Don't own Pokemon etc. Hey dose any body notice that if you have written a story they won't let you search for another story seriously try it if you haven't.
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it was... it was... a double knockout neither of the sides could believe it. Neither were speaking until finally Star yelled out " So lets move on shall we?" she said with a smirk. " Yeah right.'' is all Ash could manage to say what else could he he was shocked it wasn't the first time this has happened but this time it was different but he couldn't put his finger on it. Star saw this and said " Wow this the first time this as happened. You are as great as they say, Ash." she said sweetly but somewhat harsh. Ash snapped out of and was ready to call out his Pokemon. "Go Aipom!" "Go Vaporeon!" both Ash and Star yelled at the same time.
(Time skip.)
The battle raged on for hours neither side giving in. It awesome to watch yet something was odd about it. They were both to their last Pokemon. "I choose you Blastoise!" Star yelled a little nervous at the way things were going. "Okay I choose you Pikachu!" Ash said a little nervous as well. "Yes, the battle I've been waiting for.'' Star said to herself a little mysteriously. "This battle has gone on long enough!" Star shouted surprising everyone. "It's time to win it Blastoise!!!" Star yelled."Blas!" (translation: right!") Blastoise answered back. "You can go first Ash." Star said smugly. "Right Pikachu Thunderbolt!!" Ash yelled a little angry. "Counter that with a Bubble Beam Blastoise!" Star said knowing what was going happen. They collided in a explosion. " Come on Ash you gotta hit me with your best shot!!" Star said smugly, harsh, and oddly sweetly. Ash was stunned that was the first time anyone has said that everyone else was shocked too. (an: I got the idea from the song "Hit Me With Your Best Shot" I never knew music could be inspirational.) "Time to show them what we can really do, use thunder Pikachu!!" Ash said a little shaken up. " Let it hit you straight on." Star said coolly. "Blas." Blastoise nodded and just stood there. The attack hit straight on and Blastoise wasn't even scratched. " Blastoise its time to finish this, use hydro pump now!" Star said already knowing the 99.9 outcome. "Doge it Pikachu!" Ash yelled in worry for his Pokemon. Star had another smug look on her face. Pikachu dodged the first blast then got hit by the second surprising everyone then they noticed that Blastoise was still using hydro pump contientiously. " I've trained Blastoise to continue its attacks Ash, but now Blastoise stop." Star said calmly Blastoies stopped its attack and Pikachu was defeated, " Pikachu!" Ash yelled as he ran to his Pokemon."The winner is Star ." Brock said stunned and slowly( do to the shock.) every one else remained silent until... "We won Blatoise ha ha you and all the others get a bowl of my Poke block!" "Blas!" Star and Blastoise said rejoicing their win."Oh, Ash is Pikachu OK?"Star asked worryingly. " Uh...I think so." Ash said unsure of the question. "Here let me have a look at it," Star said softly and then took Pikachu. She looked at it very carefully and smiled. "It's OK but lets make it better." Star said then gave Pikachu a massage after she was done Pikachu jumped up ready for anything and said " Pika Pi pikiapi." " Your welcome Pikachu." Star said very VERY sweetly. "How did you know how to massage Pikachu?" Brock asked since he was a breeder. "I learned it in Hoen because my Pikachu was weak." Star said smiling. " You have a Pikachu?" Ash asked. " Yeah, I named her Peach." Star said happily. " Peach?" everyone said wonderingly." Yeah if you can give me a minute I'll show you her." Star said cheerily she said looking through her poke balls. "Ah, here it is. Peach come on out!" Star said. Then a Pikachu came out but it was different. It had a 'V' shape tipped tail and heart shaped cheeks which made it very cute plus it had a blue bow on one of its ears and tail complementing it nicely."This is Peach." Star said "Oh it's so cute!" May exclaimed looking at the pikachu."Thank you May I worked really hard to train her."Star said enjoying the complement. " Wait! How can you have more than six Pokemon with you? And tell us how you know who we are ." Brock exclaimed scaring everyone except for Star."That's easy, I see Ash and May on TV all the time. and I know Max from when I went to Petalburg. And I know you by TV and the Pwetercity gym." Star said calmly." What about Pokemon?" Brock asked again. "Huh,Peach is a very special Pokemon ,you see. The lab was been attacked by Team Rocket's Butch and Cassidy. So I got a permit to keep her with me." Star said in a somewhat sad tone. "Her?" Ash said wondering what she meant. "Yeah Peach is a girl." Star said happily. " How can you tell?" May asked wondering the same thing." Oh truth is I can talk to Pokemon." Star said very cheerfully."What?!" everyone exclaimed.
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Well there it is and it's even longer. Yay! Well until next time. Chou.
