Hello again fan fiction-reading peeps! Let me just say I am sooooooo thankful for all the reviews! All the encouragement totally pumps me up.
Now a few comments on the last 2 SN episodes…if anyone cares:
What Is and What Should Never Be (or whatever the title was, their getting waaay too long anyway) :first off, wow great idea, something new for a change!!!! YAY, totally had fun with the "Apple Pie lifestyle" as Dean put it in "Bugs" loved the lawnmower scene. Second- I totally called the genie taking poor Dean's bl00d as soon as they found that poor dear who said daddy, I knew and felt utterly horrible for that hunting hottie.
All Hell Breaks Loose part 1: good title, looks like it holds true to the upcoming episode by the look of the previews. (wipes tear away from eyes) Well it's the end of the second season (sniff) I knew it was gonna be soon but I still don't want it to be over. Ooo important point, does anyone notice how the writers are kind of racist, both of the evil bass who seem to do the most damage to our 2 beautiful heroes (not including the yellow eyed dude) are black, first Gordon then the superman rip off (whose name escapes me at this moment) who is now responsible for all my troubles…grrrrrr. n e way, looks like Dean's in for a hell of a fight without his partner! Guess we're stuck w/ bobby for the time being. Can't wait for the next episode!!!
Enough of my comments now, here's the next chapter.
OMG WAIT!!! P.S. ASH IS NOT DED!!!!!!!!!!! DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!?! HE'S NOT!!! HE LOST THAT RETARDED WATCH IN A POKER GAME WITH THE MILDLY ARRTACTIVE COWBOY WHO BY THE WAY HE SMILED LOOKED LIKE HE CAME STRAIGHT OFF BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not even kidding.
K, um, now on to the story, I promise no more interruptions
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Chapter 14
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"So, where to now?" Dean asked when they reached their awaiting cars.
"The warehouse" Amanda and Hannah said in unison.
"But what about the Colt?" Sam asked.
"We'll have to manage without it for now, you guys have silver knives right?" Amanda replied.
"Yep…then lets roll." Dean said unlocking the Impala.
Sam turned to get in the passengers seat but his brother held him back, "Hang on pal, shotgun after that little stunt? You're findin' you own ride."
Sam smirked, "Fine, I'll just go with Amanda and Hannah. They probably listen to better music than you anyway."
"Great, hop in." Amanda said, "I'm drivin'."
"In that case," Hannah said getting back out of the Bug's passenger's seat, "I'm goin' with Dean, we'll follow you"
Dean smiled, "Alright! Finally, decent music without Mr. Gay Boy Band Lover over there." Then got in the behind the wheel.
By the time they reached the Cumberland Warehouse, the sun had almost completely sunk below the City's horizon, and Lake Michigan was still glimmering with the tiny rays of light that still remained.
"Ready to go waste some vampires?" Hannah asked after Dean had parked.
"Sweetheart, I've been ready since I got into this city's limits, I've just been a little…distracted" Dean smirked as he got out of the Impala to load up on necessary weapons.
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"Alright, who's gonna pick the lock?" Amanda whispered as they neared the door. She didn't quite know why she was speaking so softly, but the warehouse had a sort of ominous feel to it and she had to admit, it gave her the creeps.
"I will." Sam replied, taking his little handy-dandy kit from his coat pocket. (A/N: yes, you herd me "handy-dandy.")
He toyed with the lock a little, and in a few seconds there was a clicking sound and the doors swung open.
The four hunters stepped in noiselessly.
Though the small windows near the ceiling provided a dim light in the building, they all turned on their flashlights to see better.
"Is it just me," Hannah whispered, "Or is that smell…"
"Blood." Sam, Dean, and Amanda answered.
"Ewwww." She shivered.
"Oh pull yourself together, woman." Amanda whispered loudly, slapping Hannah upside the head. Then she turned her to Sam and Dean, "Alright, let's split up, you two take that side," she pointed to the north side of the building which was rows and rows of miscellaneous materials as far as the eye could see (which wasn't very far in the dark). "We'll take the other side." She pointed to the oppisite end of the building.
"Will you guys be ok by yourselves?" Sam whispered.
"We'll be fine, you just worry about yourselves." Amanda replied, and without another word, walked toward her designated spot with Hannah following close in her wake.
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"Come on, Sam, lets go kick some vampire ass." Dean said clapping his brother on the shoulder.
"I don't know, Dean, something tells me we should go with them." His younger sibling replied, watching as the s flashlights disappeared around a corner.
"Sammy, that's your maternal instincts kicking, you need to relax." Dean said in a jokingly, serious tone.
"Sorry, it just doesn't feel right." Sam said following his brother to the opposite side of the warehouse.
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Dean could feel the tension in the air. They had been searching their half of the building for 20 minutes, and nothing had so much as made a scratching noise, even the smell of had subsided. He wondered if Hannah and Amanda were having the same luck.
Just then…
"Dean, take a look at this." Sam called from about 10 feet away.
Dean followed his brothers flashlight and came to a door, "I'll handle this." He said, readying his sawed-off shotgun full of silver pellets.
COMMERCIAL!!!!! Or at least it would be if this were the show. I actually was gonna make you wait till the next chapter but you would probably me for the way it turns out, so…
"OW! Hannah, you stepped on my foot!" Amanda said as she and her best friend searched their half of the warehouse.
(A/N: oops, sorry guys, you'll find out what happened to our heroes soon enough)
"Oh, sorry, for some strange reason my vision has been limited to a flashlight pointed at a shelf of old carnival horses." Hannah replied sarcastically, save for her actually looking at the horses. "You know, this place is really creepy." She said shining her flashlight over a faded life-size clown statue.
"Heh, with or without the knowledge of it being infested with vampires?" Amanda replied.
Hannah didn't answer. She had turned a corner and was now looking at an old pop vending machine.
It was about 5 minutes before Hannah realized they had separated.
"Amanda, I don't think there's anything here, maybe we should go back and find Sam and Dean."
When her friend didn't reply, Hannah called, "Amanda?... Amanda, this really isn't funny!" her voice faltered a little, this is not good.
She was about to call out to her friend again when there was a sudden crashing sound behind her.
"Amanda, if this is one of your sick jokes…!" she said, voice growing more shaky by the second.
Still no answer. Definitely not good
Hannah heard footsteps behind her and spun around hoping to God and all his creation it was Amanda.
Not gonna happen.
Instead, she came face to face with a very pale woman.
:"Shouldn't you be at home, playing with your dolls?" The woman asked in a mocking tone.
Hannah spotted the glint of a fang in the woman's mouth and inconspicuously reached for the knife in her coat pocket, "I got bored." She replied, putting on a brave face, "Where's the rest of your little, 'pack'?"
The vampire woman gave a small laugh, "They're out hunting for food. What about your little friends, Sam and Dean?"
Hannah smiled coldly, "Funny, they're hunting too, only they're ridding the world of evil sucking bitches like you." She spat.
The vampire's eyes narrowed in anger and she lunged at the hunter.
Hannah, who had been ready for the attack, tore out the knife and managed to temporarily fend off the attack.
The vampire staggered back as the blade drew from her arm.
Hannah used the advantage to swing her arm around meaning to decapitate the vampire woman, but her arm was suddenly stopped mid-circle. The woman had recovered and grabbed the hunter's arm with unbelievable strength and twisted it making her drop the knife.
Hannah winced in pain as the vampire kept her arm twisted, and picked up the dropped weapon.
Before the vampire had a chance to bring the knife to her throat, Hannah threw her head back in a sort of head butt.
The vampire staggered back, a surprised look on her face, which quickly turned to fury, and without warning turned and backhanded Hannah across the face.
The blow hit her so hard, she was unconscious before she even touched the floor.
Amanda had been busy examining half a dozen shelves of Furbys when she heard the crashing sound and came running over to where the noise originated. When she reached the spot, she saw Hannah, unconscious, lying face down on the floor and the vampire standing over her pulling her head back, about to slit her throat.
"Get the hell away from my friend." Amanda sneered.
The vampire looked up and smiled, "Why don't you come and join her?" then stood upright and lunged at Amanda.
Realizing how much trouble she was in, Amanda tore out her gun, but the vampire was too quick for her and used the knife to send the gun skittering, landing 15 feet away. Amanda swore and clutched her forearm where the knife had left a deep gash. Fear started to come over her as the vampire woman moved closer, she did the only thing she could think of. She screamed at the top of her lungs, "SAM! DEAN! HEL—" but the vampire cut her off by grabbing her by the throat and lifting her off the ground.
"First, I'll kill you, then I'll kill your little friend over there, then those annoying Winchesters will be mine." The vampire whispered.
Amanda was now seeing stars in front of her eyes from lack of air and she silently prayed Sam and Dean would get there soon.
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Alright that's it for this chapter!
….actually no, and I bet this is getting really annoying right? Well I'll stop after this, I'm just really bored right now and, well, its quite fun to annoy people (don't deny it you probably do it too)
Just think of this as the equivalent of a commercial, cool noise before hand and all. Now back to Sam and Dean
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"Alright Sammy, be prepared for anything that could be behind this door." Dean said to his brother.
"Dean, just open it." Sam replied.
Dean shrugged, "Don't say I didn't warn ya," and he kicked the door in. There was a loud clang… and the door remained were it was. "Hehe, oops, it opens the other way." He said hopping on the foot he used to kick a door meant to swing outward.
Sam stifled a laugh,
"Don't you say a word, Sammy, do you hear me? Not. One. Word." Dean said. Then he took a deep breath and flung the door open.
Inside the doorway was a huge, hairy, evil…
"Mouse?" both brothers asked in unison as the tiny creature scurried out of the doorway in fright.
"Well that was anti-climatic." Sam said shining his flashlight in the closet-like room that they now saw was full of old garden tools.
Just then they heard Amanda's scream.
"Sounds like someone just found the vampires." Dean said in a hurried tone and both brothers tore off in the direction of the sound.
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AH HAHAHAH that's finally the end of this chapter!!!! And if your thinking this is the climax and this fan fiction is soon to be over THINK AGAIN!!!!!! Yes, this story is faaaaar from over.
—Till next time
