AN: This chapter is dedicated to my reviewers, CrystalHeart01, The REAL Alice Cullen, 9pyrochick6, Nicole, Insanity's Partner, Moonchild101713, Mrs. Edward Anthony Mason Cullen, oscar the grouch, jajadl, Rose, LilyAlice, and any I missed. Thanks for the reviews! I got 12 reviews!! Here is the next chapter! PS: There will be some Pov changing.
Disclaimer: If I was Stephanie Meyer, then why would I be writing this?
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Chapter 4: Different Point of View
The change had begun…
Fire. All. Over. My. Body. "Plllllleeeaaaasssseee!!! Make the fire stop! Mom, help me!" I screamed, but it was useless, I was becoming one of them. I was surrounded in darkness and everything was hurting. I felt my mom's cool hands trying to help me but to no avail. I was pulled under the water and there was no one who could pull me out…
Renee's Pov:
She wouldn't stop screaming. My hands were on her forehead and I tried to help her but I knew no one could. This is the worst pain I have ever gone through, I knew it would be bad, but it seems she's getting the worst of it. I'm just sitting here with her, unable to help her in any way. She turns and her neck is in my view, I can see her jugular, oh it looks tasty…No! Bad Renee!! She is your daughter who is becoming a vampire! She started whimpering and it looks like she was knocked out. That didn't happen with me but maybe it has to do with other pains that she is going through. That Edward put her through, that vile excuse for a boy. How dare he throw her out like garbage! Oh well, since she is out, all I can do is wait…
Edward's Pov:
One year, one long, frustrating year. One whole year without my love. One year longer than I thought I'd survive. I was ready to kill myself when I left her, not because of my pain, but because of hers. When I told I didn't want her that was the biggest lie I've ever told. I was doing okay, when her face crumbled. I couldn't take it, my face crumpled in pain, but I turned it into that mask of unfeeling once again. She looked like her whole world was falling or as if she was dying. Oh, how I wanted to take the pain away! I thought I couldn't feel any worse that I was leaving her, when her voice talked to me and it too was unfeeling. "Well, that changes things." That one sentence almost killed me. When I walked away, I heard her following and I ran to the other side and fell down dry sobbing for 3 hours. When I got up it was dark and I came here, to my family in Denali. Tonia hasn't been leaving me alone and it's getting frustrating. Here she comes now…
Three Days Later:
Bella's Pov:
I was conscious and I could tell the atmosphere was different. Maybe it was my new vampire senses. Oh My God. I'm a vampire!! Finally, I get what I want. I open my eyes, and there in front of me is…
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I know, I'm so mean, right? This will be my last chapter before I leave to go to Hupa to visit my family. I'm sorry for those of you(if any) who are like me with my favorite stories and will die inside until the next chapter and I hope I get even more reviews than last time though there is no requirement. I love all of you and I will be back here and writing on the 30th. See you then!
-Edwardjustproposed
