Hello!!! This is my 2nd fanfic!!! AND it's a realish story...NOT a songfic!!!=) I know, I know, your proud...me too!!! (P.S. There is a very subtle((at least I think so)) The Final Warning spoiler....it is small(((at least I think so...if you haven't noticed, I care deeply about ruining the book))), so if I ruin the book for you((((I don't think I will it's not a big thing)))) see the triple "(" just cuz I can't spell that...=)

Disclaimer: No. Not me. That's all James Patt over there *looks at James Patt longingly* I'm so envyess...but if I did, there would be no books, and the people would suck...so would the plot...probably...

Max, Voice, Angel

Max-

We were flying over some state with a beach...you all know how I just love beaches...So the Flock wanted to land (including FANG!!) and I said no. Everyone started to argue, first about the beach, then about just plain random things that happened between them. Fang and I were arguing about how his wings were "cooler" than mine. Right. No. We've had this discussion before. But he just can't drop it....NOOOOOOO! GOD! He is sooo stubborn! Nudge and Iggy were fighting about...the color of Nudge's shirt. Nudge was standing by her " You're blind!! How would you know?!?" and Iggy was standing by his " I know what color it is! 'Member? New power?!" Okay...Angel, Gazzy, and Total were fighting about God knows what. In the end, everyone was mad at each other and we're at the beach...mostly because we arguing for a good hour, just hoveringt above the beach and now our wings hurt. We started to walk down the beach when Fang looked a girl. UGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

That sholuden't bother me. WHY does that bother me???Ah, I know, I'm going crazy!

Maximum, you know that's not it. Just admit it.

UGH! Go AWAY! You are the worst voice that someone could have in their head....ever!

Do you listen to yourself think or is it a rushing sound?

Says the voice, I shut the Voice out just as Fang snapped in my face.

"What?" I said, annoyed.

"I'm talking to you! I said, this girl has never heard of Maximum Ride or Fang's blog." My mouth dropped. No one elses did though. I must have missed that part...Crap! Stupid voice-in-my-head! You know the jaw dropping is my favorite part of new..news!!!

I'm sorry Maximum.

You better be.

"Hey!" Fang yelled at me.

"WHAT?!" I snapped back.

"I was talking"-again-"what's with you?"

"Internal conflict." I answered. He understood.

"Anyway, I was thinking we tell Lissa, that's her name, about the Flock and Maximum Ride." Fang said. Lissa?! Her name is Lissa?? I think she is following the Flock and just dyed her hair.

It's a different girl, Maximum. I grimaced. Whatever. "OK. So we tell her about and Maximum Ride...Maybe we could show her some pictures of their wings...ask her whose is coolest. I like Max's..." I look at Fang.

Fang says that he could win that even without telling whose wings were whose. Angel told me.

Tell him I said dream on...then tell the rest of the Flock to keep their wings hidden, and not to tell the girl that we're the Flock...we wouldn't want her decision about the wings to be bias.

OK

Then she told them. They looked at me and nodded , except for Fang who looked at me and smirked. I didn't need Angel's power to know what he was thinking. He thought that I thought that he was hot. As if.

You DO!!

SHUT UP!! I yelled in my head. Jeez! The Voice is soooo annoying!!

And that is the end of chapter one!!! Yes I know, I know (wow I sound so redundent today) it was a to the mazing(thank you Abby..) and now you have to go review and I shouldn't keep you waiting. I'm sorry. BUT! I think (personally) that the next chapter is TONS-O-BETTER so keep reading and I think I can get the second chapter out tonight 'cause I like to start my stories with 2 chapters so you can decide if you want to keep reading or not...=)

speekTheeofDevil A.K.A. Jayd