"Hello." Someone else speaking
"Hello." Kyuubi speaking.
"Hello." Thoughts
"Hello." Kyuubi thoughts
Chapter 10
"No! That is not Naruto!" shouted a voice making the blond stop his attack. "Oh and this shield can be penetrated…" A figure with dark sunglasses soon appeared right in front of Tsunade coming up from the ground! "Good try you fake!"
"What are you talking about!" said Naruto. "I am Uzumaki Naruto!"
"Is that so?" asked a voice from behind the blond. Naruto's eyes widen when he felt something cold pierce the back of his neck killing him instantly. Tsunade's eyes lit up while Jiraya grinned.
"That's more like it…" said the toad sennin.
The dead Naruto soon transformed into a sound jounin while the real Naruto jumped high into the air and landed next to Tsunade. The remaining rookie 9 along with Neji, Rock lee and Tenten smiled seeing their old friends return.
"Naruto…" whispered Kakashi.
"Hokage-sama." Whispered Hinata who began to heal Tsunade. "Are you alright?" The Godaime nodded still in tears.
"Who are you?" asked Tsunade to the boy in front of her.
"My name is Akira Hokage-sama a friend of Naruto's."
"You should know better Oba-chan…" said Naruto smiling. "I would never hurt you. But I will kill those people who try to!" Naruto, Akira and Hinata stood in front of Tsunade facing off against Orochimaru, Kabuto and about 100 Sound nin's. "Let's start this party off…"
Naruto looked at his enemies and instantly thought what his friend was thinking.
"You dumbass Naruto…" said Akira. "Always rushing things and look where you got us… 3 vs. about 100!"
"Don't blame this on me!" shouted Naruto back.
"Whose fault is it then?" asked Akira making the blond shut up instantly.
"Boys…' whispered Hinata. "Stop arguing… Our priority is to get Hokage-sama out of here…"
"I can take her…" said Akira. He began to walk towards Tsunade when Orochimaru spoke up.
"Where do you think your going kid?" asked the snake sennin. Akira turned around and looked at Orochimaru closely for the first time making the boy barely able to breath…
"You…" whispered Akira.
"Kakashi…" The copy ninja turned around to see a boy land right next to him.
"Sasuke…"
"What's going on?"
"Orochimaru is trying to assassinate the hokage… Luckily Naruto, Hinata and their friend have shown up. Sasuke's eyes widened in anger seeing his old master.
"Naruto!" said Sasuke. He looked at his former team mate in awe seeing how much the blond had changed.
"Akira?" asked Hinata seeing how the boy was shaking. "Are you alright?"
"That monster over there…" said Akira. "He was the one who killed my father!"
"I've killed a lot of people kid…" said Orochimaru laughing. "It's hard to keep track…"
"I promised revenge…" said Akira getting into his fighting stance. "And it will be done today!"
"He's just like me…" said Sasuke. Kakashi nodded.
"Naruto… He's mine!" said Akira. "You can have the white haired guy."
"Fine…" said Naruto.
Both boys soon disappeared in smoke making their enemies too shocked to react. Kabuto's eye widen when he found himself on the ground several feet away from where he was previously standing.
"What the hell!" thought Kabuto. "I didn't even see him! But I sure did feel that…" Kabuto rubbed the forming bruise on his cheek.
"Come Kabuto-san." Said Naruto smiling. "Have you not improved?"
"Forget them!" shouted Orochimaru to his men. "Kill the Hokage!" He suddenly stopped speaking seeing a boy appear right in front of him.
"Revenge feels great when it is this close…" said Akira. He quickly kicked Orochimaru in the air and continued to beat the snake sennin who was having a hard time defending without his arms.
Mean while Naruto was kicking and punching Kabuto all around the roof with relative ease and quickly dashed to the right to avoid Kabuto's palm that was headed for his heart. Naruto smirked staring at the back of Kabuto's head and gave it a swift kick making the white haired medic stumble. Next Naruto made several kage bunshins that all began to attack Kabuto who was having a tough time keeping up with their speed.
"His strength rivals Tsunade's!" thought Orochimaru. "And their speed…"
"Their speed is faster then mine…" thought Rock Lee. "It amazing how much your Tai jutsu has improved Naruto-kun."
"Naruto… You just keep getting stronger…" said Sasuke.
Orochimaru tried to jump back to gain some distance but right when his feet touched the ground Akira was already in front of him slamming his fist into the sennin's face.
"Orochimaru-sama!" shouted Kabuto seeing his master being beaten so easily.
"Don't forget about me…" said Naruto kicking Kabuto so hard that that the medical nin felt his ribs crack. Kabuto immediately activated his chi allowing him to heal up while fighting.
"I guess I'll have to get serious Naruto-kun." Kabuto's hands were soon surrounded by a blue aura once again. "I'll separate all of your major muscles making you unable to fight."
"Come and try you bastard." Naruto quickly jumped backwards to avoid being hit then caught Kabuto's attack by grabbing him by the wrist. "I did learn from our last battle…" Naruto then kicked him right in the head sending him a few meters back. Naruto quickly threw a kunai right at Kabuto who easily caught it but was amazed when it turned into a kage bunshin that landed its fist right smack into his nose causing him to take several steps back.
Kabuto's eyes soon began to get red making Naruto confused.
"Now we'll see who's better Naruto-kun." Kabuto dashed towards the blond hitting him right in the chest but Naruto flipped back onto his feet and tripped his opponent while punching him into the ground but Kabuto made a huge lunge hitting Naruto's leg making him limp backwards. "Who has the advantage now Naruto-kun?" Kabuto smiled when Naruto gritted his teeth in anger. Naruto soon felt his muscles heal almost immediately.
"Looks like he is faster then before…" thought Naruto
"Hinata-sama!" shouted Neji. "Their coming!" Hinata turned around after healing Tsunade to see 6 sound nin's coming right for her!
"Stand back Hokage-sama!" shouted Hinata striking one man in the heart killing him instantly.
She then kicked one man right in the head and pushed off of him while tackling another to the ground and putting a kunai into his throat. One of the remaining 4 sound nin's tried to kick her while she was down but the hyuga simply flew up into the air by pushing off the ground with her arms and landed on her feet getting into the hyuga stance once again.
"How is she this strong!" whispered Hiashi who had arrived a few minutes before the fight had begun. He had always believed that his daughter was weak but the fight she was giving the 6 sound nin's was amazing. "She's holding her own against jounin's and chuunin's!"
"Hinata-sama…" whispered Neji. "I'm glad you have gotten so
much stronger…"
By now Hinata was faced off against a sound
jounin who was running towards her. She quickly went into a stance
that was too familiar to Neji and Hiashi.
"What!" shouted Hiashi. "How is it possible that she can do that! She isn't strong enough!"
"She's stronger then you have ever seen!" shouted Kurenai at the hyuga leader. "Since when have you ever supported her?" Hiashi looked down thinking of the woman's words.
"Enough!" said Kakashi. They all turned their heads back towards Hinata who was beginning her attack.
"Show your father how much you have improved Hinata…" thought Kurenai. "Show him how strong you really are!"
"Jyuukenhou Hakke Rokujyuu Yonshou! (64 points of divinity) 2 points of damage!" shouted Hinata. Hinata quickly struck her opponent twice stunning him. "4 points! 8 points! 16 points! 32 points! 64 points!" By the end of her attack the man was blown several feet away.
"Hinata-sama!" shouted Neji. She looked up and saw that at least 80 men were flying towards Tsunade.
"Kage Bunshin no jutsu!" shouted Hinata. 30 Hinata's were all in front of Tsunade instantly. "Let's end this now!" She got into her divinity stance but began to rotate her waist to her right…
"Where you going?" asked Akira kicking Orochimaru back into the middle of the shield.
"Damn without Kabuto to do seals for me I can't even use any of my jutsu's to defend myself!" thought Orochimaru.
Akira was soon right in front of Orochimaru. He quickly punched him four times in the ribs making them crack then kicked him twice in the face while twirling around to switch to a different style of attack.
"Katon Karyuu Endan!" (Stream of Fire) shouted Akira. Orochimaru's eyes widen as he quickly jumped to the right but his left arm was seared by the roaring flames that had instead incinerated 5 sound nin's. "Damn!"
The next thing that Akira saw was Orochimaru flying right towards him with a sword coming out of his mouth aimed right for his heart! In response Akira reach in his back pouch and took out his kunai to block the blade but to his amazement Orochimaru's sword cut right through it as if it was nothing making a deep gash on Akira's chest. Orochimaru who was too angered to give Akira a break immediately jumped into the air once again to attack the boy.
"Doton Doroku Gaeshi! (Upside down mud wall)
"Not so brave now huh?" said Orochimaru laughing. He easily cut the wall in half making a deep cut on Akira's chest.
"Who ever said anything about hiding?" said Akira taking the blow punching Orochimaru to the ground but his hand just simply went through Orochimaru's head as if it was liquid. "What?"
"Good bye… Revenge unfortunately doesn't always work out." Said Orochimaru. He quickly shoved the sword at Akira's back…
"Your looking tired Naruto-kun." Said Kabuto smiling. Naruto smiled back.
"You thought you had me?" said Naruto. He soon engulfed himself in a red aura healing all his wounds. "Now I'll take you out just like I promised."
Naruto saw in the corner of his eye that Orochimaru had just hit Akira in the back with his sword and smiled. Orochimaru was surprised when the tip of his sword barely penetrated the boy's skin. Akira turned around and hit Orochimaru right in the face making the snake sennin fly a few meters back. Naruto quickly looked over to Hinata who was fighting her hardest with her kage bunshin's to fend of the sound nin's while Tsunade had just broken a jounin's neck but was struck in arm by a kunai.
"Akira!" shouted Naruto right after throwing Kabuto onto the ground. Naruto then formed his favorite seal. "Kage Bunshin no jutsu! (Shadow replication)" Akira got the message and repeated the seals making 50 clones that ran towards Tsunade followed by Naruto's 50 shadow clones. "We need to get Oba-chan out of here!" The real Akira soon appeared next to his earth clone that had taken Orochimaru's attack. There were about 70 sound ninja's left that were headed right for the Hokage until about 100 clones crossed their path blocking their vision.
"We can get rid of them easily go for the Hokage!" shouted the leader.
"If you can find her!" shouted all of the Naruto's. "Henge!" Suddenly all of the Naruto's and Akira's turned into Tsunade! All of the Tsunade's began to run around like mad confusing the sound nin's.
The real Tsunade was staring in awe until she yelped when a gloved hand grabbed her wrist harshly.
"I'll get rid of this mess!" shouted the leader. All of his men quickly jumped out of the way. "Fuuton Furyuukiri!" (Wind Dragon Blades).
In a split second several wind lashes began to pummel the area creating huge puff's of smoke. Within a minute the entire area was clear of the smoke and when the forces landed the only thing they realized was that there was no hokage to be found anywhere! Suddenly 20 Hinata clones had appeared all around them and got into their 64 point divinity stance. But it was different this time surprising her father and cousin once more she began to rotate her waist and hands towards her right creating a new stance.
"What!" thought Neji. "I never put that in the scroll's… How did she develop such an advanced skill from scratch?"
"Hakke Hyaku Ni Ju Hashou!" ( 128 points of divinity) shouted all 10 Hinata's.
"Shit!" shouted the leader seeing all of the Hinata's advancing on his men at amazing speed.
Naruto was watching Hinata when he felt a very sharp pain in his back. He turned around to get punched in the face hard send him into the air to fall prey to another punch and a swift kick to the chest making the blond ninja fall onto the roof coughing up a bit of blood. Akira too was beginning to slow down because of the wound on his chest was bleeding non stop. Akira quickly flew onto the ground to avoid being hit and kicked his opponent but it suddenly turned into mud once again. The boy then screamed in pain when a sword just appeared right below him and impaled his left arm. Akira quickly pushed himself off the ground as hard as he could flinging himself off the ground and releasing him from Orochimaru's sword. Akira was panting heavily while grasping his wounded arm. Orochimaru suddenly turned around and slashed at a bunshin that Akira had made cutting it in half. But the snake sennin's eyes widened when the bunshin was forming back together in one piece as if it was made of water! The sannin soon found himself surrounded by 4 Akira's. Orochimaru grinned at the real Akira who's right hand had turned green and was trying to heal his left impaled arm. Orochimaru suddenly burst towards the real Akira but was stopped by a bunshin who was cut by the sannin's sword. Orochimaru was suddenly flung back when the bunshin exploded into fire!
"What on earth was that!" said Orochimaru.
"My fire elemental Kage Bunshin… I believe you already met my water kage bunshin." Said Akira. Orochimaru's face was suddenly engulfed in water and saw that the bunshin's hands were transparent and trying to suffocate him! Orochimaru stabbed the bunshin in the head but it didn't have any effect at all. He then cut a hole allowing him to breathe a bit.
"I can't even use Kawarimi no jutsu!" (Body substitution). Though Orochimaru.
"Now is the time when I will take my revenge!" shouted Akira. He then stretched out his right hand with his palm up towards Orochimaru. Within seconds black energy was beginning to form above his palm until it formed a perfect sphere with invisible ripples coming out of it. "Well isn't it quite strange… That I am going to kill evil with a weapon of evil… I call it the death dealer!"
Hinata had now charged forward and began to attack anyone she could find closing off their tenketsu's faster then they could blink. But even though she was getting rid of them there were 50 of them and 5 of her.
Naruto saw at the corner of his eye after hitting Kabuto back that Akira had finally decided to use his finishing move that was very frightening.
"What is this evil chakra that I'm sensing?" said Kakashi. "It seems to not only come from the boy but his attack as well…"
Naruto and Kabuto were panting very heavily and were barely able to move.
"Looks like your going to be losing a friend soon…" said Kabuto. Naruto was confused by this and saw that Akira had the upper hand. His eyes then widened and turned around immediately and saw a scene that nearly made his heart stop.
Akira broke into a quick run towards Orochimaru with the arm carrying the black sphere traveling behind him.
"This is for my father!" shouted Akira beginning to bring his attack towards Orochimaru who was struggling desperately to break free.
"Akira please help Hinata-chan!" shouted Naruto.
Akira saw from the corner of his eye that Hinata had just finished attacking a sound jounin but she was oblivious to the ninja that was preparing to attack her from behind and the ninja was also hidden in her blind spot so she couldn't see him at all with her blood line! Naruto was too far away to help the hyuga and the only one close enough to Hinata was himself but if he went for her then Orochimaru would be free from his water bunshin's grasp!
"He won't do it." Said Sasuke. Everyone looked at him with confusion.
"What do you mean Sasuke-kun?" asked Sakura who was biting her nails nervously.
"Like me he is consumed in revenge…" said Sasuke. "And when you are this close to avenging the victim that you lost then you won't let anything stop you… Hinata isn't going to make it…"
"Please Akira!" shouted Naruto desperately who had just kicked Kabuto and was running towards Hinata. "Hinata-chan! Watch out!"
Hinata was suddenly kicked in one knee making her kneel down and turned around to see a ninja in the air bringing his sword down upon her!
"I have to avenge my father…" thought Akira. "That's why I fight and train so hard…"
Naruto stared in horror as a sound nin was about to kill his girlfriend while his other friend was charging towards the man who murdered his father.
Thank you all once again for your reviews and I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
I also added some more Akatsuki members just for the heck of it for later uses.
Now to answer some of Personajxt's complaints as he would put it.
Ummm I never read on what level some jutsu's were but the mythical fire jutsu doesn't look that strong so I assumed that it was gennin. Next my orginal idea about the Earth Kage bunshin was that the bunshin looked like Akira so it was kind of like a shadow and was made out of earth, water, or fire depending on which elemental kage bunshin you were talking about. Also yes I did kind of rush the training part but I will try my best at that one part. Also my Naruto isn't like other peoples Naruto's. Also 10 years of training can make someone like Akira strong. Plus he didn't exactly spill his guts to Naruto instead he put a dagger at Naruto's spine when he first met him.
Well thank you for taking your time to analyze my story and write your complaints. I'm glad that you pointed some of these problems out and I'll try my best to improve the story.
As for crrot
For the first question to be honest I totally forgot about Jiraya's scrolls. As for Tsunade your right she pretty much wasted her time. Too bad. Next Kyuubi will be back soon enough but for now he is silent and about this Kyuubi I think it would kill the purpose of my Naruto because if Kyuubi knew jutsu's and taught Naruto then he would know tai jutsu and Nin jutsu which would make him too powerful. So the kyuubi in this story only know the basics. Thanks for your questions I hope I answered them properly because I'm pretty damn tired haha.
Also sorry it took so long since this chapter is kind of special since it is a little longer.
Sometimes love ends too quickly which is very unfortunate for Naruto…
