I have a little surprise for everyone that reads this fanfiction. So really, I'm just talking to Andre. I'm having a very hard time concentrating on this. I've restarted the next chapter like 4 times already because I keep losing focus. The thing is, I really want to try writing a Naruto fanfic. I'll still work on this, but just not for awhile. Anyways, I thought I'd give you a sneak peak of it. BTW, some of the lines are likely to change. Mostly it's just ideas for quotes.
New Characters
"Shinken, don't forget to eat your breakfast. You want to be at your top physical condition when you meet your sensei", an old woman with stunning red eyes calls out. A teenage girl with similar eyes enters the room and sits down at the kitchen table.
"Thanks for reminding me grandma" the girl said as she began to eat.
A young ninja stared at the sensei. The older man's features were masked by the shadows of the tree at night. "The signs around you are seals", the sensei said in a deep voice. "You will hate the seals at first, but you will learn to live with them and they will make you stronger", explained the sensei
"I accept, I'll take the seals", the young ninja said. He held out his arms.
"I hope you have a high tolerance for pain", the sensei said.
A ninja with short spiky brown hair stood up on a rock. "I'm the greatest ninja to come out of the Village Hidden in the plains. And I'll prove it someday", he shouted. The girl with red eyes smiled up at him. Next to her stood a blonde boy with a less-than-impressed look on his face.
A young boy with a scared look on his face quickly goes from fearful to angry. The boy transforms into a bear and roars. He swings his claws at another boy who quickly dodges the attack by jumping backward.
Another young ninja dressed in strange, almost tribal, clothes with long, spiky red hair and golden locks leaps high into the air and does a mid-air attack on another ninja.
A larger, round ninja jumps into the air and stomps on the ground, sending out a seismic shockwave.
A girl with a malicious grin on her face holds her hand up to reveal a kunai sticking out of it and blood gushing from the wound. "You've never witnessed jutsu quite like mine", she said excitedly.
"You see those three ninja", a boy said nervously pointing to three teenagers dressed in black standing together at a distance. "They're the only three ninja to ever come out of the Village Hidden in the Swamps".
New Justus
The girl with the kunai in her hand grinned and charged at another ninja. "Ninja Art: Blood Saber Jutsu", she cried. The blood dripping from her hand formed into a red, liquid long sword.
The boy with blonde hair stood his ground against a charging enemy. "Reversal Force", he shouted. The enemy slammed into the blonde boy's hands and flew backward.
A boy with long, dark hair and lavender eyes held his hand out as chakra began to spin rapidly in it. Spinning around the chakra were snow crystals. The boy began charging. "Ice Release: Rasengan", he roared.
A man with a spiky red Mohawk raised a fistful of chakra above his head and opened his hand. "Fire Release: Dragon of Despair", he shouted as a ghostly flaming dragon shout from his palm.
One of the ninja from the Village in the Swamps narrowed his eyes and held up a hand sign. "Darkness Release: Shadow Shield Jutsu" he muttered. His shadow reached off the ground, just in time to stop the attack from connecting with him.
New Problems
"There is a ninja out there traveling the land and killing other ninja so he can use their jutsu", an older ninja said to a group of children
"A member of one of the greatest ninja clans has defected. There has been a flee-on-sight issue warranted because of her", reports an official to the girl with red eyes and the boy with spiky brown hair.
"The five phantoms are not just myths, they are real ninjas. And it's impossible to get anywhere near them undetected", says a sensei with bandages over his eyes and dark sunglasses over the bandages.
"How can we stop him? He has a limitless supply of chakra and he enjoys pain. HE'S UNSTOPPABLE!!", the ninja from the Village in the Swamps shouted.
"Those curse marks on his body practically keep him from being human", the girl from the Swamp Village explains to the girl with red eyes. The two of them sit in a meadow by river
"He…he put a curse on my Sharingan".
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!. MY EYES!! You bastard. AHH!!", shouts the ninja with long hair and lavender eyes. He held his bleeding face.
"With wounds like those…he'll never be able to use the Byakugan again".
The first Naruto fic by Lord Nysakeo: Endless Dark
