Here's number 2, ringing in at a little over 200 words. A good bit shorter than 1, yes?
Again, any comment is appreciated. You'll be hard pressed to hurt my feelings.
Enjoy.
2. Sniper- Misa
Misa sighed, bored, and let her head fall forward to prop on her fist and, pouted as she blew a thin strand of stray hair out of her face. She didn't understand why Raito had put her here, it was a boring position and there hadn't been any movement from the room she was supposed to be watching in hours. Her eyes caught the movement of curtains a couple floors down, and giggled as the curtains pressed against the balcony door in the vague shape of a human. She knew she should have looked away for many reasons, the most important being Raito wanted her to watch another room, but she was so bored. She giggled more when the curtains gave way and two forms fell to the floor, and picked up her binoculars for a better look. She gasped, seeing one of the people on the ground. While his face was a little hard to see from her angle, the bright red Yagami Raito over his head left no room for speculation. She scanned the room frantically for the second person but he was no longer near the window. Who could her Raito possibly be half naked in some hotel room with?! She gasped as the other person came back into view. She glared at the other man, eyeing his name carefully, and fighting the urge to write it down in the notebook open on the table next to her. "Ryuuzaki! You Raito-stealing bastard!"