A.N- I received an interesting review that really got me thinking. It said there was something missing in my story and I hadn't been capturing my audience. It was my first real C.C so it was quite different. I must agree with the audience capturing. I feel I have let you guys down a bit in the past few chapters as they were not thorough explained. I will try harder from now on to improve there. As for something missing something in my story I was at a loss. Had anyone else noticed it? I would love to have some C.C to help me improve this story and my writing abilities. Thank you to the anonyms' review for really making me reflect. If you ever put your finger on what was missing please do tell me! In regards to that I might be late with the next few chapters. I'm really going to put the effort into them! Just another point; I do apologize to all the American readers out there! I received a review outlining my use of s's instead of z's I must explain that this is correct Australian grammar so there might be a lot in there as that's how I'm used to writing! Sorry about that!

Edward Prov.

The car came to a screeching halt parking perfectly in a free space. We rushed into the hospital in a flash. Carlisle was standing patiently in the emergency ward as everyone buzzing in a hurried blur around him. We ran over to him minds racing in fear.

"Where is she?" I murmured quickly, it was difficult to focus on just his mind when there was so much chaos around us.

"The ambulance is coming in know. They said it looked bad." He replied calmly pulling on gloves. I growled in frustration as Alice put a soothing arm around me.

"How can they take so long?" I whispered in rage my hands clenched in fists.

"They'll be here soon." She whispered steadily though I could tell she was just as anxious as I was.

There was a sudden surge in activity as two men ran in wheeling a stretcher. I knew instantly with a sickening feeling the fail looking broken body on it was Bella. I felt Alice stiffen next to me as we ran over to her. I gasped quietly as I looked at her carefully. My frail precious Bella look broken and painfully injured. Her leg looked broken as well as her wrist and arm. Her neck was in a brace as was her back. There was an oxygen machine strapped over her mouth and lots of different fluids stuck in her veins. Her entire body was covered in cuts and bruises. There was bright blood everywhere. I felt the back of my throat go dry with thirst as I inhaled the scent.

"Are you sure you can handle this?" Alice whispered in my ear cautiously.

"I can't just leave her can I?" I snapped hovering warily around the stretcher as Carlisle took over and wheeled her away. She sighed as we followed them.

"What's going to happen to her Carlisle?" Alice asked carefully as we ran along side with him down the bright hospital hall. People jumped out of our way murmuring questions about Bella to each other.

"Well have to take her in for surgery straight away; we think she might have a collapses lung and internal bleeding." The fact that Carlisle could remain so calm shocked me. We stopped at a large door the words 'Surgery 2' in large letters across it.

"I'm sorry guys you're going to have to wait outside for the moment. I'll keep you posted." He then turned and along with a group of doctors rushed inside.

The minutes seemed to drag by painfully slow as we sat in the waiting room. Esme, Jasper, Emmett and even Rosalie came over as soon as they had heard what had happened. Alice tried to get a vision of what was happening but was still some how getting blocked by Bella. We then tried Jaspers power. He stood at the door and felt the emotions of everyone. It took awhile but once he sorted through the overloading feelings he found Bella's.

"She seems to be sorting something's out in her head. It's very mixed up…" He said looking stressed as we walked back to the waiting room.

"Its likes she's in her own little world, kind of like a story. You were there for awhile because I felt so much love but then…" he trailed off slowly not looking at anyone.

"What Jasper, what happened…?" I froze mid step as I read his mind. "No…"

He continued to look at his feet as he spoke.

'I think you left her Edward. There was so much pain," he shuddered slightly "So, so much pain!" He stopped when he saw me cringe.

"I'm so sorry Edward I was going to send some calming feelings in but I didn't want to put the doctors off." I nodded and hurried off by myself.

I paced the permitter of the hospital a few times as I began to calm down. This couldn't be happening! Bella, the love of my life… or death on how you look at it, was in hospital! By what the doctors thoughts had been it was critical and life threatening. I shouldn't have let her out by herself; I should have gone or made Alice go at the least! How could I have been so stupid! It was MY fault this had happened. I f it wasn't for me Bella wouldn't be fighting for her life right now! She deserved so much better than me.

As I turned the corner I was hit by a wave of panic. It seemed to over power my head as all I could here were shouts orders and rushing in alarm. I doubled back as I realized what room it was; Bella's room. I rushed inside in a blind panic, 5 doctors ran around tapping at machines and getting medication. I looked over at her heart rate monitor quickly. The line was dead as it let out a singled piercing beep going across the screen in a straight line. Carlisle was bent over Bella's limp body defibrillator in hand. His face was plastered in a concentration worried frown.

"Clear!" He ordered as Bella's lifeless body heaved at the jolt with no response.

"Charging," called out another doctor bending over the machine.

"Clear!" Carlisle yelled again this time with a reaction. Bella's body convulsed slightly at impact as a steady heart beat began. Everyone sighed in relieve and calmed down. I walked over as a few doctors left the room off to another emergency. I came closer slowly surveying the damage at closer proximity. I gasped in horror as my eyes took it all in. Her right leg looked broken and her left one was cut and bleeding. One wrist looked dislocated and the other was cut with shards of glass. Her hair was matted in blood; I could see the cut just above her hair line as blood ran down her pale ghostly face. Her face was bruised and swollen and cut by glass. A Medical ventilator was strapped across her face forcing breath in and out of her lungs. Her neck was firmly strapped in with a brace to keep her back straight. I walked up closer to her, if I could cry I knew tears would be coming now. My finger tips lightly caressed her face as I brushed a stray strand of hair from her face. She might have been bruised, battered and splattered with blood but she looked more beautiful than ever. I smiled slightly as I saw a tear form in the corner of her eye. At least one of us could express our emotions. I wiped it away as I felt Carlisle put his hand on my shoulder.

"Do you really think you should be seeing her like this?' he asked softly. I nodded solemnly no removing my eyes from her. She looked so frail, so weak, she needed protection; she needed me.

"Well you're going to have to follow us then. There's lot of work still to be done so that she gets better." He smiled gently at me as he began to wheel Bella along with 4 different machines and drips with him. I followed in stride.

It was a long stressful day. It could have been night though I really didn't know. I hadn't seen the sun or a clock all day. I was lost in a flurry of minutes and hours spent with Bella moving from room to room. I fell to the seat with a soft thud; more exhausted and stressed than ever.

After all the tests and waiting to find out the damage Bella now looked at peace of in her own world. The doctors had said her body had been so badly damaged they would put her into an induced coma so she would heal faster. They didn't know how long the coma would last but were sure when she was ready she would wake up. I wasn't happy with those odds. Alice had been with me every step of the way but Jasper had to keep his distance. Every time he got with in a few meters of Bella he doubled over in pain and had to leave. The worst part about that was he didn't know if the pain he felt was physical or mental. I was sure now something was going on in her head. Maybe she was reliving memories… painful memories. I winced at the though for the hundredth time as Alice tried to calm me.

"Stop thinking about that its only making it worse!" She scowled me lightly trying to force a smile.

"I know she's thinking about it Alice it's my fault she's in such pain now. She should be resting; not hurting herself more!" My voice rose louder as I talked, my hands clenched in fists.

"You don't know that for sure, Bella's a big girl she's going to be fine." She reassured me unhelpfully. I got up and sat on the edge of her bed gently stroking her face.

"Be strong Bella. Come back to me… to your family." I whispered willing her awake.