Hey there! I haven't read any reviews yet… I'll get on later tomorrow! I noticed my own mistake in the very first chapter. It says "Epilogue," But it's supposed to say "Prologue," I felt like an idiot when I went over it. Like I said in the last chap, tell me if you think something is wrong with my story, and please tell me so I can fix it.
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Dinner was quiet; everyone was watching them eat their dinner.
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Karla was starting to get nervous, all the people (nine) were staring at them and not eating themselves.
Sasuke wasn't scared looking at all; in fact, he looked quite comfortable with every person in the room staring at him. He was probably used to it with all of his fan girls always looking at him to make sure nothing happened to their precious Sasuke.
Sasuke could feel his eye twitch slightly at the amount of people staring at him and Karla. He asked her to go to dinner so he could talk to her alone, not so everyone could stare at them and make them feel uncomfortable. None of the doctors seemed to care.
Karla poked at her food and looked up at Sasuke and noticed the annoyance in his eyes. She then looked at Sakura, who was glaring at her, or maybe Sasuke?
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Sakura glared at the brunette who took Sasuke away from her. The bitch who stole his heart from her grasp. She was going to make that whore pay dearly for what she did.
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Sasuke kissed her forehead and started towards his own room. He'd spent the whole day with Karla.
He saw Naruto in the room, too. His shoulders shaking slightly as he wept.
"Naruto, what's wrong?" Sasuke asked, feeling concern well up in the pit of his stomach for his friend.
"You're leaving in nine days!" Naruto cried harder.
"I know, Naruto. We can give our addresses to one another. Then we can see each other more often after you get out too." Sasuke said, sitting on Naruto's bed. Naruto put his head on his knees and cried harder and finally nodded.
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Sakura stared at her with her green eyes. She had Karla's diary in her hands. She'd read every entry written in the stupid book and all she got out of it was that she was the jealous type of girl.
Now she had a plan to rid of this stupid relationship that shouldn't belong. Then she would have Sasuke to herself.
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Karla walked into her and Sakura's room and saw her diary on Sakura's lap. She'd obviously been reading it. Oh well, I trust her enough to read it. She thought and looked at her face. It was a scowl.
"What's wrong..." She asked.
"Bitch." Sakura threw the diary at her and it hit her in the gut. "You stole Sasuke away from me!" She said standig up and punching her in the nose. Holy crap, she's stronger then she looks. Pain laced through her face and she grabbed her bleeding nose.
"I didn't steal anything from you!" Karla exclaimed, trying to stop the bleeding.
"The hell you didn't!" Sakura yelled, punching Karla in the gut. Karla coughed up blood and passed out on the floor. Sakura walked back to her bed and went to sleep.
I know it's kind of short but I want to build suspense!! Please tell me what you think.
I got a review that asked why my story was under sasusaku when it was a sasuOC. That's because for it I chose Sasuke and any other character for the story.
Thnx 4 reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!