Edward's chest vibrated as he hummed, it was a song I didn't recognize.

"What are you humming?" I asked him thru the wind. I knew he would hear me.

"A song." he said.

"Well duh. What song?" he stopped humming.

"Well I was kinda writing it for you." he said. I noticed that we had slowed a little.

"Really?! Wow two songs!" I said with enthusiasm. I really was surprised he had just written me a song a year ago. I could tell that he was modest about the whole song writing thing so I attempted to change the subject. "Where are you taking me?"

I hoped he didn't notice my attempt to change the subject, if he did he didn't show it.

"We're almost there." he said as his pace quickened a little. We were quiet for a while. It wasn't an akward silence, just a peaceful one. I noticed that the temperature was dropping as he continued to 'walk'. I shivered involuntarily. He stopped walking and set me down on the ground. The ground was grassy but hard and cold. I tried to think of where he was taking me.

I had nothing.

The coat was pulled from my arms. Before I could even process the cold something plush and warm was on my arms and shoulders. I heard the jacket being zipped. Edward kissed my nose. Then he made his way down to my neck where he breathed me in. I was light headed again.

He picked me up again. He continued to walk for about another 5 minutes. "We're here." he said as he set me down not facing him. His cold hands started to gently undo the blind fold. I opened my eyes. I gasped. It was so beautiful.

We were in a clearing surrounded by trees. It was kinda like the meadow. Except this one was smaller and had freshly mown grass. The trees' canopy stretched over the clearing, the sun managed to shine thru in a few spots.There was another green blanket on the ground in the center of the clearing. There was a vase of wild flowers on the blanket. In the right back corner, there was a frozen pond with two pairs of skates on the wooden bench next to it. I looked thru some gaps in the leaves and noticed we were on a mountain. I didn't really care where we were, as long as we were alone.

"So what do you want to do?" Edward whispered in my hair as he wrapped his arms around my waist.

"Whatever you want to do." I said. I didn't care as long as he was there I was entertained enough.

"How about you eat." he said as he walked me towards the blanket that I noticed a picnic basket had suddenly appeared on.

"K." I said. I sat down on the blanket,"What's on the menu?"

"Hmm. Well deer, but I suppose I could just eat you." He smiled and looked up at me thru his long lashes with my favorite crooked smile. I struggled for words.

"Well that sounds delicious but I meant for the human."

"Oh. But I was looking forward to my meal." he joked as he pulled out a sandwich from the basket. He also pulled out a bottle of water, chips, and a cookie.

"Did you pack this?" I asked surprised. Usually he couldn't cook a pop tart.

"No Alice did. What you don't think I could pack you a good lunch?" he asked teasingly as he leaned towards me.

"No I don't think you could pack me a good lunch." I teased back triing to ignore the light headedness.

"Well I can hunt better than you." he still had my favorite smile on.

"Yah I bet you can. But I've never hunted so I wouldn't know."

"Hmm." he said as he set the food in front of me. He examined my every move as I ate. I blushed a few times when I swallowed and his eyes were glued to my throat. When I got done eating he was looking at my throat still.

"Edward," I said as I put the wrappers in the basket. I looked back at him and almost gasped. His eyes that had been gold a moment before were now black and hungry. "Edward are you ok?"

At first he didn't answer, when he did his words were slow and serious. "Bella.. ... I think I'm ready."

"For what?"

He paused but never looked up. "To give up my virtue."

I almost choked. He looked up at me. That didn't help the whole choking situtation though. His eyes were pitch black. Hungry, but not for blood.

"If you don't want to that's ok." he said as his gaze looked above my head. I could tell that he was ready now. And that's all that I had been waiting for. I thought for a minute. Was this what I wanted? Did I want it now? My answer to both questions were yes.

"Yes." I said to him. His eyes whipped back to mine.

"Really?"

"Yah let's do it. I'm ready." and I was. I was ready for anything he wanted me to do.

"Ok then."

He moved the basket aside and leaned towards me. I breathed in his scent, he seemed to be doing the same thing. Edward kissed me. But this kiss wasn't like every other kiss. It was fierce, wanting, urgent, but still gentle. My breath now came in short gasps. I closed my eyes as Edward's cold, anxious hands undid the top button on my blouse.


Ok I changed some parts of it. Mostly how Edward tells Bella that he wants them to have sex. But anyway. Let me know which way you liked it better if you read it before.