aur naa he yah koi itni bari baat hai.. I mean ho bhi sakti hai aur nai bhi...aya din log apna heart ka asa operation karwata rahta hain..Teak bhi ho jata hain..Wapis bhi operation karwana parta hai..aur…
ACP (looks at him in smile): Aur uper wala ka darshen karna bhi chala jata hain…(Doctor quite) Meri sabi reports nai ayien abi tak tu app mera bara mein nai kah sakta ka kitna bara problem hai..Right doctor?
Doctor (starts looking downward): U know what ACP sahab.. app ka problem bara nai hai..(with confidence) aur yah main app ki Health ko dhak kar app ko abi issi waqt bata sakta hoon..Lakien..(ACP looks at him) Kal raat app ko attack ata ata becha hai..Yah baat app achi taran saa jaan lan…(ACP nodded) Ab app ko proper care karna hogi apni.. App ko ksi apna ki zarorat hai iss waqt..jo app ka khyal rak saka…
ACP (looks at him for a moment n then added): Par mera koi nai hai…Main kud he hoon apni care karna ka liya…App wo sab choriya Doctor..muja yah batiya ka kye karna hai muja ab?
Doctor (happy tone): Apna khyal rakhna hai….kush rahna hai.. aur treatment is first…plz sir…
ACP nodded and Stood up.. he moves with…
ACP: App ki dii huien medicines tu lana start kar di hain maine..Un saa kafi bechani si hai..Par yah side effects main hai tu main gabrya nahin.. aur rahi baat kush rahna ki tu…I will try doctor.. And his tongue stops with a shock..Bcz now he can see his friend standing just behind him..and he was unaware of his presence till now.. Salunkhe? Tu..yahen kye kar raha hai…kab sa? He looks at back towards Doctor with shock..whoes head was already down..
Doctor: Sorry Sir..par app ka doctor hona ka nata muja app ka bare mein app ka kssi apna sa discuss karna tha..yah zaroori tha..So maine Doctor sahab ko sab bata diya hai..wo aik doctor bhi hain tu app ka betar khyal rak saken gaa..
ACP (looks at him angrily): Maine app ko mana kiya tha kssi sa kuch bhi kahna sa Doctor..par app na..Bata tu pehla he sab chukka hain app..Ab isay yahen bhi bula liya..asa kush rakhen gaa app muja? Asa treat Karen gaa? And he left the cabin immediately…
Salunkhe (looks at Doctor): Don't worry I will handle it…App na kuch galat nai kiya hai.. Doctor nodded assuringly and Salunkhe moves behind ACP in hurry..who was in corridor..ACP…? ACP meri baat tu suno tum…ACP…? Yaar…He moves forward and Holds ACP's hand…yaar baat tu sun…
ACP (looks at him angrily): Kye zaroorat thi ussa tuma batana ki..Kitna mana kiya tha maine..Par nai..bata diya..sab kuch…ab tu jaa kar dandora peet da bureau mein taa ka sab ko pata chal jaya... bas…
Salunkhe: Main asa kyun karon gaa..Kyun batyon gaa sab ko…
ACP: Tu aur kon kara gaa? Haan? Tu naa he Doctor ko kaha naa wo KUSHI…APNON ka lecture dana ka liya muja?
Salunkhe (angry tone): Tu kye galat kaha uss naa? Haan? Kye galat kaha..? Kyun apni kushiyon saa baag raha ho tum? Ab inn sab ka waqt nai hai..Borha ho gaya ho tum..Borha..(ACP looks at him angrily) haan yah sach hai.. Bemari peecha par gayi hai.. Kaam asa hai ka zindagii mout ka kuch ata pata nai..pher bhi tum bagta pher raha ho..Aur kyun nai batana chata ho tum sab ko haan? Kyun ka usay pata chal jaya gaa sab..wo pershan hoga issi liya? Tu usska haq hai tum par Boss… BAAP ho tum usska…kab tak chupyo gaa yah sab…?haan ? kab tak?
ACP (looks at him wd harsh eyes): Marta dum tak..smjha…(Salunkhe shocked, while ACP added in much strong tone ever) Marta dum tak… After few secons..Jin kushiyon ki baat tun yun achanak sa karna lag para haina salunkhe..un kushiyon saa kssi ko koi kushi nai milna wali..Koi kushi nai…Par tu yah nai smaj sakta…Nai.. kabhi nai… (hurt tone) tuja meri parwah haina bas… (really trying to compose but failed) Par muja uss..usski..parwa bhi hai… I can't give him any Pain…u know why…(Starts taking back steps with tears) bcz.. bcz….he stops and closes his teary eyes with great pain…
Salunkhe (in pain): Bcz HE IS UR SON ACP PRADYUMAN...Tears rolls down from ACP's cheeks..He opens his eyes wd great shock..and looks at his buddy..who was there in front of his eyes..ACP moves back instantly to move when he hears…Tera liya naa sahi yaar..par kam sa kam itna tu soch.. ka Rukmani bhabi ko kye jawab daa gaa tu…? ACP freezed at his place…kye wo tujsa sawal nai Karen gii ka unka dono beton ko khyal kyun nai rakh paya tum? Nakul tu raha..raha nai…par kye ussay apna PITA kaa NAAM tak ka haq hasil nahin hai jo har pal tumari nazron ka samna hai? (nodded head in NO with pain) Tum itna khator tu nai ho sakta Pradyuman… (teary and hurtful tone) Mer dost …jisa main janta hoon wo itna Pather dil tu nai hai…nai hai wo…
And he left the place..leaving ACP with his pain..thoughts and feelings…
AUTHOR's NOTE:
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