well, I got the reviews necessary for the lemon, although I don't think its well written. Sorry, I just don't have much practice writing that kind of stuff. Well, I hope you like it, even if it is bad. By the way, I think I could use a beta, seeing as I write in notepad, with no spellcheck, and I had a friend read over it and his first response was, "You could at least spell blond correctly." So if anyone wants to be my extremely motivated beta-reader, I would appreciate it.
Chapter 12:
The team met by the gate at noon. While they knew Kakshi would not arrive that morning, when he would arrive remained a mystery, so they sat on the bench to wait. Kit sat between Naruto and Hinata, who attempted to speak with her several times over the course of a few minutes. However, each time they looked over, they caught sight of the other, blushed, and looked away. In this manner, the silence continued for several minutes, until Kitsumi stood, causing both to look over at the same time. Before they could look away, their eyes met, and their blush turned crimson. Kit chuckled to herslef, and pondered other subtle methods to get the two to acknowledge eachother. Before she could put any of the plans into action, a familiar puf of smoke announced their late sensei's arrival.
"Yo." He grinned at them through the mask, and held up the small orange book that he seemed to carry with him at all times, "I couldn't find my book."
"Its ok sensei, we just got here too." Kitsumi looked suspiciously at him, "What's so great about that book anyway?"
"I'll tell you when you're older." Kakashi pulled the phrase that most intreagued the twelve year old girl. Suddenly, the book dissapeared from his grasp, and Kitsumi was reading intently.
"Oh! Yes! Right there! Yes! Yes! Yes--" Kitsumi suddenly ended the fake screams of pleasure, leaving a crimson pair behind her and a sheepish sensei, "You actually read this stuff?"
"Umm... Yes?" Kakashi reached out, and replaced the book in front of its face, "Anyway, we have to get going, the new edition-- mission, is in Suna. Lets go."
"Edition? You just want to get another one of those books." Naruto glared at him, "Hent--" A sudden nosebleed caused Naruto to interrupt his accusation, which appeared to be contagious, as Hinata caught it soon after.
"What just happened here?" Kakashi looked between the two suspiciously.
"Well, Hinata-chan likes brother so--" Kitsumi began to say.
"Don't tell hentai-sensei, he'll just get off on it or something." Naruto's hand covered his sister's mouth.
"You're no fun." Kitsumi replied after a brief silence, she took his hand off her mouth, and walked over to Kakashi, "Maybe we'll tell you when you're older."
She paused to inflict Naruto with her memory of the events
After dragging Hinata to the bathroom, Kitsumi had her wait in the stall with her eyes closed. After ensuring that she wasn't peeking, and that they would be undisturbed, Kitsumi walked slightly away from the stall
"Henge no Jutsu." She whispered, and transformed into her brother, in those annoying orange pants, but a normal shirt. She walked back over and opened the stall door, closing it behind her as she entered.
"Naruto-kun..? Hinata looked away, blushing intensly, but Naruto embraced her softly, using one hand to lift her face to look at his.
"Hinata..." Naruto slowly moved his face to hers, his breathing slightly fast, and closed his eyes. She responded, closing the gap between them, her lips brushing his, lightly at first, then more firmly. They deepened the kiss, Naruto opening his mouth, drawing her closer to him. She replied slowly, opening her own mouth, only to have it invaded by his wet tongue. She used her own to wrap around it, each tasting the other's mouth for the first time. It tasted differently than they had expected: Naruto, like a sour flavored candy; Hinata, like the sweet smell of spring. They fought for the small space between their mouth's with their tongue's, trying to reach the other's mouth.
Naruto ran his hand up Hinata's back, resting it on her shoulder briefly, then slowly off sliding the sleeve of her jacket. Once it was off, he lightly shifted it to the back of her neck, deepening the kiss. His other hand then slid down her head, causing a moan to escape from her lips as it moved to her shoulder. That sleeve, too, came off, letting the top slide down to reveal her milky white skin. Realizing what happened, Hinata tried to cover herself, and her flush face contrasted her white skin. Naruto simply closed the space between their bodies, so the hands that were meant to cover her, instead found his shirt. She fumbled with it for a second, before slipping her hands underneath, and pulling it up. Their skin finally together, they embraced and frantically attempted to kiss eachother to death. However they eventually needed breath, and parted lips. As soon as he broke away, Naruto slid his hands down to Hinata's waist, causing her to shiver slightly. As he reached the waistband, he slid his fingers through and kept going, pulling her pants down to the floor.
"Naruto... she moaned softly, the slight breeze stimulating sensitive nerves. She moved her hands to his waist, pulling down pants, and boxers, to reveal his manhood. Not knowing what to make of it, Kitsumi slid the pants all the way down, accidentaly brushing it with her knuckle. Naruto's sharp intake of breath shocked her slightly, but she continued her task. She stood up again, and returned to kiss Naruto as passionately as she could.
Kitsumi cut off the connection, and relived the last part of the memory for herself.
He returned the kiss, until concentration slipped, and he reverted to Kitsumi's original form.
"Naruto..." Hinata kept going, blissfully unaware of the change in her lover, until her face was removed by soft feminine hands.
"Sorry, Hinata-chan. I lost concentration." Kitsumi seemed to look everywhere but at Hinata, a slight pink tint overcoming her face.
"Its ok Kitsumi-chan. It was really good while it lasted." Hinata seems blissfully unaware of anything else at the moment, "Um... we should probably get dressed..."
"Yeah, here I'll get it." Kitsumi bent down and pulled up Hinata's discarded pants and underwear. She lifted the jacket and put Hinata's arms through it, and zipped it up. Then she retrieved her own clothes, now in their original forms, and put them back on, wiping a small trickle of blood off in the process.
She shook her head to clear her thoughts, and turned to see her brother's face covered in blood. Hinata managed not to lose any, but her face was as red as the blood on Naruto's. Kakashi looked very confused.
"Don't worry, what he's thinking of is way better than any of those pieces of junk." Kitsumi moved to the side and turned to face everyone, "So, shall we go?" She asked completely ignoring the awkward situation she had singlehandedly caused.
"Yeah..." Kakashi began to walk out the gates. Nothing had left him that speachless in quite some time. He decided to just lead the team out of the gates. Kitsumi followed shortly behind, grabbing her brother and Hinata as she passed them, dragging them along.
By nightfall, they had reached a clearing in the forest, normally used by convoys between Suna and Konoha to make camp. Deciding that it would be best to sleep in a less obvious spot, if only for training, they chose a spot about a mile after the clearing and two hundred yards off the path.
Unfortunately, hiding their camp was not successful, as Hinata saw cloaked figures rapidly approaching the camp during her watch in the early morning. She hurried to wake the others, and managed to get everyone up before they arrived. They did not have time to hide though, and watched warily as the figures, approached more stealthily. Team seven palmed kunai, and waited for the other's to act. They did not have to wait long, as the cloaked figures soon threw kunai of their own. Kakashi deflected both with his own kunai, and charged one of the figures. The other turned on the gennin, who spread out, and threw their kunai. The hooded figure jumped in between them, causing all to miss, but one tore his cloak, revealing a man's face with lipstick and eyeliner.
"Which one of you is Uchiha Sasuke-sama?" The figure asked in a melodious voice, and watched as the entire team looked at him oddly.
"Umm... Sasuke-kun isn't on this team." Naruto punctuated the statement with a rude gesture, "Why does everyone want Sasuke!? I'm so much stronger than he is, but its always Sasuke this, Sasuke that! Well I'm tired of it!"
"If he isn't with you, then I guess I get to kill you all." The face smiled wickedly, and he lunged foreward at them. Naruto blocked his punch, but another hand extended from his stomach, and punched Naruto backward. Hinata settled into her Jyuuken stance, and engaged him next. She managed to strike a couple blows, cutting down chakra flow to his hands, but was caught by surprise when a hand came out of his mouth, punching her back as well.
"Guy's remember the gennin test." Kitsumi looked from one to the other, then moved to engage. She focused on not getting hit, trying to guess where and when the hand would emerge. When it did come, she grabbed it and pulled. To her surprise, an entirely blue mand came out as well and ran headlong toward where Hinata was. Before he could lay a hand on her, Naruto attacked from the side allowing Kitsumi to worry about the one in front of her. As he was alone now, she evenly traded attacks with him, managing a few words during the exchange.
"Hey, do you want to know how we passed our gennin test?" She looked at him slighly.
"Of course not. Why would I care?" The musical tone of his voice was eerie enough, and Kitsumi stopped talking.
Meanwhile Naruto was battling the uncloacked figure. This one had full chakra flow however, and it was slowly overpowering him. At that point, Hinata joined the fight, but instead of her hands, she used a writing brush. The man was cautious none the less, afterall, brushes could be used in a variety of manners, and made sure to not let the brush touch him. However, no matter how he tried, he could not both defeat Naruto, and avoid the paintbrush, and eventually several strokes landed.
'Done sis." Naruto spoke throught the site, earning himself another punch for not paying attention. However before the enemy could do anything, he dissapeared in a blue flash.
Slightly earlier, Kitsumi was getting tired. She began to leave small openings, and barely avoided being hit. When she heard Naruto's call, she decided to finish it, and backed just out of reach.
"Kuchiose no Jutsu!" Kitsumi held out her hand in front of her, just as the cloaked figure began his strike. The other blue man appeared in front of her outstretched arm. Before the cloaked man could stop his punch, it connected with the other, and passed through.
"Nice try, but we can pass right through eachother." The cloaked figure absorbed the blue one into his body as the punch landed. Kitsumi felt her back hit a tree, and the world became black.
Naruto and Hinata looked on at Kitsumi's defeat. They readied themselves, as the figure completed several handsigns.
"Sakon, its time to go." A voice called out from the forest, in the direction of their camp.
"Yes, Kimimaro-sama. I guess I don't get to kill you afterall. Just hope we don't meet again." Sakon jumped into the tree and followed the voice. At the same time, Kakashi stumbled into the forest, bleeding from several small cuts, and a large gash on his leg.
"Kakashi-sensei!" Naruto and Hinata rushed towards him as he slumped to the ground. They dragged him and Kitsumi back to camp, and Hinata began to treat their wounds, while Naruto stood guard.
"Hinata...?" Naruto went to sit by Hinata after their companions were taken care of, "I'm sorry for what Kitsumi did..."
"Don't worry..." Hinata looked at him with a smile, "I really liked it."
"Did you?" Naruto looked at her, she was slightly closer than he remembered.
"Yeah..." Hinata blushed, "Did you want to try it?" And she leaned, just like in the memory...
Author's note:
Yes, Sakon and Kimi will be important. And I'm sorry for to any fans that I made Sakon seem weak, but its more like he's just playing with the gennin. Also, what did you think of the summoning? To over the top, or unlikely or was it fine? Thanks for reading.