Love lies bleeding

Yuna part 1. Yeah I'm doing it again It's just the way the story is structured. Don't worry I should only need to do it once more. (Paine.)

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Recommended music to listen to: This Song Has No Title by Elton John if possible.


The fiend was huge I had to find a weakness. I changed to black mage.

"Owie." Rikku had been thrown. I have to help her. I step forwards to help her but stars surround me. Damn why did I have to change dress sphere.

"Help!" She screams there's nothing I can do I'm not in control of my feet the sphere change has me now.

I reappear from the smoke and see the pyreflys. Had Rikku survived? The pyreflys disappear and I see Rikku and her saviour has been Paine. Thank god I was so scared for her.

"You OK Rikku?" Paine asks Rikku. Good there both alive.

Rikku hugs Paine. "Thank you. Yes I'm OK." Rikku answers her. Is it wise to hug Paine?

Paine replies. "That's good to know." maybe she hasn't noticed. "Uh Rikku?" Oh wait she has noticed.

"Oh right the hug." Rikku lets go before Paine well acts like herself.

Paine gets up and keeps talking to Rikku "Well you might want to put your arm back there." Huh "I mean you don't look like you can walk that far." She's right Rikku did look like she had been run down by a hover.

Brother on the intercom comes in. "Yuna are you OK." Ah that's nice a bit of concern for my well being.

I reply. "We're fine we're on our way back okay." It's nice of him to care for us.

Brother came again. "OK."

Rikku adds her normal remark to our conversation "Let him be." Why does always Rikku do that? Brothers just being kind. Right?

We start walking back I get to thinking is brother just being nice or is he saying something wrong. Does Brother want to do something to me? Maybe Rikku has something planned that I don't know about and Brother knows what it is? I start going up the ramp to get inside the ship.

I turn to ask "Rikku what's happening with Brother?" Rikku and Paine aren't there. "Rikku?" I ask looking around for her. Where the hell is she?

5 minuets later

Rikku hobbles round the corner. "There you are." I was getting worried. We go inside and select bridge on the lift. We walk in and only Brother is there. Why? Surely everyone stays inside at the Thunder Plains. "We are back. Hey where is everyone?" I ask Brother.

"Outside don't worry they know what there doing." Brother sent them outside in a place like this. Well he is the captain but it seems a little cruel.

I go ahead and tell brother what we will be doing next. "Well it's wet out there so we need to take a shower."

"Crufan?" Brother replied. What does that mean?

I was about to ask but "Tuh'd ajah drehg ypuid ed!" Rikku shouted at him. What did she mean?

And so Rikku led us off for a shower.


Ok that's Yuna part one. Boring I know but it all to do with the way the story's structured but there is better stuff to come really there is.

Review if you want to and talk about story plot holes, problems and questions you want answered. If you really want to use A bit of Q and A for that bit.

Thank you for reading.