True Jinchuriki

Training

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, if I did this wouldn't count as a fanfic. I do however own my mind and as such my intellectual property includes the events that happen in this fanfic, unless they also happened in the original anime or manga. If you sue me I will simply show this disclaimer.

I am proud to say that my other fanfic has started, that is to say the first page is up. I asked some time ago whether I should actually write this idea down and I got an overwhelming response that I should, that is to say that I got five reviews that I should and no one said no.

Please read it and tell me whether I should continue it, so far almost no one has reviewed for it. If I don't get at least ten reviews that say that I should continue I will not continue.

I apologize for my lateness at updating this story; it was caused by a combination of several factors.

-school

-One of the world's most powerful writers-blocks

-and finally my chronic laziness.

I apologize but that doesn't change the fact that all my ideas are after the chunin exams, most are for after the Uchiha retrieval mission.

Now I ask that you not get angry at my lateness, it's here now.

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"Oy, Kakashi-sensei, do you have any plans for this next month regarding our training?"

"Well, actually…I'm training Sasuke, he has to fight Gaara in the first match and he'll need all the help he can get."

"Alright, I suppose I can always go train with Zabuza and Haku, I'll see you in a month then."

"Bye" with those words the one eyed jounin was gone, vanished without a trace.

Across the large room, two women with red markings on their cheeks and messy hair were laughing their heads off at a boy with the same marks and messy hair.

"Five minutes," the older of the two howled, "you lasted for two minutes of being beaten with a newspaper!"

The younger one was just as loud, "bad dog!" managed to wheeze between laughs.

Naruto grinned, "they already sing of my accomplishments, and I'm not even dead yet."

He turned and began to walk towards his allies.

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"Three main courses eight appetizers and two deserts, where does he store it all," muttered a disgruntled (and broke) Zabuza Momochi.

"his metabolism is higher because of his superior regeneration rate, and he is getting into his teen years. Just wait until he's sixteen, he'll never stop eating."

The big man chuckled slightly as he looked at his limp wallet, "but who would have thought that, that Yugito girl would have an appetite to match, I just hope that we won't have to deal with too many other people with that kind of appetites in the future."

(Let's not ruin his delusional dreams shall we)

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Naruto was walking down the street aimlessly, he had decided a long time ago that his organization would have to take missions to fund its self, but now Zabuza and Haku were both on missions leaving him with no one to train with.

Yugito had just gotten out of the hospital and was still in no condition to train with him, instead she had chosen to run off to go shopping in town because all her cloths were ether still in Kumogakure no sato or badly burnt in their battle, leaving her to wear some of Haku's clothing…it fit her quite well actually.

He snickered at the memory, Yugito had at first refused to wear them because she said they were to "girly". Haku had not argued the point though Naruto and Zabuza hadn't stopped laughing at him for days.

"Maybe that's why he left," Naruto muttered as he walked down the street.

"Why?"

"GAH!"

"Yo, Naru-kun," somehow Yugito had managed to sneak up directly beside him.

"I laughed at Haku for being girly and now he's gone on a mission and I have nothing to do."

"Oh…you could walk with me to the hot springs."

"Why?"

"Because you have nothing better to do anyways, and it'll give us a chance to get to know each other better."

"You do know that the Onsen is divided between men and women, right," he deadpanned.

"Just walk with me until we get there."

"Alright, I don't have anything better to do."

The next few minutes were spent comparing traumatic childhood experiences. As they arrived at their destinations they separated and Yugito went into the bathhouse while Naruto just decided to wander around aimlessly for a while.

Then he heard it…

…Quiet, perverted, giggling.

He quickly changed his path and headed towards the source of the sound.

An old man with long white hair and an odd outfit that resembled a samurai with really bad taste in colors sat peeping through a hole in the wall.

The wall that concealed the women's side of the Onsen…the side Yugito-Chan was on…

He considered the situation for a moment and decided…to wing it.

"Hey you, creepy old pervert, what do you think you're doing."

Subtle he was not.

The old man never looked away from the peephole as he did three hand signs and slammed his hand into the ground.

As the smoke cleared Naruto saw two things: one, he hadn't taken his eyes away from the hole; two, he was sitting on the back of a very big toad.

The toad's tongue lashed out at the blond jinchuriki. As the appendage came near, he quickly moved his leg in such a way as to catch the tongue under it and pin it in place with his heal.

The toad pulled on its tongue but it was held in place by the boy's foot. Finally he let go and the tongue flew back into the toad's mouth so fast that it managed to whip the man on its back quite hard and make him fall off.

"Hey brat hasn't your mother ever taught you to respect your elders?"

"I'm an orphan."

"…"

"…"

"…"

"My friend is in there, if you peep on her I will rip out your spleen."

"Don't you know who I am?" he yelled at the blond.

"Does it matter?"

"I am Myouboku Mountain's Monk of the Frog Spirits. Also known as the Frog Hermit. I am the man who holds no enemies in the North, South, East and West! Not even in the heavens! I am one of the sannin, the white haired frog tamer, even a crying baby would stare in aw…the great Jiraiya!"

"you are also a pervert who decided to peep on a girl who happens to be quite close to me, therefore I feel that it is my obligation to severely injure you…also I'm board."

"I'll have you know that I am not a pervert!"

"Oh?"

"I am a SUPER PERVERT"

"I see, you say that your name is Jiraiya, hmm, my father was trained by someone named Jiraiya…that wouldn't be you would it?"

I don't train people, the only man I trained was…" his eyes grew wide in realization, "the Youndaime Hokage."

"Namikaze Minato, my father. I'm taking the chunin exams right now and even though I'm probably good enough to beat anyone there…it's best not to be overconfident, some extra training wouldn't hurt. Train me old man, you must know some good moves at your age."

"No, I don't train brats, no matter who your father was, and I'm not old…just experienced."

"If I beat you in a battle would you help me train?"

"Hah! You beat me? That won't happen in a million years! Fine if you beat me then I will teach you what I can to help you get stronger."

"Deal! There are no rules any weapons or tools can be used the battle is till first blood."

"Fine."

The boy grinned evilly, "Hey ladies there's an old man peeping on the bath house!" he then quickly did a hand sign and vanished into the rolling mist that came out of no where.

The super pervert's eyes grew wide as he realized what was about to happen, he was standing outside a women's bath, alone, where a pervert had been spotted, and the bath was full of Kunoichi…oh this was going to hurt.

He was right, the violent beating that followed was not for the faint of heart…or for the weak of stomach…or for those who are male…or human…you get the idea.

The only thing that saved the poor man was his mighty hair cacoon and precise aplication of chakra to block the 'strongest' attacks.

As the hord retreated back behind the wall, one woman was left standing alone over the elderly pervert, she looked around thoughtfully, then sniffed the air.

Jiraiya felt like he had gone to heaven, this girl with long blond hair and exotic, slanted, catlike eyes stood over him clad only in a pale violet towel.

"naruto-kun, what are you doing? And who is the old man?"

The mist drifted away, revieling the blond boy sitting only five meters away with a grinn on his face as he leaned on a tree.

"the old pervert is a famous ninja from the shinobi wars, I bet him that if I could beat him then he would have to help me train for the chunin exam. By the way, he's looking up your towel." He said matter of factly.

She froze and lookid down, then lifted fer foot of the ground and caused it to burst into flames. The old man's eyes widened just beffore the flamming foot smashed into his nose.

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after a trip to the hospital to have his nose repared and some burn creem aplied to his face the old pervert stood direct in front of the young blond boy.

"that was cheeting brat."

"that was the way of the ninja Ero-sennin. A ninja uses everything at his disposal, every advantage, every dirty trick and every weapon."

He was impressed, few genin these days understood that fact, most were more similar to samurai wariors than ninja assassins.

"you didn't make me bleed, therefore you failed."

"I see," his hand shot forward and sudenly the old manhad a small cut on his cheek, "how about now?"

"chakra blades, you are surprisingly skilled with them for a genin. I don't see why you want addisional training if you can atack with unseen weapons like that."

My first oponent is the genius of the hyuuga branch house. Chakra blades won't be enough and it is always a good idea to improve ones repertoir of skills."

"you are verry well spoken for a twelve year old."

"I have a demon in my stomach, I was forced to raise myself because the villagers hate me. My only friend untill I was eight was an old polititian, also known as the proffesor, how else would I speak."

"good point…well I supose that I can teach you what I can, your father would want me too." He said thoughtfully, the serious expression ruined by his swolen nose.

"great! What are you going to teach me?"

"do you know water walking?"

"yes."

"hmm, alright how about summoning?"

"you can teach me?"

"sure, first thing you will need is a summoning contract."

"Oh, a;right." He began to pull up the short sleave of his shirt, bearing his left shoulder and some kind of seal on it."

"what are you doing?"

"hmm? Oh I have this storage seal tatoed on my shoulder so that I can carry my most important posesions with me at all times without them being solen or slwoing me down."

"wait you have a summoning scroll but you can't summon yet?"

"yup, I got given a B-rank mision to get some archeologists into an ancient tomb past a bunch of death traps. After I got through I asked them to pay me with the scroll I found inside instead of money."

"oh, and the village council alowed this?"

the boy grinned in a maniacal way, "they don't know, I didn't tell anyone except for those who work for me, like Yugito-chan and Zabuza-san."

"wait, Momoshi Zabuza, the demon of the bloody mist?"

"yeah, him and his aprentice haku were the first people to join my organization, they are doing missions that I got through the hokage for them. They will be back in about a week."

"right…" theis brat is impressive, minato you would be proud, "well anyways, you should sign the contract in blood and place a handprint."

Naruto did just that and looked up at the man for further instruction, only to see him staring wide eyed at the contract in his hands.

He muttered something

"what was that Ero-sennin?"

"don't call me that," he snapped, " that contract, I thought it was just a myth. How did you get those arciologists into giving it to them?"

"I let them take some photographs of it and promised not to rat them out for lying about how hard the mission realy was and I stopped the Nikenin that came for the items they took from it."

"right…well…lets try it out, now here are the hand signs for a summoning jutsu, if the summon boss likes you he will show you how to get easyer summoning of that clan specifically. Now comon try it."

The boy grinned than did the hand signs and forced a large amount of chakra into the jutsu, enough for at least fiftry Kage Boushin. There was a burst of smoke…a loud bang…and a roar.

When the smoke cleared, there in front of him was a slim serpentine form covered in fine silver scaled with small horns rising from it's head and a set of talloned limbs with four fingers on each limb.

However there was a snag…it was only half a meter long.

The old man burst out laughing, "that is all you sumoned, it's puny!"

Naruto however was looking down at the dragon with a thoughtfull expresion and quietly muttering to himself, "hmm, if the size of the dragon is directly proportional to the amount of chakra I use then a dragon large enough to be of serious help in battle would take a massive amount of chakra, however if there is a minimum amoount of chakra for the summoning itself and then a adisional chakra cost for the size…hmm, lets try it out."

Gathering roughly twice the chakra he had previously used he begun the technique again, Kuchiyose no jutsu!

As the massive amount of smoke cleared he was graced with the sight of a great crimson dragon with a golden mane of hair and long wiskers that trailed behind him, one on each side of his face. The massive dragon was of reagal bearing and had piercing, golden eyes with red flecs. Compared to the previous summon this one was huge, from tail to nose he was most likely twenty meters in length at the very least, to add the the effect he had great black tallons and single katana at his side, connected to a leather belt that was wrapped just a meter ubove his rear limbs.

As the old man stopped laughing and stared in aw at the magnificent beast, naruto was deap in though, "so it was the second option after all, or maybe there is some kind of weird fomula that measures it. I guess I'll have to ask Saru-ji about it."

"are you ignoring me you little brat! I am Enkomaru! The mighty warior dragon of flames, an unstopable warrior who breaths flames so hot that they can melt steal!"

"hmm, sory about that, I'm trying to figure out how this summoning jutsu works, like how much chakra it takes to summon a dragon that can actualy fight." Naruto explained, "i'm just using this contract for the first time and you are the second dragon I was able to summon."

"second? Who else is here?" he looked around untill he noticed the little silver hatchling near naruto's leg, "oh, tiny little guy, hard to believe I was ever that small."

"stop talking like an old man, you are not even all that great, I bet you aren't even anything more that an average warrior summon."

"I'll have you know brat that I happen to be a fire speacialist."

"don't all dragons breath fire?"

"No they don't, some breath lightning, or ice or even acid. However that's not the point, I don't just breath fire, I can comand fire, I am a Karyuu who has speacialy trained in katon ninjutsu."

"oh, cool…"

this was the beginning of a long descution that lasted close to an hour. The next day naruto proceaded to sumon the same dragon again and spent the entire day talking to him, this happened again of the third day…and the fourth day…and the fith.

After a week of naruto sumoning the same dragon again and again, the old man decided that it was time to force his new student into summoning something bigger…and that is how we arive at this point.

"he pushed me down a cliff…he actualy pushed me down a cliff."

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great place to end isn't it,

however out of kindness (read as guilt for making you all wait so long) I will continue.

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all was quiet, as he lay on the stone floor.

Sudenly the silence was broken by a mighty cry of rage!

His eyes shot open, he lay on the top of a massive Zugurat (a kind of stepped piramid primarily found in messopotamia).

All around the piramid was a dense green forest with spires o stone rising ubove the trees in various places, and a deep blue lake lay only a short way from the piramid with thin streams and rivers winding their way out of it. ubove him was the sky, a beutifull blue expanse of saphire coloured velvet.

However now the sky was covered in masive storm clouds with bolts of firy lightning jumping around them, striking the ground in various places, the water of the lake was covered in wirlpools and the waters seemed to buble with rage, the forest was filled with the cries of some strange beasts that had yet to show themselves.

He turned and spoke to the masive bieng behind him, "calm down kit, calm down and focus. What's wrong now?"

He finaly opened his eyes and looked upon the man in front of him, a man of great stature and strength. He wore a set of samurai armor with no helm, yet his body was covered in scars and still open gashes, the most intimidating thing about him however was his face. Between the furious eyes of a deadly predator was a single, glowing blue eye. He roared again and the cage of flames burned higher than before as it reacted to his rage.

"HE THREW ME OFF A CLIFF! THAT DAMNED JACKASS PUSHED ME OFF A CLIFF!"

"so?"

"what do you mean 'so", I asked him to train me and he pushes me off a cliff!"

"why did he do that?"

"well…we were practicing the Kutchiyose no jutsu, I guess that he got anoyed that I kept summoning the same dragon."

"righ, he probobly decided that you had reached a block in your path and wanted to force youu to use more chakra to summon something bigger."

"righ, that makes sense," the scared warrior shrank down into a blond boy with messy hair, "then maybe i should give him what he wants," he grinned maniacly.

"now you're thinking like a fox."

They both grinned evily, then looked eachother in the eyes, "time to show him what it means to anger a demon container." They both said at once.

The massive fox standing on the top of the piramid surounded bya ring of flames raised his nine tails, his body began to glow with firy light as the ligtning in the clouds grew wilder and turned red and the bolts began to strike everywhere. The waters of the lake began to boil and a masive waterspout rose towards the sky as bolts of ligtning met it as it rose.

In the outside world the falling boy opened his glowing red eyes and began the handsigns and gathering chakra.

All around the village ninja raised their heads at the intense chakra that was gathering not far away. The hokage chuckled, "looks like you made a serious mistake jiraiya."

Many people froze n place and looked northeast at the masive pillar of smoke that rose and then vanished as an imesurably long serpentine form rose into the air.

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the massive dragon with shining platinum scales and a mane of long golden hair. It had long wiskers on its uper jaw and four short ones on its chin.

It's body was at least two hundred meters long with it's body coiling in various places so as to decrease the area that it covered and in it's right hand it caried a naginata as tall as some of konoha's trees (have you seen those things! They are huge!).

"WHO DARES OT SUMMON RYUUJIN, KING OF THE MIGHTY DRAGON CLAN!"

"I'm up here," naruto called from the dragon's head.

"I know, but I still want to know who you are."

"oh, right…I am Namikaze Uzumaki Naruto, champion of the opressed, the mighty one man army and keeper of the kyuubi no kitsune also known as Shinkukaen no Naruto, son of the youndaime hokage of Konohagakure no sato in Hi no kuni." (vilage of the hidden leaf in fire country)

"and I am Ryuujin! King of the dragons and once worshipped as a god by humans several thousand years ago. It has been a long time since anyone signed the dragon contract let alone summoned me. The fact that you are still standing is a testament to your strength, however… WHY DID YOU SUMMON ME IN A RAVIENE, I SHOULD EAT YOU ALIVE FOR SUCH AN INSULT!"

"let me tell you a story about my curent sensei, and his training meathods…" the great dragon king looked curiously at the evil gleem in his summoner's eye.

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yup, you guessed it, jiraiya is doomed to a very humiliating and painfull beating.

On an interesting note, I just discovered through my reading of the manga that jiraiya is actualy the strongest of the densetsu no sanin…yes stronger than orochimaru.

Orochimaru is imortal and imoral however jiraiya is actualy realy powerfull on his own, thanks to his sage mode.

Itachi actualy said that the only way for him and Kisame to defeat him they would have to lay down their lives, while he was able to kick orochimaru's ass into the stratasphere.

Also the most powerfull doujutsu in the world is the rinnegan (or somethig like that) and alows the user to use all SIX chakra types…and yet kakashi said that there are only five, maybe one is so rare that it is not even mentioned by most.

Well it also apears that everyone who jiraiya trains turns out as a supperpowered freek.

The akatsuki leader

The youndaime hokage

Konan of akatsuki

And naruto…if you think he isn't supperpowered check out his fujin Rasen shuriken technique (which translates roughly as 'wind god spiraling throwing star'.)

Yeah…well I'm not going to ruin the plot anymore so yeah…

Remember to check my other story an dtell me what you think in the reviews so that I will continue it.