Thanks for reviews! .In Max Ride 4, when it says fang 'deepens' the kiss, we don't know what it means. So... This isn't a really 'What should have happened', it's a 'What should have been more detailed' kind of chapter. Enjoy and Review please!

Fang's POV

"Your such..." I trailed off, searching for the right words. "...a pain!"

"What?!" I heard her screech as I swooped in, pressing my mouth gently to hers.

I love Max. I love her with all my heart. She's the best thing to ever happen to me, in my entire screwed up life, she's always been there, my own persoanl sunshine in this stupid gloomy world.

I felt Max try to pull away to say something. Normally, I wouldn't have stopped her, but having my mouth against hers, her lips moving unknowingly with mine, I just didn't want it to stop. I didn't want this pleasureful feeling to just disappear.

Before she managed to pull away, I pressed my lips tighter and heavier against hers. One of my hands was resting on her neck, so she couldn't pull away from me without a struggle, the other still clutching her hand in mine, clutching tighter and tighter as the feeling within me grew.

I tilted my head to deepen out kiss. Max obviously didn't know what she was doing, as her own head tilted the other way, giving me better access to her mouth. I crushed myself against her eagerly, wrapping my arms around her soft waist, as my lip ran across her bottom lip, begging for entrance. As if in a trance, my angel's mouth opened, allowing my tongue to slip in, and began battling out with hers passionetly.

One of my hands trailed up her back, and I entwined my fingers in her luscious browny-blonde hair. I allowed my eyes to open slightly to see that Max's eyes were shut, a look on her face which made me think she had the exact same feeling about this kiss that I did. One of my hands stroked her gorgeous cheek, and I suddenly wished I hadn't.

Max's eyes darted open, and she stared at me in hsock, before pushing me off her.

"I...er....um..." she tried, but once beginning to get muddled, she jumped up, spread those gorgeous tawny wings and leapt off the dock, flying to where I could only imagine she had gone.

Review please, and sorry it's soo short. I promise the next will be a lot longer!