Okay, this is the real chapter 5 of shitsuren… my head hurts so badly now… Also this has been lying in my school bag for a while… I'm finally re-writing it… this'll probably be the 2cd last chapter… I think…
Kakuzu slowly walked away from the decapitated couple. His green eyes lowered in slight pain as the hidden spring village came into view. Hidan should be somewhere in there; Kakuzu had planned to painfully cut the Jashinists head off as soon as he saw him… But then after, he wasn't sure…
Hidan's eyes opened slightly; once again, he was trapped. The immortal had acted without thinking and was in even more shit than ever before. It was true, Hidan WOULD live forever… physically at least, a person can die inside but they still seem to remain as just an empty body. Logical thinking and surviving, those were the only true rules of being a ninja. But; suicide seemed to be relevant and fight those two rules. The white fang of Konoha had done it when the village turned on him, shouldn't Hidan be able to do the same thing? "It's not fair…" His voice came out raspy, "Heh, NOTHING'S fair Hidan-kun." Hidan winced in pain at that voice. The man who had tormented and was the reason Hidan favored death over living. Monsters aren't born, they are created…
Tears continued to run down Hidan's cheeks, his father was home again, Hidan felt the most incomparable dispair engulf him, Hidan's eyes moved toward the kunai on his bed, his eyes glittered with faint and false hope that he may get out of this once and for all. His father began to hit the door, screaming for Hidan to let him in, Hidan grit his teeth as he brought the kunai over his wrist- time and time again the kunai was brought against his wrists. Soon enough his pale skin was stained red, the kunai so stained in blood, it would never become clean again. The pounding and drunken yells became louder, Hidan continued to ignore it as he plunged the kunai into his leg. Hidan had no desire to commit suicide peacefully and quickly, he wanted to feel before he died, but in a world where he had known only pain, how could be truly feel anything?
Kakuzu's fury burst forth as he broke down a street hawker's cart, his rage had no known limits and, at his point in time, he had lost lit completely. Nothing, no one, no how would calm him down, even if this entire cruel world was to turn on him, he would beat them without breaking a sweat. "HIDAN!!!" His yell was similar to that of an angry mother, but, his rage would make the devil cover in fear. His fury, incomparable to anything on this earth, nothing mortal or spiritual could ever hope to compete…
A/N: There it is, Chapter 5 of shitsuren… fuck it, this thing looked so much bigger when it was on an exam pad… The next chapter will most probably be the last though, there is one thing I think I should say, the last chapter will with no doubt be the darkest of them all, the majority of it will center around Hidan's past instead of what's happening right now, anyway, I think I'm gonna start working on it now before I forget…