AN: This isn't an update so sorry for everyone who thought it was but I'm basically putting this up because I'm not sure when I am going to update again.
I just got a really negative review (See below) and while I do appreciate constructive criticism this was just plain rude and quite upsetting. I have never claimed to be the best writer but I thought I was doing okay. Anyway I know I shouldn't let this get to me but it has put me on a downer in terms of continuing to write.
Review:
"OMG! I had to make an account just to tell you how bad this story is! It is so unrealistic, poorly written, out of character, radical feminist etc etc etc it is painful to me. I wish I could erase the time I spent reading it or ever getting a glimpse of what a pathetic writer you are. OK now that I got that out of my system,
Try researcher how children really talk and how men really behave. Just because you like a character, don't neglect your other ones. Also, more description is needed in between dialogue. Thats my basics for constructive criticism for you. Good luck and maybe just quit."
Anyway to all my readers and reviewers thankyou for your support and I WILL finish this story but for the time being I think I'm going to take a short break.