Sorry it took me so long to write! First I went to the Breaking Dawn party, then something happened, and my sister is going to Collage soon…( and I just didn't feel like writing so here is the chapter, my loyal readers!! Please Review! Constructive Criticism welcome!

Disclaimer: I own my cat, Sami, a stupid MP3 Player, a Wii, and Amy Lynn, but not the Twilight series.

Chapter 5

BPOV

"Edward I need to go see Charlie. Tell him good-bye." I said.

"Only if I can drive you there." He said holding me close to his chest.

"Okay. Then I drive back! Thanks. Let's go."

"Bella. I can drive you home!"

"But I need my truck so you drive me home and I'll drive back with my truck."

"But Bella."

"Edward. It's not like someone is out to get me! Sheesh. Give me a break please!" I pleaded.

"Fine!" He grumbled and walked me to his Volvo.

"Thank you." I smiled and kissed him on the cheek. I climbed into the Volvo and before I could blink he was already in his side and starting the car. We got there in 5 minutes and I waved good-bye to him as he drove back to his house. He wasn't happy, I could see that. But really? I'm not a baby!

"Dad?" I called as I walked into the door.

"Bella!" Charlie said, walking into the kitchen. "It's so nice to see you!"

"Yea, it's nice to see you too, Dad." I said, walking up to him and hugging him. "Are you hungry? Can I make you anything?"

"Bella. It's 3 in the afternoon! How about you stay for dinner then?"

"Oh. Yea, sorry! I didn't realize the time."

"It's okay, Bells. What do you want to do?" he asked.

"Lets just go watch some TV."

We sat there for a while. Watching TV. Then finally I decided it was time to make something to eat. We ate hamburgers and french fries and talked.

"I guess I should go. It's getting late. Bye Dad." I said.

"Yes." he yawned. "I guess it is late. What time is it anyway?" Charlie asked.

"Oh around 10." I said hugging him goodbye. I walked out the door and hopped into my truck. I started it but then I saw something besides me. Then a cold hand clapped over my mouth. I bite down. Okay, never bite down on a vampire. I think I broke one of my teeth.

She laughed. "Edward is mine, Bella. Why can't you accept that?" Amy Lynn said, whispering in my ear. "Now drive away! Go the opposite way from Edward's house. We don't want him knowing about this do we?" she said, smiling evilly.

I drove farther away from Edward's house until we were out of Forks and in the middle of know where.

"That is good." she said, relaxing her hand. I stopped the truck. "Get out!" she hissed. I stepped out of the truck. I didn't try to run. What was the point? She would catch me. "Come on!" she said, grabbing my arm above the elbow and dragging me after her, into the forest.

"No! Please, Amy! Please, don't do this. He won't love you, you know! He will hate you!"

Then Amy phased into me before my eyes. "I'll just be you until he marries me." Then she phased back.

"NO! Amy! Please, you can't do this. I'll do anything! Anything." I pleaded.

"Chris!" Amy barked out and a vampire with red eyes and blond messy hair walked out. We were in a clearing. I have never been here before. "You can have her." Amy said, shoving me into his direction and she disappeared.

"Amy!" I called out. Knowing she wasn't coming back. I sank to the floor.

"Get up. You worthless human!" Chris screamed in my direction and he grabbed me. "You certainly smell delicious!" he said. He picked me up and held me then started to run. We ran for a while. Finally I decided to ask where we are at.

"Near Seattle." Chris said harshly and slapped me across the face. I groaned. I felt my cheek starting to bruise. We stopped in front of an old building, in the middle of nowhere again, and he shoved me inside. It was just a small shack. Two rooms. He shoved me into one of the windowless rooms and locked the door.

"Edward." I groaned.

EPOV

"Bella!" I said, running out to greet her. I missed her so much.

I love you, Edward! I heard from her mind. I stopped and Bella smiled at me. I sniffed the air. It was Bella's scent. Her face fell.

"Edward? Why won't you hug me?" she stated. He lovely voice drifting over to me.

"I can hear your thoughts." I said.

"Because at Charlie's I decided I would want you to hear my thoughts. Maybe it's because I decided I wanted you to hear my thoughts." she said. I went to her and kissed her. She deepened the kiss.

"Your underestimating my self-control." I said breaking away. She groaned.

"Come on, Edward." she said and she started kissing me again.

BPOV

"Why do you want me?" I asked Chris.

"Because!" he said harshly, pushing the food in my face. "Now eat!"

"Umm, what is this?" I asked.

He sighed. "It's fast food, McDonald's. Now eat it before I shove it down your throat." he said. I picked up a fry and ate it. He slapped me again and I groaned. Another bruise. "Eat it all." he said. I started eating. "FASTER!" He screamed at me, shoving me against the wall. I shoved everything in my mouth and swallowed. It was like for a couple of days. Hitting me. Shoving me. Even kicking me. I would try not to scream because it made it worse.

"Edward…" I groaned one day. Every inch of my body had bruises, even dried blood. Chris told me he was immune to human blood, he could smell it but he couldn't feel his thirst in his throat.

"What is your power?" I asked weakly one day when Chris decided to check up on me. He usually left me to go do other stuff outside.

He snarled at me. "Shape-shifting." he said. "And my immunity."

"Two?" I groaned. It hurt to do anything.

"Yes." he said harshly. "You look terrible!" he said and then started to laugh.

I just curled up into a ball on my mattress. This room was so small it only had me and this mattress and a joining room that was the bathroom. That was windowless to.

"Why don't you just kill me?" I said.

"I want you to suffer."

"What did I ever do to you! WHAT DID I DO?" I screamed at him then I realized what I did. He got up and kicked me in the stomach, trying hard to not use his whole strength but enough to hurt me. I gasped. I keeled over trying to breath. I couldn't.

"Can't…breath." I gasped. Then everything went black.

Oooh! Cliffy! Tee-hee! Okay everyone got to my space…okay? Then look up Kat Tingey and go to her profile. Listen to the song Undone! It's about Edward and Bella. I love that song!

How many of you guys liked Breaking Dawn?! I didn't like it! I thought I was reading a fanfic and it didn't feel like a twilight book to me!

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