Disclaimer: SW is to Master Lucas as my pathetic use of it is to me
Disclaimer: SW is to Master Lucas as my pathetic use of it is to me
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Kaelir of Lorien: 1) actually the repeating of the first line thing is a
glitch in the website
2)I was going to make the mental communication in just italics but then I realized I needed something to differentiate Xanatos's mental voice from Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon, so I decided to make his in slashes and in italics, whereas Obi's and Qui's would only be in slashes.
3) Thanks for the feedback though, and thanks a million for reviewing!!
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Trust Chapter 2-Toture, Terror and a Hell Of A Lot of Thoughts
28 year old Xanatos Omega lay on the ground, leaning half way against a jagged wall behind him. His breathing was hard and labored.
In the past couple o days (weeks, months, he didn't even know anymore) that he had spent lying in this dump he learned a few things about this place that he was being held captive in:
1) he was in an enormous room of some sort
2) it was so dark that he felt as though he was blind
3) there was about an inch of murky, foul smelling water on the ground that made him want to vomit
4) there where many many unpleasant creatures roaming around that would often come a bit to close for his liking. And considering he couldn't see them, it made him paranoid to some degree
5) He was chained to the ground by metal chains that where tied roughly around his wrists and ankles. And he would have gotten loose of them by now……that is if he had access to his lightsaber, or even the Force for that matter. Wherever this place was, it has heavily shielded against the Force.
6) Every once in a while a droid would come in and beat him. Just flat out beat him in any way possible. Ranging from using weapons to throwing him around.
7) There was one man responsible for all this. Darth Sidious. Yes Darth Sidious had talked him into becoming his apprentice. During an invasion on some heavily armed planet Sidious had expected him to have been killed so a Zabrak by the name of Cratulous Maul could take the place of sith apprentice. But Omega returned alive. Sidious was outraged. Next thing he knew Xanatos was force lightning-ed unconscious, and then in this pit of darkness.
His heart felt heavy. Yet another master had betrayed him. Truth be told he had hated every day he spent after his fight with Qui-Gon. His former master had treated him with kindness and love that even his father hadn't given him. So why? Why had he turned against him? The question still haunted Xanatos. He didn't know. Perhaps it was just his own foolish arrogance. But at least Qui-Gon, as a master, never tried to kill him so props to Qui-Gon.
Xanatos wondered why he was remembering Qui-Gon at a time like this.
I should be thinking of a way out
He sighed and looked around into the blackness around him.
Easier said than done……
And even though he knew no way out, Xanatos knew one thing for sure. It was not the Jedi that had betrayed him…..but the sith.
"So you're trying to tell us that Xanatos is trying to contact you?" Mace said raising an eyebrow.
Qui-Gon nodded sheepishly.
"Trap, this may be." Yoda said slowly. "I am fully aware of that" Qui-Gon answered. "And want to go to him you still do?" Now Yoda raised a brow. "Yes master. I felt it. I felt him in true pain. It was not a joke, he was severely hurt." Qui-Gon almost shuddered remembering just how much pain he had received every time he heard that voice in his head.
"Think about who you're trying to save here Qui-Gon" Mace began "Xanatos Omega, the same creep that took dark Padawan Bruck Chun and made your Padawan's life miserable. The same maniac that has tried to and still wants to kill you!" "Forgiveness is in the code Mace. He's in pain and I know it. He's barley even clouded by the darkness anymore!" Qui-Gon countered. But before Mace could retort Yoda spoke "Go, you may. If trap this is, return you may not. Bring some back up, you should" Yoda advised. "Yes master, Thank you" Qui-Gon bowed deeply and then headed for the door of the council chambers.
He knew he had to do this. To this day he swore that he would forget Xanatos Omega but today the same Xanatos was calling him and he swore he would not let the young man down.
sorry no Obi-Wan in this chapter. hopefully he'll be in the next. thanks a million for reading and dont forget to review!! i tried to fix all the stuff u guys said was wrong in the last chapter, but if theres still something incorrect, feel free to tell me