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DISCLAIMER: I do not own the Twilight story or characters. Rosalie, Edward, and everyone else are Stephenie Meyers's exclusively.
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Ugh. Today a van nearly crushed that ridiculously plain girl and Edward had to rush to her rescue. Has he ever done anything to help me? No. Forget that I don't need him saving my life or anything equally pathetic, but does he do anything to make my life easier? Again- no. He really is going to implicate us all, expose us for what we are. And we'll have to go running off again like cowards, hiding. Probably another country for a few decades. Most likely somewhere remote where I can't even keep up with myself the way I like. I'll be expected to bathe in a river. Ick. No. I'm not moving again because he can't control himself. Or think, for that matter. He seems to have left his brain back in Denali, among other things…
I'll kill him for today. Better yet, I'll kill her. I won't drink from her. No, I don't want any of her floating around in me, anyways. No one would have any reason to suspect one of us to be responsible for her death. Humans die in their sleep every night, right? It has to be done and since he isn't man enough to clean up his own mess, I guess I'll just have to be woman enough.
I still can't believe he raced across the lot to catch that stupid boy's car. Did he forget about his super human speed or does he just no longer care now that the silly girl is involved? Either way, I'm calling a family meeting when we get home. Something has to be done about this girl. It's nothing personal against her, mind you. She only bugs me, gets under my skin. I never would have wished her dead- until now. Until Edward lost control of himself and left eyewitnesses and evidence in his wake today. I think Edward should be forced to take care of it himself. Stupid, pompous idiot. Can we really make him just drink from her and move on? It's getting old, watching him walk around, brooding.
Well, the meeting served pointless. Edward offered to leave, alone, but that would have only exacerbated the problem. Moron. We need him here now. We're stuck with him. Now we need to know what everyone is thinking, even if he can't read her thoughts. Jasper was on my side, even if for slightly different reasons. And Emmett. My big grizzly man. The big lout. He had to be on my side. He wouldn't dare cross me. I couldn't believe Carlisle was so against taking care of this. Him, of all people, I thought would be in preference of eliminating any possible danger. But no. Even he saw her measly little life as valuable, even if it was she that could destroy us all. The only good thing that came of it, was Edward finally realized he is in love with that child. Alice had to point it out to him, in their cryptic, maddening way. Then I had to enlighten poor Emmett when he couldn't keep up with Edward and Alice's mind games. I remember making it clear that Alice saw Edward falling for a human. "How classically Edward," I stated. And then I literally gagged. Em laughed. It is funny. Or it would be, if it weren't so disgusting. But whatever. Let Edward sit and stew in this mess. Tough break. I'd like to see him bat his eyes out of this one!