Sweet. I finally got 11,000 hits. But I only got 5 reviews that chapter. Please review more? And another note, make sure you read my note at the bottom. It's a summary for a new story that I might post. I'm not sure. I need your feedback/audition for a client or you can give me a job idea for Joe/Shane. Just read it when you finish reading this.
After the incident last night, reporters and paparazzi quickly found out about it when Jason was seen coming out of the ambulance, still knocked out, and going in the hospital. By the next morning, practically the whole world knew about what happened. The next morning, Caitlyn and Mitchie had to go to school but without the Grays. The boys' parents decided to allow Shane, Nate, and Kenny to stay at the hospital a little longer before going to school. So, instead of having the boys with them, Mitchie and Caitlyn went to school with Tess, Peggy, Barron, and Sander. Ella, Lola, and Andy had to take their flights home but promised to be back in time for the talent show. But when the six got to school, they weren't expecting this.
The moment that Mitchie and her friends stepped on school grounds, all eyes, well the students' eyes, were on them. Things were worse when Kelly and her posse came up to them and Kelly pushed a newspaper in Mitchie's face. "This is all your fault."
"What?" Mitchie peeled off the newspaper from her face and read the title, Jason Gray Hospitalized. "This is not my fault. He saved Kenny."
Kelly snorted. "Yeah right. I know you were at their house when it happened. It's obviously your fault Jason's hurt and can't come to school." And at the most perfect time, Shane and Nate arrived at school to witness this happen. "Everyone knows it. Just look around. They're all whispering about it behind your back."
Mitchie looked at the hallway full of students and some turned away when she looked at them. Others pointed at her and the regular girls that glared at her had eyes that were cold as ice and full of pure hatred since they thought that she would hurt the other band member/brother even though she's dating Shane. "It's not true," Mitchie whispered as she looked down. "It's not."
Caitlyn gave her a sympathetic look. "Mitchie..."
"It's not true!" Mitchie cried as she ran down the hallway. Caitlyn made an attempt to grab her shoulder but failed. Shane and Nate did too as they walked up to Caitlyn, still watching Mitchie's disappearing figure.
"Mitchie!" Shane yelled but Mitchie didn't turn around. She kept on running. "What did you tell her?" he screamed at Kelly. All eyes in the hallway were on him.
"Nothing, Shaney. Just the truth," Kelly said with satisfaction. Shane glared at Kelly who put on an obviously fake, innocent face, and then ran after Mitchie, leaving Nate to hold Caitlyn.
"Damn it!" Shane yelled as he slammed his fist on the table. Nate and Caitlyn jumped but when they realized it was Shane, they calmed down.
"Can't find her?" Nate asked.
"Damn right. Where could she be?" Shane slammed his head on the table before putting his head in his arms. "Ow." Tess scooted over to Shane and sympathetically put a hand on his shoulder.
"Don't worry Shane. We'll find her no matter what it takes or where she is," Tess assured and flashed a real sympathetic smile. Shane half-smiled back, but not at anger towards her. He knew that she was done flirting with him and that she only wanted to help. But sadly, he was still frustrated.
Where are you Mitchie?, he thought.
Mitchie looked around, making sure the coast was clear before taking off from school grounds. She ran down the street knowing her parents wouldn't be home yet and that her house was only three blocks away. She ran upstairs, emptying her backpack in the process and basically raided her closet of clothes fitting inside as much as she thought she could fit. Mitchie stopped though when she stumbled upon her song book, appropriately titled, "Mitchie's Songs". She paused what she was doing and sat on her bed to read over her latest song, "Shadow".
I glanced upon the ground today I noticed something,
It followed me
Along the way, a figure of gray,
Impersonating every move I make
For now, we'll call it my shadow,
And it said will you replace it,
So you'll be with me every where I go...
Sentences of yours,
Running throughout my head,
Searching for a chance
To catch my breath,
A never-ending dream,
You'll become a part of me,
Day or night,
Dark or light you'll be,
Taking over that thing called my
Shadow
"Shane," Mitchie muttered. She quickly shook her head and continued what she was doing earlier. She placed her book inside her back along with some money she made with her other job at the restaurant she would work at. After she was settled with what she would bring, she ran to her garage to grab her spare key to Shane's house that Shane had personally given her. She snatched it off its hook, ran over to Shane's house and went inside. Thankfully, no one was home.
Mitchie quickly ran over to Shane's room and found that he actually shares with Kenny. She went over to Shane's bed and put on his pillow, a letter for him and the key she had used to get in the house. She kissed the letter on the pillow and ran to the door of the room.
"Goodbye Shane," she muttered before running away from the house.
Kenny arrived early from school. His school had a bug problem so he would be staying home for a few days. Even though he was only nine, his parents trusted him and besides, they were still at the hospital with Jason. He was still out of it and hasn't woken up since he waved to Kenny. They were worried so they stayed there. They would pick up all four brothers once they were all home, or at five.
Kenny quickly ran upstairs to his room since he wasn't planning on doing his homework. He quickly ran to Shane's bed since he knew that Shane didn't know that he hid some candy, not rotten still, under Shane's mattress. As he lifted the mattress up, he noticed a letter fall off. He stuck a fruit rollup in his mouth before reading it. As he read it, he stopped many times since he didn't understand most of it. He sighed and just threw the letter on his bed so he could finish his candy.
When Nate and Shane were home, then he would ask them to explain it to him.
"Dude, chill. We'll find her. Just be patient for now," Nate said, trying to calm Shane down.
"Yeah, I guess," Shane said, and then yelled, "Mom? We're home!" Shane received no response.
"Dad?" Nate yelled.
"Kenny?" Shane tried.
"Hi guys!" Kenny called from the top of the stairs. Nate and Shane quickly sighed and watched as their little brother ran down the stairs. Shane ruffled Kenny's brown locks.
"Where's Mom and Dad, K.G?"
"They're still at the hospital with Jason but they're picking us up at five. Oh I just remembered." Kenny searched his pockets and pulled out a letter. He quickly unfolded it and pointed to the etc. "What does this word say and mean?"
"Um, it says Etcetera and it means anything else or it continues on, I think. Why? Where'd you get this?"
"I found it on your bed."
Shane grabbed the letter and read the part again. "Wait a minute, Dear Shane, and Nate, Jason--what is this?" Shane read the letter out loud for both of his brothers to hear,
"Dear Shane, and Nate, Jason, Caitlyn, Kenny, Tess, etc.
By the time you read this, I'll already be gone. It has come to my attention that when I'm with you, especially in school, only chaos can ensue. Nothing else. So, I'm running away. We might meet again some other day probably in the far future. Don't try to find me at all. I'll even change my image if I have to. So don't try anything. I'll find out easily if you do. And now Shane, you won't have to worry about liking other girls. You can have them now and do whatever you want."
"What? She's running away?" Nate remarked.
"Hold on, hold on. Shut up and let me finish this. Also, I know you love me Shane. I love you too but I need to sort things out. I'm happy I told you all my secrets.
Remember, I love all you guys, especially you Shane, but I need to think. Don't try to find me.
Love, Mitchie."
"Shit, I'll call her parents and ours about this," Nate said. "Come on Ken." Nate ushered Kenny out of the foyer, leaving Shane to think about the story in front of him.
"Wait a minute. Secrets?"
"Okay, okay. Where are you taking me?" Shane laughed as they continued to walk. Mitchie was covering Shane's eyes as they were walking to where Mitchie wanted to go. She shook her head and clicked her tongue.
"Not yet superstar," Mitchie scolded jokingly. She noticed him pout cutely so she kissed his cheek. "Better?"
"No... I want to know where you're taking me!"
"Hold on, we're almost there."
Shane's ears perked up as they got closer to where Mitchie wanted to take him. "Is that a-a-a WATERFALL?!"
"I'm not gonna push you off it."
"Oh, thank god." Mitchie took her hands off his eyes.
"But I could."
"What?"
"I won't Shane. Stop worrying." Mitchie sighed as she sat down on a patch of grass, staring at the waterfall. Shane followed in suit. The waterfall wasn't exactly like Niagra Falls. Just a regular town one but if you fell into it, you could definitely get hurt. That's why there was a bridge over it. For viewing pleasures and safety. "I would always go here when I was frustrated at school. It would like, take my cares away along with the water."
"Wow, that's deep." Shane commented.
"I love this place. My parents know that I always go to this place but, they just don't know how many times I've been here."
"What do you mean?"
"I've known Kelly since like, first grade. We were even fighting then. She would always make fun of me, insult me, pull pranks on me. The worst was when they tried to frame me for hurting one of the kids in my fourth grade class, Xavier Jade. I almost had suspension for a week until Xavier told everyone the truth about what happened. He fell from the monkey bars on his arm and I just happened to be next to him."
"Ouch, that's cold. So, is this like your secret place? Every time she insulted you really bad, you would com here?"
"Yeah, I guess. I guess I can trust you with knowing this place."
Shane chuckled. "You said 'I guess' more than once."
"Yeah, I guess."
"This is like that time when you cheered me up. Remember? You said 'Sorry' more than once? And then we started talking about 'stupid cookie-cutter popstar-stuff'?"
"Yeah, that was funny." Mitchie sighed and rested her head on Shane's shoulder. "I love you Shane."
"I love you Mitchie."
"Oh shit."
Wow, so uh, where's Mitchie? I honestly have nothing to say but review and stuff. Also, I realized that I have Jaime here but I haven't exactly explained him so, his personality could be anything so I made a chapter centered mostly around him. It's coming up soon.
Oh, and another note. I have another story in the works. I'm not sure if I should post it, and if I do, I'm gonna need people auditioning for like clients and job parts. That sounded confusing so go watch an episode or two of the show, "Burn Notice". It's pretty good and I thought of making a version with the Jonas/Connect Three. Here's the complete summary for the story,
Joe has a burn notice on him, he's black listed. When you're burned, you have nothing. No cash, no credit, no job history. He's now stuck in his old hometown Wyckoff and just does whatever work he can do. He's only been able to keep in contact with Kevin, Nick, and Frankie since they're just about the only people who will talk to him. Bottom line, while you're burned, you pretty much can't do anything.
Joe's been burned for only two weeks now and he can't take it. Kevin and Nick are staying with him but he wants to actually go out and around. They took a break from J.O.N.A.S. but they have to train Frankie so he's with them, too. Joe comes up with a plan though and honestly, his brothers want in, just in case they get burned, too. Joe comes up with an alternative persona, Shane Gray. His brothers choose Jason and Nate Gray for their's. Joe completely changes his look and decideds to go around like that. Will he get caught? Will he find who burned him?
So, do you guys think it would be good? Bad? Audition? Feedback please. Thanks guys!
Ja ne.
