This is a short one. It's a year after chapter 1-3 and we're in the POV of the Eevee kit, who now has a name. Crazy, right?
Just thought I'd share this with you guys, when somethings in italics, like this,it's the character pretty much talking to themselves.
I even made this nifty little graph!
Italics : Character talking to themselves.
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I stalked my prey, my brown fur blending in perfectly with the forest around me. I was a trained hunter, ready for any situation that was brought up. A skilled fighter, and deadly assassin. Nothing could stop me. The world was completely silent, not even the chirp of a flock of Spearow. I grinned maliciously, now nothing could distract my prey. My heart was racing, my tail was wagging, and I ready to savor the hunt. I locked on to my target, waiting for an opening, for the perfect moment to strike and send my pray to hell...
"3...2...1!" I mentally counted down, and pounced on my unsuspecting prey. She put up a fight, but as expected it ended in her demise. Or... me winning the game.
"Fine, fine, you win just get off of me Saph!" the young Eevee kit yelled, trying to push me off of her. I smiled triumphantly.
"Told ya I could pin you down, Kera." I took note of her defeated look. I happily got off of her, walking away smugly.
Kera was an Eevee kit, about a month younger than me. She was Blake and Krystal's daughter, and obviously my best friend. She was a light shade of brown and almost always had a smile on her face. Her neck and tail were snow-white, and her eyes were gold. Although she was mostly nice, and very friendly, she did have her wild side. It must come from being Blake's kit, I snickered.
She followed me persistently, as he we headed back to the clearing that we lived in.
"Home..." I thought to my himself, "or at least, the closest thing I had to one."
My parents had died in a sneak attack from an enemy tribe. Blake, an Umbreon, helped me when two Rockets attacked me in the woods. Blake ended up leading me o my home, only to find the destruction that had once been my home. Blake found my parents quickly. They both died in the sneak attack. Blake had told me that there was signs of a struggle, so they didn't go down without a fight. It relieved me that my parents weren't cowards and had fought to keep their home. When I grew up I wanted to be just like them. After all this had happened, Blake introduced me to his mate, Krystal. They were quick to offer me a home to stay, and for that I was forever in there debt.
I shook off the thoughts, getting focused on the task at hand: getting home. This, naturally, wasn't as easy as it sounded. Although we were still quite young at 1 1/4 years old we often wandered far away from our clearing.
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After about an hour of extremely monotonous walking and small talk, we made it to the clearing. I lethargically laid down on my bed, Kera following, sitting next to me and sighing.
"Next time lets not go out so far. It's always so hard on my feet getting back." she frowned, and held up her hind leg and rubbed it with her paws.
"Aww, is poor little Kera's foot hurt?" I teased, we laughed and continued to play. I was about to pounce on her when I froze in mid-air with a blue aura around me. I looked over to see Blake smirking.
"Calm down. It's almost time to eat." he said, with a tone of authority looking strangely at me as I tried to swim down to the ground.
"You're lucky I wasn't ready or there's no way this would've worked..." I grumbled as he spun me upside down, causing my tail to fall forward and whack me in the face.
"I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you, could you repeat that?" he said laughing, while throwing me in the air and catching me as I was about to hit the ground.
He stopped in a few minutes, going over to his bed across the clearing, waiting for Krystal to get back with dinner. My head was still spinning as I looked around our clearing. It was pretty bare. And quite small, the size of a small house. My bed was next to a small river that flowed towards a human city. I was told to go nowhere near the city, unless I wanted a repeat of what happened a year ago. I shuddered thinking about it. Kera's bed was located about 3 meters away from mine, right at the foot of a large oak tree. Blake and Krystal's bed were located across the clearing. They used a bag that a traveler dropped as a pillow. I allowed my mind to wander for a few more minutes until Krystal got back from getting dinner. She had picked about a weeks worth of oran berries for both Kera and me. They were my favorite, of course. Kera was fond of them to but preferred Sitrus. She had also brought back a deceased Raticate for herself and Blake.
"All right, dig in guys." Krystal barely had time to complete her sentence before Kera and I were all over the berries, and Blake was all over the Raticate. Krystal sighed, joining in on Blake's feast.
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