I Do Not Own CSI

"What's taking so long in there," Jacob said, pounding on the bathroom door where Sara was still inside.

"I'm just finishing up," Sara yelled back as she turned the taps off.

"If you're not out in ten seconds your lover boy is going to get another shot to the gut, he called as Sara opened the door.

"Sorry, I'm a girl, it takes us longer."

"Whatever, get back to the couch," Jacob ordered.

"Have you figured out what you're going to do yet, Jacob," Gil asked.

"A little."

"Care to share with the rest of us," Gil asked, trying to keep him talking.

"No, now shut your mouth so I can think," Jacob said, pacing as Sara took her sear beside Gil.

"They're on their way," Sara whispered in Gil's ear as he nodded.

"Hey, what are you two talking about over there, and I wouldn't lie," Jacob said, pointing the gun.

"Hey man, no need to aim the gun," Nick asked.

"Shut up!"

"Now, what were you whispering over there?"

"I whispered that I miss our sons. This is the longest I have been away from them," Sara answered.

"I could make that permanent, how about that," Jacob said, aiming the gun at Sara's head.

"Hey," Gil said angrily, as tears started to form in Sara's eyes.

"Jacob, what are you doing," Maddie said, scared. She had never seen Jacob like this before.

"Put that gun away," Gil said, clenching his fists.

"Or what," Jacob said, never thinking that Maddie would dive into him, trying to wrestle the gun away from him. Nick and Grissom jumped in as Sara scrambled away.

Hands pulled at one another, legs tangled, all trying to gain control of the gun. Then the gun was pulled down and a shot went off.

"We have shot's fired," Jim yelled as he, the team, and many police cruisers pulled up in front of Nick's house.

"Do we know who shot it and if anyone was hurt," was yelled out. SWAT was getting their gear set up.

"Not yet, let's see if Jacob will pick up the landline."

"Oh god, Maddie," Nick said as blood started to pool around her, she took the shot in her shoulder.

"Maddie," Jacob said as the house phone started to ring.

"LVPD, THE HOUSE IS SURROUNDED!"

"What, how the hell, what did you do when you were in the bathroom," Jacob yelled, again aiming his gun at Sara.

"Nothing, I didn't do anything," Sara said as Gil again took a stance somewhat in front of her.

"Liar!"

"Jacob, Maddie needs to get to a hospital, she's losing too much blood!"

"You want to run away with Maddie? She's going to need help, Jacob. She need's to see a doctor before she dies," Sara said, butting in.

"We need to keep pressure on her wound. Maddie, are you still with us," Gil asked.

"Huurrtts"

"I know, just stay awake, ok," Gil asked as she slowly nodded and Nick grabbed the blanket off the couch to hold over the bullet hole.

"She needs a doctor," Gil said as he watched Sara kneel down beside Maddie.

"Shut up, shut up, shut up," Jacob said frustrated, as he started to pace again, using the gun to scratch his head.

"Jacob, let her out of here, get her some help. You still have us three as hostages," Sara said.

"And then what? I'm dead no matter what."

"Then let us go. You don't have a murder charge on your head, yet," Gil said.

"THIS IS JIM BRASS FROM THE LVPD, IS ANYONE HURT?" The house phone started to ring again.

"You may want to answer that," Nick said angrily, tears in his eyes.

"Hello," Jacob yelled.

"Is this Jacob?"

"Yes."

"Is anyone hurt inside? We heard shots." When Jim got no answer, he started to panic a bit.

"Jacob, is anyone hurt?"

"Yes."

"Who?"

"Maddie, the gun went off accidently."

"How do you want this to go down, Jacob? You can walk out or you can leave in a body bag," he said, as Jacob hung up the phone slowly. He looked over at Maddie lying on the floor, her blood pool getting bigger.

"Maddie, stay with us, don't close your eyes," Sara pleaded, stroking Maddie's face.

"Sara, thank you."

"No, no goodbyes, Maddie. We're getting out of this. Jacob, she needs to get to the hospital now!"

"Jacob!"

"Are you listening? She needs help"

"Jacob," Sara said through a sob as she turned back to Maddie. Jacob seemed to be in a daze, not even listening.

"Stay with us, Maddie," Nick said, pressing on the wound harder.

"What have I done," Jacob whispered as Sara, Nick and Gil all tried to tend to Maddie. Gil was the only one who seemed to have heard Jacob.

"Oh god, what have I done. I just wanted Maddie, and she's dead."

"Not yet, Jacob, let us get her help," Gil said softly, even though the words never reached Jacob's dazed out state.

"If she's dead I have no reason for living."

"Jacob, don't do this," Gil said.

"I killed her."

"Jac….," Gil yelled as another shot went off.

"Enough! Get in there," Jim ordered as cops barged down the front doors, seeing one lifeless body on the floor while the other one was fading fast.

"We need the paramedics!"

TBC

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