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"What in the world is the "people finder"?" asked Hermione with raised eyebrows.

"It's our own spin on the Marauder's Map, but instead of showing everyone in a specific area it shows where missing people are. We thought it would come in handy with the war and everything, help find missing people faster." Fred explained, sitting on the sofa next to Tricia and winking at her. Tricia rolled her eyes and ignored him.

"But there is one hitch to our brilliant plan; you need something of the person's and specific area that you think they are in." George elaborated.

"So does it work?" Chris asked, it just seemed to good to be true.

"Have no idea, no one's gone missing that we know of." Fred sighed, now he looked around with interest.

"So who's missing that you are hoping to find?"

"My sister, but I have no idea where she might be. We need more information before we use your invention that might not work." Chris rumpled his hair and stood up. "So what's happening next month that has everyone so excited?"

"Oh, first Hogsmeade weekend so everyone is excited because we get to leave the castle." Ron explained than his face went dreamy as he thought about it. "There are Fizzing Whizbes, Drooble's gum, and chocolate. I am so happy."

Hermione snorted as Fred and George got up and wished them luck in their quest. Then Hermione got a look on her face and focused in on Harry.

'Harry, Ron and I have been thinking. We think that you should teach us Defense this year, Umbridge isn't going to and now that Vol…Vol- Voldemort is back we need proper lessons." She trailed off as she noticed his face. "Oh, Harry please think about this, don't say no straight off."

"Harry she is right, we already talked about this earlier." Chris jumped to Hermione's defense as he saw Harry's face darken with anger. "You said you would think about it and you have, all week. It's time or an answer."

"Yeah mate, think we need the skills you have because if we don't get them we die. Hermione and me have been sounding out people anyway and so of them are really interested." Rom jumped in as well when he saw that Harry was thinking about it.

"I just think that people won't want to listen to me, I'm crazy remember." Harry reasoned, he was getting tired of all the stares that he attracted from classmates.

"But Harry you will be surprised at how many people are willing to listen." Hermione left it that and waited for him to answer again.

"Alright, but I'm only giving in because you won't let me alone if I don't."

"That's fine with me; Hogsmeade weekend then we'll have a meeting."

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Life flew by, Quidditch had started and Harry and Ron and the twins had nearly died when Chris mentioned he knew nothing about it.

"Oh my poor deprived boy." Fred moaned and leaned on George for support who was wiping a tear from his face. "Fred we must help him, he is dying on the inside having never experienced a broom flight."George added and looked at Chris sadly.

"Wait brooms?" Chris asked sharply. "Oh hell no, there is no way I'm getting on a broom."

Unfortunately Chris was not listened to on this one, even Tricia was smiling as they dragged him out of the common room down to the pitch. Chris it turned out was not a natural flyer, or his broom was possessed and simply didn't like him. Anyway it shot him about 60 feet into the air and then threw him off, before anyone had a chance to act though, he merely orbed to the ground from mid-air.

"What the hell was that?" George asked in shock.

"Um orbing, it's the way that I transport myself."

"How do you learn to do that?" Fred asked with an unholy gleam in his eye.

"You don't, you have to be a whitelighter or half whitelighter like me to gain the talent." Chris said smiling. He could see the disappointment in the twins.

"Ah well there's always hope right George?"

"Right Fred."

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Chris instead found a friend and comrade in Dean Thomas. They had one major thing in common; they both played soccer and played it really well. Chris played mostly starting forward and Dean bounced around everywhere, more now because he wasn't playing all year round anymore.

They also shared stories growing up as Muggles even though Chris came from a magical family he had lived as Muggle to avoid detection. Dean had shared stories about his sisters and old friends and all the stuff they got up to, Chris his sister, cousins and Magic School. Something Dean had been fascinated by, because Chris went home every night, and still attended a Muggle school to keep up appearances. Dean missed his family and liked the idea of being able to go home.

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Chris finally received his answer from Hope about three weeks after he sent his letter. He had been getting worried so this made him feel better; he had no idea what he would do if something happened to her.

Dear Chris,

Hey it's Hope, sorry to have taken so long in answering back but I emailed you at first and then figured out that you couldn't answer because your computer didn't work there. I know another blonde moment courtesy of me. So Harry Potter is known as the Boy-Who-Lived, he defeated Voldemort the first time around and became famous for it. His parents died the same night he stopped Voldemort and his mother gave him a blood protection because she died protecting him.

Voldemort has been seen working with Wyatt recently, no one knows who the top dog in that relationship is; I put my money on Wyatt. I got your other letter about Mel, I'm glad you decided to find her. Dr. Jacobs resigned from the hospital 2 days after Mel went missing and 4 higher upper-level demons suddenly stopped all activity at the same time.

Also I looked up any other missing children that were magical and went missing at the same time. Remember Scott? He left school or so we thought, his parents haven't seen him 2 years and there are about 5 other kids that fit the profile. All were sick before they went missing and were treated somehow by Jacobs, so it is becoming more obvious that he is our guy. When you get ready to save her call me and I'll give you a hand, I want to help save her. Bye for now, I write soon, be safe okay.

Love,

Hope

Chris read the letter and smiled, it was all Hope. It made him feel better and became more up for going to Hogsmeade with the rest of the gang. Tricia was staying behind because Prue was coming for a visit and she wasn't allowed in the village.

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Hermione was excited about the meeting for the Defense class, several people had shown interest and she knew that the fact itself would cheer Harry up.

(Let's all pretend that I wrote out the whole meeting in the Hogshead alright.)

"Well I think that it was a success, don't you?" Hermione walked down the street back to school with a huge smile on her face.

"I had no idea that many people wanted to listen to me." Harry was still in shock, so what if that Hufflepuff had been a right arse, at least he had come.

"Well mate we did tell you that people wanted to listen to you, but you wouldn't listen to us." Ron said.

By now they had approached the castle and were surprised to see that Dumbledore was standing on the steps with the air of waiting for someone.

"Ah, Mr. Halliwell I was wondering if we could have a quick chat." Dumbledore didn't wait for a reply but swept down the stairs, leaving Chris to exchange a questioning look with the other who shrugged their shoulders.

He quickly walked after Dumbledore and caught up with him near the lake.

"Mr. Halliwell with the Christmas season so fast approaching I have taken it upon myself to inform you of the arrangements your father left behind."

"What arrangements? He doesn't have the right to dictate my life; he lost that privilege a long time ago." Chris snapped out.

"I happen to agree with you as it was a Darryl Morris who gave you permission to go to the village and not your father. It is my wish that you go to the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix with Harry and his friends. You will be safe there and you may help us out with information you have, and we can help you with your quest for your sister."

"What if I don't want to go?" Chris questioned, he hated it when other people decided his life for him.

"Chris you can't go home because your brother wants you dead and as he is the Source of All Evil ,he may get his way."

Chris had frozen, no one knew about Wyatt and that he had strayed from the path of light, no one. How much else did Dumbledore know?

So what know, should he find Mel, help the Order or something completely random?

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