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Chapter 4:
They were trying to take her away from me. I knew that much. But I wasn't stupid. I was a tracker and I would drink her blood.
It was hard to trace her scent at first. Very difficult. Her scent lead back to a small house, where another family member was living with her. I didn't follow her directly there. It would be too risky. I did not know how these vampire's minds work, but my guess was that they weren't stupid. So, I would wait and see what panned out before I made my move.
I caught the scent of Emmett and the other girl's, Alice's, scent hovering slightly around the area where the house was. So I was right, they had been guarding the house. They obviously wanted to protect that certain family member of hers. It might be a way to threaten her later. A thought I didn't push out of my head.
Then, faintly I heard an argument coming from the small house. Bella was yelling at her father. She yelled, "just let me go, Charlie!"
Hmm. So her father, I'm assuming it was, was Charlie. And, was she leaving now? Were they trying to run now? I liked this. It was a challenge.
I was following the truck that her and Edward had gotten into. Alice and Emmett were not far away from me, and I managed to keep my distance. However, I would not lose her.
I continued to follow them, but I would not track the house tonight. It was a job for Victoria later.
They had taken her safely to the house now. I wasn't abut to go barging in there, so I circled around and met up with Victoria. Laurent was at the house, debating whether or not to stay. I wouldn't be surprised if he decided to leave.
The scent became faint for a short period of time. What happened there? I asked myself curiously. Victoria watched me anxiously, waiting for a command. I just shook my head ever so slightly and she nodded in understanding.
I noticed the smell getting stronger. Not just Bella's, but all of there's. The scents were heading in different directions. They were splitting up. Now it was time for Victoria's help.
"Track Esme and the other one, Rosalie. Don't let them out of your sight. Understand?" She nodded and before I could blink, was off in the distance.
They travelled farther than I was expected. This was going to be harder than I thought. I was not about to give up though. I was not going to stop until I had my teeth in her throat.