"Hello." Someone else speaking

"Hello." Kyuubi speaking.

"Hello." Thoughts

"Hello." Kyuubi thoughts

Chapter 12
If you haven't read chapter 11 yet go read it I know the beginning sounds familiar but the other half has changed thanks. If you don't have a clue where the first scene in this chapter is then you better go read chapter 11 or you might be lost cause there have been major changes.

Naruto held his Rasengan in front of him waiting for the soldiers who were very hesitant to make their move.

"Akira…" His best friend looked at the blonde silently. "I couldn't save her… I'm the one who's responsible for her death."

"Not to sound mean or anything but she would have came with or without your permission." Said Akira. "It's not your fault." Akira was about to say something else when all of the sound nin's gathered their courage and jumped towards the teenagers. "Here they come!" Naruto screamed in rage blowing back 10 of them immediately with pure chakra alone.

"We'll overwhelm you with numbers!" shouted the leader. He was suddenly caught in the throat by a red hand that came from Naruto's aura! "What!"

Naruto looked at him and smiled throwing a rasengan at him making him scream in pain. Naruto soon pulled his arm back making the ball of chakra shoot right back at him! Naruto quickly jumped out of the way making it strike another sound nin who was blown away and burned when the ninja struck the shield he was standing near.

"It look's as if something is connected to the Rasengan!" said Jiraya. Neji activated his blood limit too see what was going on!

"What the hell!" said Neji making Jiraya and Kakashi look at the hyuga.

"What is it?" asked Kakashi anxious to know what Naruto was doing.

"There's a chakra string connected to that ball of chakra!" said Neji. "But it's different from the chakra strings that I have heard of! Not only can I not see it without activating my eyes but there is chakra flowing back and forth through the string!"

"How!" asked Jiraya amazed. He then came up with an idea. "Naruto has never been one to win too many battle's against lots of enemies. Sure he has the Kage bunshin but they were always destroyed too easily with a simple fire jutsu. He must have modified the Rasengan with the string so he could combine it with his speed to make an awesome offensive attack!"

"What kind of technique is this!" cried out Orochimaru seeing his men spinning around everywhere as if they had just been thrown out of a tornado.

Naruto whipped his chakra string once again and struck 2 sound nin's this time.

"Damn this is harder then I thought." Said Naruto. "I've never kept the rasengan going this long before! It's getting harder to control!"

"Naruto! Remember you have to focus and concentrate as much as you can!" said Akira shoving his death dealer into an enemy. "That's why you can't make a second Rasengan! You might want to let it go and rest up since the chakra string can only go out so far!"

Naruto agreed and threw his rasengan at one last enemy but this time the attack was different making Neji open his mouth in surprise! The enemy who had just been hit by the rasengan yelled in pain before it blew off a portion of his chest killing him instantly!

"What the!" cried out Kakashi in surprise.

"He just threw a huge amount of chakra down the string and into the rasengan!" said Neji. "He then cut the string right after he threw it!"

"That's why it looks more like mine now…" said Jiraya. His eyes soon widened. "The rasengan needs to be constantly powered in order to remain in its ball form or it just disappears… That's why Naruto needs a chakra string to constantly put power into the attack! And since he is dealing with multiple enemies he is holding back some power only making it strong enough to throw them back and knock them unconscious but not kill them! It makes perfect sense since the rasengan will explode on impact! It's most unexpected that he can turn such a devastating move intended for one person into something completely different so that it can attack groups!"

"He is the number one unexpected ninja after all." Said Kakashi proudly. He then looked at Sasuke who was gritting his teeth.

"Damn him… He always gets stronger!" thought Sasuke… "He taking out jounin's and chuunin's as if they were nothing!"

Naruto looked around to see kunai's headed right for him but they were blocked by Kyuubi's chakra! Akira had just cracked the neck of one sound nin and kicked another into the purple shield burning them into ashes. The boy looked around to see about 40 sound nin's left and 20 surrounding Naruto hesitating whether the Kyuubi container had any other devastating tricks up his sleeve.

"Katon Karyuu Endan!" (Stream of fire!) shouted Akira incinerating at least 10 of Orochimaru's men. He soon saw a familiar blur headed right for him making him cringe. "What is with this guy and going for me?"

Akira, who pulled more power out of his curse seal making him stronger and faster, quickly ducked under the fourth Hokage's punch and tripped the blond making him crash onto the floor. Akira tried to kick the fourth while he was down but only struck air! Akira then looked at the fourth who was in the air flying right at him! Akira quickly jumped away to dodge several shirikens that hit the floor and threw some of his own weapons killing 2 more sound nin's but was kicked in the ribs sending him flying…The 20 ninja's all flew towards Naruto all at once but 10 stopped in mid air when Naruto made 5 kage bunshin's and 2 huge red arms came out of each, grabbing the ninja's in the throats. Naruto quickly threw a kunai at one nin strike him in the head and saw there there were 9 more so he powered up his rasengan.

"Spread out!" shouted one of the sound nin's.

"It won't help you!" shouted Naruto in his deep voice. He quickly threw his rasengan at one nin then made a circle with it hitting 3 more that were attempting to hit him from the side. "6…" Naruto quickly back flipped from a wind jutsu that flew past him missing his legs by inches and swung his rasengan around and hit another ninja while in mid air. "5…" Naruto then powered up the rasengan and flung it right at a ninja who caught it right in the arm blowing it and a part of his chest right off. Naruto then kicked one ninja in the stomach making him bend over and then cracked the sound nin's neck. Naruto then sidestepped to the right avoiding the dagger that was headed for his spine, grabbed the nin's arm and twisted it letting Naruto gain control and then stabbed the sound nin's comrade who was running to help. "Good bye…"

Naruto then stabbed the man in the throat with his own dagger. Naruto was now faced one on one with the last sound nin. The sound nin began to sweat bullets seeing Naruto's eyes that stared at him yearning for his blood. Naruto was actually about to laugh at the mans face before making his move to kill him but suddenly the mans eyes shifted a bit to the right! Naruto quickly fired a rasengan at the man while he was distracting blowing him into the purple shield and pulled it back as hard as he could making the ball of chakra fly right at his head! Naruto quickly jerked his head back at the last second and cut the chakra string making the ball of chakra strike the sound nin, that he didn't see before who was trying to sneak up on him, killing the enemy right away.

Akira struck the fourth hokage once more who merely took a few steps back before charging at Akira once again.

"Don't you know when to quit!" shouted Akira. He then gave the fourth Hokage a round house kick knocking him to the floor when the teenager quickly wen ton his knees to prevent his head from being chopped off.

"I thought I give him a hand…" laughed Orochimaru with his sword sticking out of his mouth.

"Bring it on then!" shouted Akira grabbing his neck and punching him right in the face whipping the smirk right off his face.

The fourth picked up a kunai and ran right at Akira who had his back towards him. Orochimaru gave off a grin until suddenly the fourth hokage was blow away by a huge burst of red chakra! A boy soon stepped behind Akira who punched Orochimaru once more who made a painful grunt.

"Thanks for the cover…" said Akira.

"No problem…" said Naruto. "I'll take care of my father!" A huge wave of red chakra came once again blowing dust everywhere."

"I'll take care of this annoying trash and his pet…" said Akira referring to Orochimaru and a badly wounded Kabuto.

"Take care then…" said Naruto. "I could care less if you kill them." Akira threw Orochimaru into the air making him land next to Kabuto. Akira then looked at Naruto's eyes and was a bit it shocked…

"Get a hold of yourself Naruto… Or you'll fall even further…" said Akira. "Remmeber what happened last time…"

"I am in control…" said Naruto coldly. "But I want to see you stay in control if the girl you love is lying over there dead…" Naruto then charged right at the fourth kicking him his hardest blowing the foruth all the way to the other side of the roof. Akira quickly made one Earth bunshin and attacked both Orochimaru and Kabuto while eating another soldier pill to recover his strength. Akira first attacked Orochimaru with one punch while his earth bunshin simply took every attack that Kabuto threw at it.

"Damnit! Thought Kabuto. "Since its made up of materials from the earth and chakra it has no muscles to disconnect!"

The earth bunshin soon began to punch Kabuto causing blood to smear the mans face who was running to get away…

Naruto went over to the fourth Hokage who punched his son once which only made Naruto turn his head and look right back at the fourth's eyes.

"For every punch he gives I'll give him 2!" thought Naruto angrily.

Naruto quickly punched his father right in the rib cage and then a new fist made of chakra came out and struck the hokage again a split second later. The fourth stumbled back and struck Naruto again only to get 2 more devastating punches. Naruto then kicked the hokage in the head and punched him 3 more times and then flipped into the air and kicked the fourth into the air.

"It's over!" shouted Naruto. Suddenly 2 hands flew from his body and grabbed the fourth hokage in mid air. Naruto charged up a rasengan and began to twirl it into the air like a whip making it go faster and faster. "I'll defend our home with your own jutsu!" Naruto then charged it up with as much power as it could hold and flung it right at his father making a huge explosion pretty much vaporizing him. "That will buy us some time…"

Akira had just kicked both Orochimaru and Kabuto knocking them both in opposite directions. Akira soon felt a familiar presence near him and turned around.

"You okay?" asked Akira. The boy was suddenly grabbed by a red hand and thrown a few feet away surprising everyone outside of the shield greatly! Akira quickly flipped in mid air and landed on his feet barely. "What the- Oh no."

"Get out of my way Akira… These guys are mine!" shouted Naruto sounding even more like a demon.

"What's wrong with him!" asked Kiba. "He would never attack a team mate!"

"Something is different about him… His chakra has changed dramatically…" said Kakashi.

"You guess it Kakashi" said Akira who was in front of the copy ninja. "Naruto's rage and hatred has taken over him. He's fallen to the influence to the kyuubi's power…" Tsunade and Jiraya's eyes widened. "It started when he was tapping into Kyuubi's power to try and master it. He succeeded but the side affects were that when his emotions got out of control the Kyuubi's powers amplify his emotions making him feel even worst and change his personality drastically."

Naruto was now facing a panting Orochimaru who looked afraid.

"You monster…" said Orochimaru.

Naruto began to laugh which surprised everyone greatly as he walked towards the evil sennin. As he was getting closer Kabuto ran to Orochimaru's side to try and fend the boy off. The next thing that Naruto did stunned everyone including Orochimaru and Kabuto. A sound nin was slowly crawling away from the battle field when he saw a pair of legs in front of him. The man looked up just in time to feel and see Naruto put his hands on opposite sides of the sound nin's face and crack his neck with no sign of hesitation. Naruto let the body drop onto the floor and then began to walk towards Orochimaru and Kabuto once again.

"You told me once that you would never be afraid of me Kabuto-san but judging from your face right I think you were lying. And please don't get me wrong… You should be afraid… You took something very valuable away from me…" said Naruto advancing slowly towards them. "Someone that I loved to the point where I would sacrifice everything for her to be safe… She was innocent, pure, kind and only wanted to make the place better again. But you… All you crave is destruction, murder and jutsu's… That all ends now because I will make sure you have a painful death! You will be wishing for me to end your life!"

Naruto's aura grew bigger making Orochimaru begin to sweat bullets. Suddenly the purple shield deactivated.

"Orochimaru-sama run!" shouted one of the 4 shield nin's. But he was soon silenced when someone with light purple eyes intercepted him.

"You killed my cousin…" said Neji. "Hakke Rokujyuu Yonshou! (64 hits of divinity) 2 points of damage! 4 points! 8 points! 16 points! 32 points! 64 points!" The sound nin was suddenly blow away right into the sword of the current anbu captain who was dressed in white robes.

Naruto soon saw Orochimaru and Kabuto slowly sinking into the ground!

"You won't escape!" shouted Naruto running towards them at amazing speeds.

"Alpha! Beta!" Shouted 2 sound nin's while biting their thumbs. "Kuchiyose Rashoumon!" (demon hunter shield)

A huge shield soon blocked Naruto making him unable to see his target.

"Stupid thing!" scremed Naruto and ran around to the other side of the shield throwing a full powered Rasengan at one of the sound nin's who summoned the impenetrable defense shield killing him instantly. By the time Naruto got the other side he only saw Orochimaru's eyes as they faded away. "Nooo! You can run anywhere! I'll hunt you to the ends of the earth! You hear me!"

The last 2 sound nin's where desperately on the defensive but one was soon killed when Kakashi and Sasuke shoved their chidori's into his body while the other was killed by Jiraya's rasengan.

"Naruto?" asked Tsunade walking up to him to heal his wounds.

"Stop!" shouted Akira. Tsunade quickly came to a halt and just observed to see Naruto slowly walk towards Hinata's body and fell to his knee's.

"Hinata-chan… I'm sorry!" cried Naruto. His red aura soon disappeared as the blond slowly lifted Hinata up and began to wheep rocking her back and forth slowly. All of Konoha's ninja's and Akira surrounded Naruto with sad eyes. Naruto was crying until he felt a slight wind strike his neck making his jerk his head up. "Hinata-chan!" Everyone began to feel sorry for the boy thinking he was delirious. "She's a alive! Oba-chan! Nee-chan you have to heal her she's still alive!"

"Naruto…" said Kakashi. "She's gone!" Naruto was instantly at his feet and punched the jounin right in the face knocking him to the floor.

"You idiot! She's right here! She's alive!" Akira soon stepped forward to Naruto. "You believe me right!" Akira nodded and began to heal Hinata's wound in the stomach. Shizune was too sad to see Naruto like this and began to heal Hinata asa well.

"At least it will calm him down…" thought Shizune. "I have to try at least… Even if it's a lost hope…"

Tsunade went over as well and began to pour whatever chakra she would spare into the healing of Hinata's body. Neji used his Byakugan to see Hinata's chakra flow which would determine if she was alive or not. When he looked at Hinata's very still chakra flow he was about to turn off his blood limit when he suddenly saw a small flow push and then it stopped… Neji was beginning to get confused and walked closer to Hinata.

"What is it Neji?" asked Naruto anxiously.

"I'm not sure…" said Neji. "I thought I just saw her chakra coils move but it just stopped meaning she's dead then a few seconds later they would move again…"

Tsunade, Shizune and Akira kept healing Hinata when Neji began to see her chakra coils move even faster until it was nearly normal! A cough soon emitted from Hinata's mouth making Naruto yell out in joy.

"That's it Hinata-chan!" said Naruto holding her head softly. "Come back to us…"

"N-Naruto-kun?" she whispered.

"I'm so glad your okay…" whispered Naruto to her ear. "I thought I lost you…" Hinata soon felt the pain form her wounds go away.

"Thank you…" Tsunade, Akira and Shizune nodded smiling. Shizune soon began to heal Akira and Naruto.

"What happened?" asked Naruto.

"Since I know how to control my chakra I can combine those skills with my medical training I can put myself in almost a suspended animation. Where my chakra flow is very slow and my pulse very faint. But whatever damage I take will pretty much stop where it is and take even longer to kill me. I knew after taking those hits that I would die if I didn't use my new jutsu. I'm sorry for making your worry." Tsunade and Kurenai smiled at Hinata.

"You might need to start teaching me Hinata." Said Tsunade.

Naruto helped Hinata up when he suddenly felt a powerful presence behind him. He began to walk past Tsunade whose eyes widen when she saw who he was walking towards.

Right in front of Naruto was the fourth Hokage… His father.

"Naruto…"

"Father sorry I hit you with your own jutsu…" The fourth hokage laughed at his sons remark and ruffled the boys hair.

"You're really something Naruto…" he said. "I want you to know that your mother and I love you with all of our heart and that were proud of you. Thank you for defending the village…" The fourth soon began to sink into the ground making Naruto grab his hand. "I'm sorry for all the pain I gave you Naruto…"

"It's okay dad… I love you too!" With that the fourth Hokage smiled before disappearing completely. Naruto's smile suddenly turned into a frown when he felt a huge pain in his entire body. His legs gave out and began to fall to the floor. Shikamaru was about to help him when he stopped abruptly. Naruto felt someone strong keeping him from falling flat onto the floor.

"Allow me to help you Naruto-kun." Naruto looked up to see the anbu captain without his mask. "You have earned my respect despite what the villagers say." Soon all of the konoha's ninja's who had not accepted Naruto began to step forward saying apologies. Naruto's eyes were shinning due to the fact that he was in near tears. His dream as a child to be accepted was actually becoming true. Hinata was also crying while Akira smiled. Naruto soon passed out smiling from his exhaustion.

Naruto soon woke up and remembered everything that had happened the previous day making him smile.

"Hinata-chan and Akira are fine… We kicked Orochimaru's ass and we saved the day! Plus all of the ninja's now acknowledge me!" thought Naruto.

Naruto soon sat up and was in a bear crushing hug.

"Naruto-kun your awake!" said Hinata.

"Hinata-chan-" Naruto stopped himself when he saw her. She looked a little more grown up and had shoulder hair length hair. "You look different…" Hinata's face turned from happy to a sad face. "Hinata-chan? What's wrong? Where's Akira?"

"Naruto-kun… Akira died while on a mission."

"A mission? But we barely saved Konoha…" Naruto then noticed something on Hinata's ring finger.

"Naruto… You've been in a coma for 3 years…"

"What! How… But… Wait what's that on your finger Hinata-chan…" said Naruto fearing the answer.

"Naruto-kun… I'm so sorry… I was just so alone… I'm married..."

"To who?" Hinata was now in tears.

"Uchiha Sasuke…" Naruto couldn't believe what he just heard!

Come on guys just because Naruto saved the day doesn't mean cliff hangers stop… I was debating about having a nice ending but not my style I try to get as many cliff hangers as I can. How will Naruto deal with this huh? His girlfriend just married the traitor!

Well now I'll give you guys an explanation of Naruto's new move.

Think of it as a rasengan ( A ball) attached to a rubber band which is the chakra string. So if you ever shot a rubber band before it can pretty damn strong Hehe. Naruto pretty much turned a one on one jutsu, into a justu that can fight multiple enemies. Now the rasengan has to be attached to Naruto's chakra string because it has to be constantly powered in order to remain in a ball shape form. But since it is far away from Naruto's hands Naruto has a limit on how much chakra he can constantly flow into it thus the rasengan loses its power to kill, but still has enough power to blow away enemies and knock them unconscious. But if Naruto wants to he can always just throw in an enormous amount of chakra into his rasengan to make it lethal but he must get rid of it fast or it will explode. The only bad thing about this new modification is that once that Rasengan leaves it hand its very dangerous because without the proper practice it can actually come back and hit him as well. In addition to that the new jutsu also requires constant focus and concentration to keep the chakra flow within the string to keep the rasengan stable. Well that's my new jutsu. I know it may sound weird but too many people have the idea that the rasengan can just fly out so I wanted a new idea. If you have any questions please ask for I want to make sure everyone understands this.

Thank you all for your reviews and I'll try to get the next chapter up soon.