Here we go. next chapter. YAY! Enjoy.
"Hey David, do you think we got Sun in trouble?" Kris and David always went to hang out at the lake after work. It allowed them to clear their minds of all the insults they would get from their boss.
"Trouble? I think we saved her. She was obviously suffering."
"I'm just worried. Don't worry, as long as she had her sis, you, me and…"
"Don't say it." Kris quickly covered David's mouth with his hand before he could finish he sentence. David's eyes widen at the reaction of his friends, was mentioning 'him' a bad thing? Kris looked to the right, then to the left, to see if the coast was clear. With a sigh of relief, he removed his hand from David's mouth.
"Dude, your hand taste like fish."
"I bet your hand taste like fish also, dummy. We work in a place that makes and sells fish. What do you expect?"
"They don't make fish, they catch fish. Now come on, my mom must be getting worried about us." David stood up before Kris. He would have taken a step if his arm was suddenly grabbed and jerked back down, forcefully.
"RACE YA!" Kris shoved David to the side to start running.
"YOU'RE ON!"
Now, usually Choo was the calm one with an angry side to him. But Arlong and Kuroobi just discovered that he was crazy and annoying. On their way to David's house, Choo just wouldn't shut up.
"Are we there yet?"
"No."
"Are we there yet?"
"No."
"Are we there yet?"
"SHUT UP ALREADY!"
"But I need to take out my anger already. So…Are we there yet?"
"Arlong, make him shut up."
"Choo, one more 'are we there yet' and I will do something to you that you will absolutely hate."
"And what might that be?" Choo stopped in his tracks and crossed his arms over his chest, waiting for the answer.
"It involves you and the girl."
"I'll shut up." The three continued to walk towards their destination. The house they were looking forward was just a few miles ahead of them. Images of torture techniques that Choo was going to use on the boys were playing through his head.
Arlong was the one to knock on the door. If Choo would have done that, the door would have broken down. The door was answered by a very sweet looking woman, with a big smile on her face.
"Can I help you?"
"Is your son here?" It was at that point that the smile disappeared in her face.
"What do you want with my son?"
"Nothing of any harm, hopefully. We just need to talk to him and his friend."
Kris and David were stilling racing, and since boys are highly competitive (A.N. at least I think. But some don't care) none of them were showing any sign of receding. The two were right at the door when it was forced opened by Choo, he grabbed onto them both by the neck, pulled them and hoisted them up high in the air.
"I really want to kill you two." He said through clenched teeth. "You two got in the way of my date with Sun." His hands gripped even tighter around the boys' necks. Kris and David were trying to pry his hands off their neck.
"Choo, put them down now. We don't need any trouble." Choo just scoffed and dropped the boys, who were caught by Kuroobi. He forced the two boys to sit on the floor.
"Ok Choo, continue." Arlong and Kuroobi stood back.
"I pretty much said it all. I want to KILL YOU! Sun is now mine and anybody who dares to step in the way will pay."
"How much?"
"David, now's not the time for jokes."
"I wasn't joking." Kris gave David the 'are you serious?' look.
"Anyway, back to where we were..."David looked right into Choo's eyes. "You don't scare me." Kris covered David's mouth, again.
"When will you learn to control your mouth?" David pushed Kris's hand away. "It's not us you should be worried about Choo."
"Shut it shut it shut it. Don't say it." Kris was now really freaking out. If David said it, Sun would be in some deep trouble.
"Don't say what?" Choo bent down to be eye-level with the boys. "Tell me." His eyes glared at them.
"Now look what you did." Kris hit David's head. "You tell him now."
"You tell him." David argued back.
"You mentioned it, I'm not about to get killed. You tell him."
"One of you better tell me before I actually do kill." Choo interrupted them.
"Fine." David took a deep breath. "Sun has a boyfriend."
"I know that, I'm her boyfriend, are all you boy humans' idiots?"
"You're the idiot, you big lip freak, you aren't her boyfriend. Kyle is." Choo anger rose to an all-time high.
"Who.Is.This.Kyle?"
Choo had walked Sun home right after the date. She was happy that her two friends were able to distract her from that date, but she was also upset at herself. She had forgotten to bring someone over to fix the door.
Looking up at the stars, she remembered her dad. How he would tuck her in at night, but then she'd complain about not being a baby anymore, but then he's say she will always be his baby, even when he's gone. Her eyes started to shake before tears started to come.
"Can I seat here?" Sun looked up at the person who had just spoken to her. "Kyle."
Kyle had bright green eyes that shined perfectly in the moonlight; His hair soft brown hair fell just past his ears; His lips perfectly shaped, to many girls' delights: All that was just his face, when it came to his body…it was just too good for words.
"Sure." Kyle took his seat right next to his girlfriend and put her arm around her. "You can cry. There's nobody else here but me." Kyle felt his shirt suddenly get wet. But along with the tears, came a threat.
"Don't tell…"
"I know, or else you'll kill me." Sun chuckled a little before she resumed her crying.
"You do know I'm trying to think of a plan to save you, right?"
"I know, but you need to be careful." Sun lifted to head to stare into Kyle's eyes.
"I'm always careful. I can take on those mermen."
"I'M SERIOUS!" Kyle shook from the sudden change in her tone. She never yelled…ok yeah she did, but never at him. "You can get yourself killed and I've already lost two things in life. I don't need to lose another."
"Two things?"
"My father and my freedom." Kyle didn't know what to say about this. Obviously, this subject was bringing down the mood severely. He needed to get off the subject and fast.
"I realized that your door is broken, are you going to sleep in a house with a broken door? If you want, you and your family can come stay at my house. I'll come over in the morning to fix the door for you."
"How could Sun lie to me like this?" The three mermen were already back at Arlong Park. As soon as Choo had heard about Kyle, he went on a rampage. Anything he got his hands on, he broke. Glass, furniture, walls, chairs: you name it. After all that was a big blur to him.
"You didn't exactly ask her anything about her personal life; you just assumed she would be single." Kuroobi was in Choo's room, trying to talk down his partner. Maybe he could convince him to actually break up with that girl now.
"Yeah, but she won't have him for long."
"Not another visit."
"Yes, another visit."
"But you don't even know where he lives."
"Kuroobi, whoever said we were going to his house. We're going to Sun's tomorrow morning."
"I'm surprised Arlong hasn't stepped in to stop all of this foolishness yet."
"Kuroobi." Choo laid down on his back. "He doesn't care as long as he gets money."
The next morning, sure enough, Choo and Kuroobi (Arlong didn't want to wake up.) were on their way to Sun's house. When they got there, Choo was shocked to see a boy in front of the house.
"Kuroobi, Sun doesn't have any boy relatives, does she?" Kuroobi pulled out his list that had all the names of every villager on the island. He looked for whatever name Sun's family was under and scanned through it.
"Nope." Choo just nodded to acknowledge the answer. He calmly started walking towards the young boy, who unknown to him at the time, is Kyle.
"Hey you boy." Kyle turned around, being face-to-face with the merman who causing his girlfriend pain.
"Can I help you?" Kyle's grip on the box of tools tightens as he kept staring at Choo.
"Maybe you can, why are you at Sun's house and who are you?"
"I'm here to repair the door that was broken. And my name's Kyle, I'm Sun's REAL boyfriend." Kyle would have continued talking, if it wasn't for Kuroobi sneaking up behind him and knocking him out. Kuroobi lifted him over his shoulder.
"You can talk to him at Arlong Park. It'll be easier."
Meanwhile, Sun and her sister were sitting up in bed, trying their best to figure out what to do about the situation they were in.
"What are you going to do if he asks you out on another date? And what about Kyle?" Rae kept asking that same question over and over, Sun was still tired from her crying last night.
"Could you stop asking and actually go to sleep? I'm so tired from yesterday." Sun flopped onto her back and let sleep take her over. Rae, on the other hand, couldn't sleep. She remembered how much she and mom worried yesterday; how much her mother cried to her, saying that she wished that this never happened.
"I wish I could find a way to make her happy again." Rae whispered as she looked at her mother's sleeping form. She noticed that her mother still had tears in her eyes.
"I don't know what to do, I need you dad."
"I give myself three guesses as to what happened." Kyle said to himself as he tugged on the chains that kept him still. "And my guess is that I just got kidnapped."
"You couldn't be more right." Kyle looked up at the door to see the three famous mermen standing right there. "Is there some kind of big problem that you had to go as far as to kidnap me?" He smirked when he heard the growl that came from Choo.
"Let's just cut straight to the point." Choo took a few steps forward
"Wait, if all you want to do is talk, then why are they here?" Choo looked back to his two comrades. "They're here to keep me from losing control. But enough about me, let's talk about you. How long have you and my girl been dating?"
"First off, she's not yours. And we were dating long before you came here."
"Answer me this, is she the most important thing in your life?"
"Of course she is."
"But what about…" Choo motioned for Kuroobi to bring him the list with all the names. "Your mother, your father, your little sister, your little brother, your cousins, do they all fail in comparison to Sun? Is she more important than all of the people I have just listed?" He stood there, waiting patiently for Kyle's answer.
All Kyle did though was lower his head. He liked Sun a lot, but his family…
"Tell me." Choo got closer and closer to him. "If Sun and your mom were in a fire and only one could be saved, who would it be? Would you save your mom, she is the person that gave birth to you, or would you save Sun?"
Kyle knew what he was doing, Choo was playing mind games with him. The bad thing in this was that he was getting ready to win.
"No answer still…Well, to make this easier on you, I could just go and kill your family. Then all you'll have is Sun." Choo turned around to head for the exit.
"NO STOP!!" Kyle desperately pulled at his chains to get free. "DON'T HURT THEM, I'LL DO ANYTHING!"
'I win.' Choo thought to himself. He turned around to look at the pathetic boy that just fell for all his tricks.
"Anything you say? Will you break up with Sun?" Kyle knew that was coming, he tried his hardest to not let Choo see the tears.
"Yes."
"Wait, I just thought of something even better. You'll break up with her, but you'll do it in front of me."
"What do you mean?" Choo unlocked Kyle's chains.
"I mean, you'll crush her spirit, make her cry. And I'll be right there to see it happen."
"Why do you want to see her cry?"
"Cause she needs to learn a lesson. And that lesson is to never keep secrets from me. And also that no other man can have her but me." Kyle slowly stood up, but could barely stay standing. His whole body was shaking with sadness. He couldn't believe he was about to do this. While walking to the exit, Choo called out towards him.
"Oh, and one more thing Kyle." Choo grabbed his shoulder to stop him. "You need to let Kris, David, and any other boy in this village that they can't protect her. Spread the word: Sun belongs to me."
Next chapter: Will Kyle actually break Sun's heart? or will he find a way to save both this family and his love.
and I would like to just point out: all of my OC characters are based off of real friends. Katie(friend); Rae(best friend, i like to call her my sister); David and Kris(really good friends, almost like brothers); Kyle(he is actually a guy i use to know. he use to bother me a lot so I really didn't like him. But I just decided to use him for this.)
Thank you for reading. Please review.