A/N: Ok! I think this is my longest chapter yet and it gets dramatic!! Uh oh!! :D The first thing I wrote I got the idea from 'bookandsyrupinducedcoma' who is totally amazing and helped me with this chapter :D but I don't know if the thing at the beginning makes sense, it was just really funny to me when I read it in my reviews (which i love very very much thank you!! especially from bookandsyrupinducedcoma :D) ok so enjoy!!
Edward looked at me and said, "Bella, I have something very important to tell you…"
"Dang it!" I yelled
"What?" He asked.
"You're gay aren't you?"
"No…I'm the Prince of England."
"Yep, you're gay." Him being gay, made more sense than being the prince of England, even with all those people screaming 'Prince Edward Prince Edward!'
"Edward! Bella! Let's go, follow me!" Mr. Pierce had run up to us and pulled us away from the paparazzi. Edward had a hold on my arms as we ran back to the school. Everything was happening so fast I couldn't comprehend what was going on.
I was breathing heavy because of how fast we were running. "Ed..Edward…what is…going on?" I tried to say in between breaths.
When we reached the inside of the school he grabbed both of my arms and pulled me in front of him. "Bella, I promise I'll tell you everything." then he let out a laugh "and I'm not gay."
Mr. Pierce cleared his throat. "Edward, Niles will take Bella back to her room. You're father is here."
Edward didn't say anything, he just nodded his head. Before he turned around to leave his kissed me on top of my head. Niles walked up from behind us. "Miss Swan. How are you this evening?" He had strange happy sound to his voice. I didn't answer I just looked at him.
When Edward turned and walked away with Mr. Pierce, Mr. Niles walked in front of me. "Ahem, I better get you to your room." I just followed behind him.
On the way up I was still shaken and confused of what just happened. I heard the yells of the paparazzi in my head as they screamed Prince Edward, and another girl's name…Tanya I think. Who is Tanya? And is Edward really a…a prince?
"Mr. Niles, is Edward really a prince?" I asked in a soft quiet voice.
"Well. I think it would be best if he explained it to you." He opened my door and let me inside. "I'll be right out here watching the door if you need anything."
Edward's POV:
I can't believe she found out this way. I'm such a jerk!! Dang it.
I walked in with Pierce to see my mom and dad sitting on the leather coach in Mr. Pierce's office. I could feel my dad's unhappy eyes follow me as I walked up closer.
"Hi mom…dad." I let out in a scared whisper.
My dad threw news papers on the floor in front of my seat. "Did you see these Edward?"
I picked them up and looked at the pictures, they were of me and Bella in front of my room with me in my pajamas, me and her in the boat, me kissing her in the middle of the street in town. People have been watching us this whole time…I should of known.
My dad's angry voice started out quiet and grew louder. "Edward. I sent you and your brothers here to learn, not to have some fling with some…girl." The way he said 'some girl' sounded as if Bella didn't mean anything at all.
"Dad--"
"I'm not finished Edward. You know you and Tanya are to be married and become king of queen of England together. Why did you think it was alright for you to frolic around with this girl, what's her name…Bella."
"For one dad she's not just some girl, she's amazing…and I'm in love with her. I really love her, and I don't care who knows! Let the whole kingdom and country of England know that I, Prince Edward Cullen of England love Bella Swan!"
My dad become enraged at that. "YOU DO NOT LOVE HER! I FORBID IT!" He was now standing up screaming in my face.
I kept my cool as I responded to him. "Didn't you say, if I found somewhere here that I could tell them who I was, and you know that me and Tanya are over. For good."
He started pacing back and forth. " Edward, I meant if you found a good friend, and friend only could you tell them who you are. Not some girl."
"Carlisle dear…" My mom cut in. "Maybe this girl really does mean something to Edward, and you know that Tanya did cheat on him…"
King Carlisle finally calmed down. "Esme, honey, Edward and Tanya were meant to be. In fact she's coming here. And she will attend school here until the end of the first semester at Christmas and then you will both be returning to England to be engaged."
That's when I exploded. "YOU BROUGHT TANYA HERE?! CARLISLE I WILL NOT MARRY TANYA, I REFUSE TO! IF I HAVE TO MARRY TANYA TO BE KING, I DON'T WANT TO BE!!" I ran over to the wall and shoved my fist into it with anger.
My dad's eyes became very sad and he was still calm as he spoke. "Edward, you are the crowned prince…you must become king."
I looked him straight in the eyes. "Then let me marry Bella."
He sighed and looked to the ground. "No." He walked up closer to me as he continued to speak. "You must break up with her son. Tell her you don't love her. That you used her, and she will let you go. If you don't I will disown you from our family, and you will disappoint us and the people of your country. You have a duty to fulfill, and I expect you to. But, I will allow you to go talk to Bella and tell her the truth of who you are, but remember to tell her who you love and that you are marrying her very soon."
I looked at my dad through eyes of pain and stalked out of the room. I turned around to my parents. "I need to go be with Bella right now." and I left.
As I was walking out I heard my parents say behind me. "You have a decision to make Edward."
Emmett's POV:
"Dude Pierce, you just ruined our date man." Mr. Pierce had come and taken the girls away and told me and Jasper to go to his office. We passed an extremely angry Edward on the way which got me kind of worried. When I opened the door I wanted to run away and cry.
"Dad…uh…I didn't do it! It was all Jasper's fault! I didn't know what was going on!"
My dad put his hand up in the air and said, "Jasper didn't do it, this time it was Edward."
I relaxed a little and then smiled. "Ha, so what did goody two shoes do?"
"Bella."
"Oh." I looked down and then over to Jasper, we both knew what was happening now.
"Dad, he really does love her you know." Jasper tried to say, but our dad wouldn't listen.
"Boys, you know he has to be with Tanya it's the only way."
"No dad, it's your only way." I said with an angry tone. "Edward has been a changed guy since he came here and I'm not going to let anyone ruin that happiness he has right now." I needed to protect him, he was my brother after all.
"Emmett's right dad, Edward really does care for Bella. You can't tear them apart."
Carlisle put his hands up to his face. "Just leave boys. I need to think."
As we walked back out of the room I turned around to ask. "Uh, I get to keep Rosalie though, right?"
My dad looked up surprised. "Rosalie?"
"Oh, uh nothing." and I ran out.
Bella's POV:
I couldn't keep still as I sat and waited in my room. I didn't know if Edward would come back. Alice and Rosalie were worried about Jasper and Emmett, but not as much.
"Bella, it's ok. Calm down Edward will come back." They tried to sooth me.
"Why would I want him to come back, he has Tanya." Saying her name wanted to make me throw up in my mouth.
"Who's Tanya?" They both asked.
"You guys don't know who they are do you?!"
They looked confused.
"Emmett and Jasper didn't mention the fact that they are princes?!" I was loosing it.
Just then the door slowly opened, and walked through were the three guys.
Alice jumped up onto Jasper. "What's going on?"
Rosalie walked calmly up to Emmett and wrapped her arms around his waist. But me, I just stood there looking at Edward. He had a pained look in his eyes, and it hurt for me to look at him.
In a slow low voice he said, "Girls. We have something to tell you."
Alice, Rosalie and I sat down on the bed looking up at them while Edward began to speak.
"You see, our dad is King Carlisle of England and our mom is Queen Esme. Therefore that would make us the princes."
Though I already knew it, my mouth along with Rosalie and Alice's fell opened and our eyes widened.
"I though am the crowned prince, which to you doesn't make sense because we are all three are the same age. We aren't triplets like you guys were thinking, but I am the true son of Carlisle…Emmett and Jasper were adopted. Therefore, I am the first in line for the thrown. Mr. Pierce is not really a head master, but he is our main body guard. Mr. Niles is really is assistant body guard to us."
Everything was starting to make sense, well make sense of why they were all British anyway, and why teachers and Mr. Pierce listened to every word these guys said.
He looked at me straight in the eyes but I turned away. "Bella." He voice sounded nervous and upset. "May I speak with you alone?"
I just nodded and stood up from the bed and followed him out the door. He ushered Mr. Niles away so we could be alone.
He didn't start talking at first, he just stood there looking at me. Like he was contemplating on what to do. "Bella. I'm sorry I didn't tell you earlier. I should have, I just didn't know how to."
Then something from inside me erupted and I didn't know what was happening.
"No! You didn't tell me because this was just some fling with me. You have Tanya back home, and as soon as you left here you were just going to go back to her! Everything you did and said was just a lie to me Edward! So why don't you just stop lying and tell the truth! Tell me how you don't really love me and how you are just going to leave!" I ripped my necklace off and threw it at him. Inside I wanted everything I just let out to be a lie, and some small part of me knew it was.
He looked at me for a second, and his mood changed. His eyes got angrier, but then softened. "I'm leaving at Christmas and getting married to Tanya soon after. I don't love you Bella." Then he turned around and walked away from me.
I didn't know what just hit me. The pain I felt when my parents died came back to me all over again. My heart stopped and the empty hole in my chest started to ache. I ran into my room and jumped on my bed and started screaming and crying.
"How could he do this to me? I thought he loved me!" I said while wailing against my bed with my fists in balls slamming against my mattress.
"What did he tell you Bella?" Emmett asked my sternly.
I calmed myself down and little and sat up. "He said he's leaving at Christmas to marry Tanya and that he never loved me." I could hardly get the words to come out it hurt so much.
Emmett's eyes filled with anger and he balled up his fists and stormed out of the room yelling, "That boy is dead!" Jasper followed behind him.
Alice and Rosalie ran over to me and held me in their arms whispering words of encouragement to me.
"Why did have to say that stuff?" I scolded myself as I cried.
"Shh, shh. It's okay Bella." They said as they tried to wipe away my tears.
Days past and I didn't leave my room. I didn't even get off my bed for that matter. One morning I woke up early and realized I all my tears were dried up and I couldn't let anymore come out. I thought I needed to get up and let Rose and Alice know they didn't have to worry about me. I hadn't heard from Edward at all, not that I really expected to.
I dragged myself out of bed and went into the bathroom to take a long hot shower. I let the shower run over my body for at least 45 minutes while I went over the past day in my head over and over. Stop thinking about it Bella, it only makes it worse. Move on with your life. It's over.
I didn't know what to expect when I was leaving my room. I didn't know if he would still be here because I made my sisters swear to never speak his name. It was hard though because they were still with Emmett and Jasper, which I loved because those four were truly, and unconditionally in love. I only thought I had fallen in love, but my knight in shining armor turned out to be a jerk aluminum foil.
When I got to US Lit he wasn't there. Just an empty seat where he use to sit. Bella, just act like he never even excised, ever. Those few weeks of your life was just a dream. Well more like a nightmare now that I think about it.
I sat through class and made myself try and focus. I actually enjoyed reading and writing so it wasn't half bad, Midway through class a loud group of paparazzi, a few bodyguards and Edward entered the room. Now that his secret was out I'm sure he'd have bodyguards everywhere he went.
Right behind Edward walked in a very pretty, happy and quite snobby looking girl. I'm sure that's Tanya. Who were you kidding yourself Bella, look at her compared to you, no wonder he dumped you. I was actually very proud of myself control, I didn't look at Edward for the rest of the class. I thought I felt glares coming from Tanya, but I was probably just being paranoid.
All through class I felt pretty numb with no pain, but as the day went on the pain slowly came back, and it hurt more than ever. Anatomy came and when I saw Edward and his brothers I lost it. I sat down and cried. I tried doing it quietly but Alice and Rosalie caught me. They got me calmed down some, but then she walked in and wrapped her arms around Edward and planted a big sloppy wet one on him. I never have felt so jealous in my entire life. The only thing that kept me from losing my mind was the look on Edward's face. It looked almost...unhappy. But who knows, your eyes can play
evil tricks you and I probably only saw his face the way I wanted to.
The rest of the day past by in a blur surprisingly. I thought it would drag on and on, but it didn't.
The next morning when I got up, I felt sort of okay. The pain was definitely still there, but I slowly got use to the fact of it never leaving me.
I was sitting in Anatomy again when something happened. A new boy came to my class, and he was actually really cute. His name was Tyler I think. But, I wasn't looking for another boyfriend so I didn't look at him long.
I didn't realize I was starring off into space when he came up from behind me and tapped me on the shoulder.
"You look like you need a distraction from what you're thinking about"
He had a cute smile and a deep voice that matched his manly figure.
I blushed and giggled a little, ''Ya, I guess I could use a distraction."
"I'm Tyler.''
"I'm Bella''
" Nice to meet you Bella.''
''You too Tyler.'' I slowly felt my face getter hotter and hotter.
He smiled and walked away and sat down at his seat, but he turned around and glanced at me one last time before he began to listen to the teacher.
"He's cute Bella." Rosalie nudged my shoulder.
"Ya, I guess he is Rose. '' I couldn't help but smile because I kind of did like him.
After class had ended Tyler came up to me and my sisters.
"Hi girls, I'm Tyler."
"Hey." They said
"Tyler these are my sisters, Alice and Rosalie, oh and their boyfriends Jasper and Emmett." I said as the boys walked up
"Hey man," Emmett said
"Tyler.'' Jasper said ''You want to hang with us at lunch today, were making Bella come with us today,''
He looked confused ''You don't like hanging out with them?" He asked looking at me.
I was about to answer when Jasper cut in. "Dude she loves us, she's just had a bad couple of days.''
Bad was definitely an understatement, but Jasper was just trying to help out and I loved him for that.
I smiled and hugged Jazz.
"So Tyler, where are you from?" I asked him as we were sitting around the fountains by the back garden at lunch.
"Well my dad's in the Navy so we've moved around a lot. But I just moved here from Maryland."
Oh, Navy boys…
"Really, what did your dad do."
"If I told you that, then I'd have to kill you." He said it in the most serious tone I was half way frightened.
He started laughing, "Ha just kidding, uh he was a Navy SEAL for years."
I really was interesting in this guy's life, I wasn't forcing these questions out of me just to be nice this time. Maybe it was just to distract myself from Edward though, whatever the reason I wanted to keep talking. "So, why did you decide to come to a boarding school, or were you sent like the rest of us?"
"Well my parents moved so much, I just wanted to settle down in one place, even if it is my senior year so I asked them to send me to a boarding school so I could live here." He was actually answering my questions honestly.
"That's cool, so do you think you will go into the Navy like your dad?" I wouldn't mind being married to a SEAL, very manly that's for sure…
"Actually, as much as I complain about moving I really do want to be a SEAL like my dad."
SCORE! I think I just landed me a man in uniform…GR! Stop getting ahead of yourself, he probably doesn't even like you.
Alice, Rosalie, Jasper and Emmett just sat and watched us talk all through lunch. When it was finally over me and my sisters headed off to our class. We found out I only had one other class with Tyler, which was US Lit. But I already had that class today so I would have to wait until tomorrow before I could talk to him again, unless he found me…
Throughout the rest of the day I found myself thinking more and more about this new Tyler guy. Who am I kidding myself, I don't really like him…I'm just trying to hide the pain from Edward. I finally admitted the truth to myself that I couldn't love anyone except…Edward.
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A couple months had gone by and it was finally December. The senior prom was just a couple weeks away. (The prom has to be at Christmas or the story just won't work…)
I have happily been dating Tyler every since the first day I met him. He has been a wonderful boyfriend who has gotten me through the pain with Edward. Okay, that's not the truth. I am still hopelessly addicted to Edward, I love him with all my heart and soul. Everyday I have to stand back and watch that stupid twit frolic around with my Edward. But I still did really like Tyler, since I couldn't ever have Edward again. I mean after all he was getting married soon.
Alice and Rosalie have been happily dating Jasper and Emmett since September when school started. I could definitely see them getting married and moving back to England with the guys. HOLD IT! OH MY GOSH! THAT WOULD MAKE MY SISTERS…PRINCESSES!! HAHAHAHAHA! Just what they always wanted… I hope they don't leave me though, I couldn't live without them.
"Hey sweetie." Tyler said as he came up and kissed my neck. Edward use to do that…STOP!
"Hey Ty," I turned around and kissed him back and smiled just as Edward walked by. Yes, he still is at school…why? I have no clue…probably just to torture me. WELL YOU KNOW WHAT EDWARD! IT'S WORKING! I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY KNOWING I CAN'T LOOK AT MY BOYFRIEND WITHOUT THINKING OF YOU! I was silently screaming at Edward in my head. Though I may seem brave enough to talk to him and tell him how much he hurt me, I actually turn into a pile of mush when he is even within a twenty feet radius of me. It had been two months and I can't get over it. I don't cry at night anymore, I mostly just sit and plot even things to do to Tanya…real mature Bella.
"Bella!!" Alice came squealing at me before Geography class. "We are going shopping today for a dress for us for prom!! Anddddd!! I got the boys to agree to go with us to tell us how good we look!! Well, not Tyler, he won't go but Emmett and Jasper are!!" Alice was overwhelming herself with her excitement. Just watching her made me get a buzz.
"Okay, sounds great." I really hate shopping but I knew Alice wouldn't take no for an answer.
She grabbed my hand and skipped (her not me) down the hall to class where we met up with Rosalie.
"She's going Rose!!" Alice beamed
"Yay!" Rosalie squealed along with Alice.
After school Emmett gave us a ride in is jeep to the mall.
"Okay listen Alice, we don't have a big budget on dresses, so go easy okay?" I tried reasoning with her now in the car so she wouldn't start a fit in the store.
She lost all excitement and became pouty. "Fine."
"Actually…" Emmett cut in. "Me and Jasper want to help out with the dresses, we know this whole prom thing is important to you so you guys get whatever dresses you want."
I thought Alice would surely drop dead.
"Heck! Go get shoes, purses and anything else that goes too!" Jasper chimed in.
Especially Bella, so when Edward looks at her he can kick himself repeatedly at the dance for letting her go…and then I'll kick him some…and then Jasper can punch him. (Emmett just thought that)
Yep, Alice drop dead right then and there.
"Guys, are you sure?" I asked them. This was too much to ask for.
"Definitely." They both said gleaming.
"Okay, well I have to warn you…you said to get anything that goes with our dresses…that means your outfits too." I started giggling. Jasper and Emmett on the other hand looked freaked.
Though I hated shopping, this was probably the most fun I have ever had shopping in my life. It was like a movie. We ran around the department stores throwing things at the guys for us to try on and tell us how much we looked good in them…and in some cases how bad we looked. We tried on a bunch of dresses, we even got the boys into some and I finally found the one of my dreams. It was like pink that had sparkly sequins all over it. It was strapless and tight around my top but then flowed out beginning at my waist. It definitely looked like something a princess would wear. Rosalie got a stunning silky red straight dress with diamonds straps in the back and Alice got a long flowing black satin dress.
The best part of it all though was picking out the tuxedos for the guys. I had already seen them in one earlier, so they couldn't argue that they looked awful in them. The problem was picking out the right colors to go with us. We eventually just settled on all black pants and jacket with a black shirt and red tie for Emmett and a white shirt and black tie for Alice. For Tyler I picked out a white shirt and a pink tie to match my dress. I didn't know if I could get him to wear it though…it didn't listen to me like Ed--well you know who. I just couldn't speak his name.
But before we bought them we had them model for us. We asked the lady behind the counter if we could hook up Jasper's Ipod to so we could play a song when they walked out. We hit play to "Sharp Dressed Man." by ZZ Top and the boys walked out slow and sexy. (A/N: Omg you should totally listen to this song on like iTunes or youtube or something and just picture this scene in your head…it's totally Emmett and Jasper :D) Jasper played lead air guitar and back up singer while Emmett was lead singer.
Clean shirt, new shoes
And I don't know where I am goin to.
Silk suit, black tie,I don't need a reason why.
They come runnin just as fast as they can
Coz every girl crazy bout a sharp dressed man…
They danced, well not really danced. It was more like sexy dancing/walking all around the store and had every girl starring at them. As much as I thought my two best guy friends were extremely hot, I couldn't help but wish the hottest brother of them all were here too. When we found the perfect complete outfit for prom we headed back home.
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Edward's POV:
I sat in my room banging my head up against the wall like I have everyday for the past two months. I'm such an idiot, I'm such an idiot, someone just kill me…now…please!! BANG! BANG! BANG! I want Bella!! Why am I doing this?! O ya! Cause of my dad!
Emmett and Jasper walked through the door as I hit my head one more time against the wall.
"Dude, Edward get a life…or go get Bella. Do something man, you're going crazy." Emmett said as he laid new clothes on his bed.
"What's that?" I asked them.
"We went shopping with the girls." Jasper said.
BANG! BANG! BANG! I hit my head some more against the wall. I could of gone and been with Bella. BANG! But noooo…BANG!
Emmett got a mean evil smirk on his face. "Ed, you should of seen how HOT Bella looked in her prom dress, I mean she was SMOKIN, I mean ON FIRE I mean--"
WHAP! I punched Emmett cause I couldn't take it any longer.
Emmett just rubbed his chaw and sat up. "Now is that anyway to treat a prince? You wouldn't know though, cause you don't even know how to treat a lady right. That's why Tyler has Bella and not you. "
I just gave him a death glare. "I'm going for a walk." I snapped at them. I slammed the door extra hard as I left.
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Bella's POV:
I thought I would be more excited for this night. I had a great boyfriend who I was going with, but I couldn't make myself smile as I got ready. Alice and Rosalie on the other hand were giving themselves personal face lifts on the amount of smiling they were doing.
"Ahh! I can't believe it's prom night Bella!" Alice squealed as she did my hair.
"OW! Watch where you put the curling iron Alice!"
She smiled sheepishly, "Sorry."
Rose walked into the bathroom fully dressed and ready and she looked gorgeous.
"Whoa Rose, Emmett is going to die!" I told her.
"I know." She laughed jokingly.
"Oh! Let me get my camera so I can see his reaction Rose!" Alice chimed.
We all started laughing because everyone knew Emmett was the one to freak the most. He couldn't quite keep his hands of Rosalie usually, so I was dying to see how he acts tonight.
When we were all ready to go a knock came from the door. We all did a quick check over to make sure everything was alright and Rosalie turned to me and said, "Listen Bella, I know Ed--he isn't going to be with you tonight but please try to have fun. I'm worried about you."
I felt bad for what I was putting my sisters through. It wasn't just me that was hurting, but them too. "Don't worry about me Rose, I'm going to be great tonight." I forced out a smile and she hugged me.
"Come in!" Alice yelled.
Rose, Alice and I lined up and posed the way we practiced for the boys. As soon as Emmett walked in he stopped and dropped the flowers. Alice got it on film too, it was a great face. In fact it took him a good 45 seconds to even try to blink or move. We thought he had heart failure. Then about two minutes later he rushed up to Rosalie and started kissing her. She slapped him and yelled. "You're ruining my makeup and hair!"
He stepped back and politely said, "Sorry, but you're stunning."
Did Emmett just say stunning? Isn't that a little too elegant for him? It made me giggle. Jasper walked up to Alice and took her hands and just starred into her eyes. They were having 'a moment'. Tyler on the other hand just walked up to me, handed me the flowers and said "Hey." Hey? Did he just say hey??
"Hi." I said trying not to sound frustrated. I leaned up to kiss him when I smelled something. "Tyler, have you…been drinking?"
He got completely defensive and yelled "No! and that's none of your business!"
"Uh well you're kind of my boyfriend, so I would say that is my business!" I was getting angrier and angrier.
"Let's just go." He grumbled. He grabbed my wrists and pulled me out of the room with everyone else following behind me.
That boy is dead. I swear if he hurts her tonight…he's dead, and so is Edward. They both need to die. Well mostly Tyler, Edward just needs smacked. Dad might get mad at me if I kill off Edward, I guess he's kind of important to the family…(Emmett thinking to himself.)
I tried holding back my tears while walking to the great hall where the dance was. Tyler is such a jerk, and so is Edward. All guys just suck.
When I walked in the room I immediately saw Edward and her. I hate her. I hate him too. And I hate Tyler. I take that back…I don't hate Edward. I honestly didn't. I wanted to run up to Edward and be wrapped up in his arms and smell his sweet scent and have him kiss me gently that use to make my foot 'pop'. Not going to happen Bella.
The paparazzi filled the room. Always snapping pictures of Prince Edward. Saying his name always sounded so romantic, now add prince in front of it…
Mr. Pierce, who was now body guard/headmaster was always busy trying to keep them away.
Tyler went and got me and him some punch when Jasper came up to me.
"Bella, do you know?"
"Know what?" I asked him.
"That Edward is leaving tonight?" He sounded just as sad as I felt.
"Oh." Was all I could get to escape from my mouth. "What about you and Emmett?"
"We are staying to school is over, so you're stuck with us." He teased with a big smile on his face.
I smiled too, "Somehow I think I'll manage putting up with you two Jasper."
Then he continued. "Do you want to talk to him, you know…before he goes?"
I looked away and thought about that for a moment. "Uh…"
A/N: Ok so what did you think?? stupid edward huh...lol yup that's what i thought but i promise it gets better!! well i hoped you liked it! please review!! thanks :D