My apologies for the long wait! It's only a short one today sorry! I know I have technically already don't the dock scene kiss, but I thought of something else when I was rereading the book a few nights ago. Max tries to pull away and say something, but what would she have said had Fang allowed her to push him away? ENJOY!

Max's POV

"You're...," he began, and I waited, heart throbbing in my throat. "Such a pain," he concluded.

"What?" I asked, just as his head swooped in and his mouth touched mine. I managed to pull back, pushing with my hands against his chest. Fang stopped kissing me, but kept his hands where they were, one of his hands holding my hand down with his, and the other on the back of my head, so I couldn't move even an inch away.

There was hardly any space between us, our foreheads almost touching, and his breath sweeping across my face with every one he exhaled. I began to feel slightly delirious, and tried to pull away again but he held me fast.

"Max, what is it?" he asked, his voice low and determined, making butterflies twirl around in my stomach.

"I'm, uh, not so sure about this...," I spoke weakly, not sure how to put what my mind was thinking into words.

"Not sure about what?" he asked, exasperated. He moved back a mere inch so he could stare properly into my eyes. "What exactly makes you unsure about this?" I don't know why, but Fang sounded angry, and I'm not entirely sure why.

"You know, this," I gestured with my free hand between the tow of us, and he raised an eyebrow. "We have to be responsible, think of the flock, and the people who tried to bomb us, and the school, and..." I wanted to carry on with my hefty list, but Fang's mouth blocked the rest of my words.

I tried to pull back again, but, once more, Fang grabbed onto me, not letting my face move away, kissing me with a Fang like determination.

Oh jeez, this is Fang! My mind kept telling me. As he tilted his head to deepen the kiss I felt my insides turn to jelly and went totally light-headed. I managed to finally take a deep breath through my nose, and I didn't feel so dizzy anymore.

Fang must have noticed that I hadn't pushed him away straight away, as he had wrapped his arms around me, rubbing the space under my wings softly, making me shiver.

As the shiver ran through my body, and as it did, I realised that my lips were now moving without my permission, which made Fang kiss me even harder than before.

Jesus Christ! My inner mind yelled and I pushed against Fang again, this time successful at getting him off me. But I had also pushed him way to hard, and managed to push him straight into the water. I gasped as Fang yelled and waited long enough to see that his head came out of the water, before running back down the dock and taking off back home.

I wasn't too far gone when I heard Fang yell a curse behind me, and him splashing his way out of the water. I turned around when I was a safe enough distance away, hidden behind a chimney of a nearby factory, and peeked at Fang.

I could just about see Fang shaking his head, getting the water out of his hair. The simple movement made my heart flutter, and I felt as if I should fly back, but knew I couldn't.

I began a slow fly back to the house, wishing my heart would allow me to fall in love with Fang.

You already do love Fang, Maximum. Everyone's just waiting for you to realise it. The Voice spoke softly and I shook my head, before flying through my window, and into bed.

More ideas please guys, the more ideas you give me the quicker you get your chapters!