I put a new story for Maximum Ride its called The Dearest Enemy. And I hope you like the story so far im changing it from the one i already have so i might not update as offen anymore but ill try to update everyday. :) these are my fav chapters I wrote so far.
Little Rebel
Today was a nice day, the sunny was shining, birds were singing but I had to stay inside. I hate when I have to stay inside there is never anything to do my mother talks about how when I was….blah blah…I don't even know what, I try to zone her out. They said I have been different lately more outgoing and rebellious. I think I'm fine, my mother said it's just a phase.
It all started when I got sent to the office for "disrupting the class." I didn't do anything the teacher asked me a question when I was passing a note and I gave the right answer, she took the note and moved my seat, Adam was absent that day. Then my pencil broke, I usual asked Adam for a pencil, and I got up to sharpen it and the teacher asked me to seat down and I told her I had to sharpen my pencil and I got sent to the office, how dumb, right. Then the guy gave me a warning and said he was not going to call my mother but it wouldn't matter 'cause Edward would fine out.
So Edward of course told everyone. and they gave me the we are not suppose to be causing a big sense they'll start watching….blah, blah, blah. I said it would never happened again and it didn't, but two month later I got called for PDAing (public display of affection) seriously what kind of school is this.
"Bella and Edward do it all the time," that's what I told my mother
"They weren't cutting class to do it," she said I rolled my eyes, "and who was that boy anyway,"
"His name is Adam I didn't cut I was just late and so was he,"
"Oh, and it suddenly all better," she said sarcastically, "What's up with you these days Bena. Is it me do you want to leave," her tone of voice was soft, I sighed and shook my head.
"No, mother I want you here, I don't want you to leave," I said I went to hug her, even thought I only knew my mother for a year but I knew she would do anything for me.
"Bena can you please stay out of trouble, for me then," I sighed, Edward walked in.
"Ben, someone's at the door for you," he said
"But the doorbel-, Oh I forgot, okay," I went down the stairs and went to the door I opened it. Adam was standing there his hand reaching towards the doorbell. "Heyy,"
He looked up with a 'how did you' face, I ignored it, "So what's up?" I said stepping outside closing the door behind me. It has been raining all week, it's starting to clear.
"Oh, I just wanted to see how much trouble you in," Adam said and laughed "I'm guessing not much, but I really came to say sorry for getting you in trouble," I snored
"No trouble here, just a family bonding moment," he smiled
"I'm glad, so I'll see you tomorrow then,"
"Yeah," and then we kissed the same way we did outside the school building the same way Bella and Edward do, then a sharp smell hit my nose. I backed away
"What's wrong?" he asked puzzled at my reaction
"Nothing," I ignored the smell like a always do and finished the kiss. The smell got stronger getting harder to ignore, he finally pulled away. I felt like I was going to bit him right then and there.
"Bye Bena," I wave good bye as he walked away, I quickly went inside.
Once I got in the house the door safely closed behind me, what happened the smell is never that strong? "Bena," it was my mother, "What's wrong?" she onced my puzzled look.
"Adam, he smelled" the Cullens were like two feet behind my mother now
"Of course he smells silly," she said jokingly
"Edward? He never smells, not like that, ever," my mother was waving her hand in front of my face.
"Earth to Bena,"
"She can ignore them," Edward told her and good cause I wanted to slap her hand out of my face but I couldn't after that talk we had. Edward shook his head at me, I was forgetting the mind reading thing. Lose of memory , smelling things, seriously.
"Oh darn, sorry then," she said, sorry why?
"You did it?" Edward questioned my mother she nodded
"What did she do? Mamma?"
"That's my gift I can enhance senses," anpther gift, oh no she didn't, "I knew what you're going to do, so I made him smell so you would go back inside," huh, parents are so annoying!
"Ben shh," Edward said I stuck my tongue out at him, sometimes he's to father like for me.
"You don't have to do it now I already smell your stench," I told my mother and walked away but Edward caught my arm. Just leave me alone freaky mind reader. Why can't I walk away all pissed like a normal 16 year old girl?
"You're not normal," He told me, I wish I had some freaky offensive power I can use on him right now, he growled.
"Sorry, mother for being rude. Sorry everyone," Edward let me go, I knew he was still not satisfied, but everyone else bought it expect Alice they are like a freaky vampire team don't forget Jasper Alice's evil follower.
"Bena Elizabeth! Cut it out!" Edward said I just walk up the stairs to my room, "Bena what's going to you?" I turned around
"Next week is Father's Day," I told Esme, it was more a fact then a reason. I was asking myself the same question.
That's how I ended up not being able to go outside(at all just for school), they said that I'm going to get into "trouble" and this is my punishment for being rude. But I do think something's wrong with me I would never say or do something like that before, ever. I mean Jasper Alice's evil follower, come on, seriously, I don't hate her or him that much to ever said such a thing.
"Bena Elizabeth," my mother was calling me she just found out I wasn't paying attention
"Yes, mom"
"What wrong you seem ……..lost," I gave her an 'are you kidding me' look she got the message, "I know sorry you should of-,"
"Listened, behaved, you could always talk to me I know, I know,"
"Okay good just making sure," she smiled
La Push
It's like the traffic light is yellow I want to slow down but I speed up, maybe this 'phase' is Emmett's fault, hah yeah right. Edward monitoring my thoughts now, no one knows that, but I do. He doesn't make comments about them he just listens to them, like he's reading a book and trying so hard to find the answer. I wish I knew the answer so I could tell him and he would stop. I looked at him he cringed, "Sorry," I told him the 'phase' wasn't as bad, its Spring Break so I haven't see Adam, maybe he is the problem. Probably not, I known him since I moved here, and I was perfectly fine.
Edward and Bella were sitting on the couch, Esme and Carlisle went hunting. Alice and Jasper are sitting on the floor in front of couch(when there is another perfectly good couch they could sit on) I'm sitting in a chair, Emmett and Rose are outside with my mother don't ask me I don't know what they are doing. Bella and Edward were talking about Jacob, Bella told me about Jacob once, I love when she talks about it is so interesting. She was saying something about saying good-bye but I couldn't hear the rest she was talking to low and mom dulled my senses- part of the punishment.
"Bena, can I talk to you," Alice said turning her head to face me, I looked at Edward he was listening to Bella.
"What is it?" I said
"Just remember we care about you and if you do something really bad just remember we will still love you okay, can you promise," what is she talking about?
"O….kayyy, sure I promise,"
"Okay good never forget it okay," I nodded
"Bena," it was Bella, "can you take me to La Pusha?" that's pasted the treaty line why would she ask such a stupid question, Edward flashed a glance, sorry but it was.
"No, it's to far, I will take you to the line," Edward said, why was she asking me, she has a perfect, strong, good liking able body sitting next to her.
"Why?" I asked
"Jacob wants to see you," What?! Is she serious ahe hasn't talked to me about Jacob since.....maybe a month roughly. She thinks that I would say yes becasue he wants to see me. Sometimes I think Bella dyes her hair, Edward chuckled, "What he does? I told him about you he said he wants to see you," then I picture her as a blond and I told myself she can't pull it off, I laughed.
"Bella, strong, good looking capable man," I said pointing to Edward, " and plus I'm in trouble. You would have to ask my mom," I think she wants to go to La Push or just the line to see Jacob, and know there won't be an overprotective vampire breathing down her neck. "Sorry, you know what I mean right," It was directed at Edward,
"Yeah I'll ask her right now," she dyes her hair just remember, I told myself. Bella went outside. "Mi dispiace, puoi non andare, è migliore tu non andare(I'm sorry, you can't go, it is better if you don't go) "
"That's okay your right, guardi lei, per favore(watch her, please)" Edward said
"Of course who do you think I am," I said with laughter
"You know I never got to go shopping with you," Alice said I laughed
"After La Push,"
"You are so sure that she would say yes?" Jasper asked
"Bella's family and plus my mummy loves me," I said hugging myself, they laughed.
I was right my mother did say yes, I was driving Bella to La Push. I was so nerve I didn't really know what they were like if they, are going to like me? "Stop, where here," Bella said, I was driving so fast I didn't notice how close it was. A really tall guy was walking towards us, "That Jacob," Bella told me as she step out of the car, I had that feeling, when you get pulled over when you are going to get a ticket. After a few seconds I got out, Jacob is so tall.
"So, you must be Bena," he said
"Call me Ben," I said he put out his hand, I shook it if I could sweat I would be right now, I heard a howl. I quickly pulled my hand away.
"So are you coming?" Jacob said beckoning us
"Can I come?" I asked, I knew about the treat Edward told me about it that's partly the reason why I'm scared but I bet Edward is hiding in the woods he probably thinks I'm unstable.
"Yeah, sure," Jacob seemed really nice, I smiled.
Jacob put Bella on his back and we both run to his house, he was really fast but I was faster, Of course, take that Jake. We reached, a campfire other people that were really tall and looked the same in a way, I keep my guard up.
"Hey, what's that smell," one of the boys said
"This is my cousin, Bena," Bella introduced me, I smiled I was so nervous I didn't know I smelled I shower just case, I didn't know how they smelled.
"H…hey, I took a shower," I said, I was so scared a wanted to cry why did they say I smelled, they don't smell, but on the other hand my mother dulled my senses. They laughed, Bella went to go sit down I followed her, why were they laughing.
"You can't smell us?" one of them asked, I shook my head
"Blo-vampires smell funny to us and to you we smell funny," Jacob explained I nodded
"My mother dulled my senses it was part of the punishment," I said smell? I wonder what kind.
"Oh, sorry," the guy said, I saw this bag of Goldfish, I loved goldfish, I could smell there cheesiness to bad I can't eat anymore. I sighed
"So are you really Bella's cousin or that's just you cover." Jacob asked seating next to me.
"I'm really her cousin, her dad's my dad's brother,"
"Oh, that pretty cool," I really wanted to know how this werewolf thing worked.
"Can I asked you a question," I looked, everyone else was eating, someone ate the goldfish
"Yeah, what?" Bella was talking to this other girl seating next to her.
"How does the……werewolf..thing work? Sorry you don't have to tell me," he laughed
"They didn't tell you, wow,"
"Hah, Yeah the stop telling me thing, part of the punishment," he nodded
"I'll tell you the werewolf thing if you tell me why your in trouble,"
"You don't know, Bella didn't tell you?..... Okay, I got in trouble in school then I got in trouble at home, I got out of trouble, made out with my boyfriend, insulted my mom, thought mean thoughts about Alice, Jasper and Edward, got yell at again then I gave a fake apology, and then punishment. Now it's you turn,"
"Wow,"
"Yeah, you know I was never acted like that before, my mother calls it a 'phase' but I think there is something wrong with me."
"Really?"
"Yeah," I sighed, Then he told me about the werewolf thing. In the middle of his explaining which was very interserting, I smelled that smell dulled sesnes or not, blood. I stood up my eyes darted in every dicertion. I found it and guess who it was, Bella. She fell on a log scarping her hands, that klutz.
"Bella, are you kidding me," walking torwards her, I was going to puke any second, I covered my mouth and the werewolves poeple made a barrier as if they thought I was going to attack her. "Bella, get up," my voice was faint. I couldn't hold it in I lended forward, and vomited right on some boy's feet. "Sorry," Bella was by my side now.
"Eww, what's up with her I thought she was a vampire," the boy I puked on said
"She is just turns human to the site of blood," Bella seemed faint to, then I remembered Bella gets faint at the site of blood too, oh cousin. I still had some energy before I crashed so I went to go get a wet towel and handed it to Bella.
"What are we going to do with you two," Jacob said trying not to laguh.
"Im fine," Bella said, I took a sit next to her my heart beat quicken and slowed down, and stopped.
"Bella, I'm tired," I said and closed my eyes. I felt something shaking me, my eys snapped open. "What,"
"I thought you were died," Jacob said worried, oh how sweet not I just said I was tired!
"Yes.....I'm died I been for the passed ten months so let me sleep," he chuckled, Bella was all not faint anymore my head rested on her lap.
"Hah, hah very funny, sleep Bena and you can eat later," Bella said, I smiled now sleeping
When I awoke it was only ten o'clock, "I'm hungry," I told Bella she handed me a bag of chips, "Thanks,"
"So how does your blood thing work?" Jacob asked. I sat up popping a chip in my mouth
"I don't why it happens but everytime i see human blood, I get sick. I vomit, sorry about that, my heart beat comes back and I go to sleep. I'm basicaly human for a few days."
"It's so werid," tell me about it
"So for right now I'm just like Bella, without the heart beat casue that stops once I go to sleep," he smiled
We stayed until stay a little bit longer [hah like the jonas brother song] and then we said our good byes.
"Bella do you want me to take you home?"I asked her. She yawned
"Yeah tell Edward the windows open," Edward told me about the window because I won't stop asking him where did he go every night, that he finally told me.
"Yeah, sure,"