Please review also they seems to be a bug that repeats my first sentence ignore it please

Please review also they seems to be a bug that repeats my first sentence ignore it please, I DO NOT OWN BLEACH

Ch 4 Mark "father" of new breeds (WARNING: THIS IS LIKE A FILLER BUT CONTAINS VITAL PLOT INFO)

Mark was dreaming, dreaming of that day the day he left Soul Society because his zanpaktuo was dangerous the day everything went wrong.

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN I'M GOING TO BE EXECUTED, JUST BECAUSE MY ZANPAKTUO CAN TURN SHINIGAMI INTO HOLLOWS OR INTO NORMAL SOULS" Mark shouted enraged "quite lieutenant, please run now" a voice replied "URRRRGGGHH".

Now Mark was remembering the day he left Soul Society, and with the help of his squad he found out about the Outer Land's, (the idea came to me while re-watching Bount arc when Ichinose (I think that's his name) was in a desert that wasn't near the Sereitei) a vast world outside Soul society lived the people with practically no spiritual pressure, even less than the people in Rukongai and after journeying through a desert he found a city that invited him and the people were kind and treated him and each other well.

After twenty years, it had gone horribly wrong, when Mark was out hunting Soul animals (since Hueco Mundo has animals why can't Soul Society), he came back and the city was being burnt down and blasted with cero's, than what made him really sad was what he heard next "Where is Mark Knobel that shinigami, you know it's his fault your dying now" The voice said, than a blood gushing sound was heard "now were is he his zanpaktuo has to be one of THOSE zanpaktuo's the legendary one's" The voice continued, Mark than charged and saw a man covered in Hollow mask's all over his body and blonde hair and one blue eye was the only thing visible. "Oh your finally here" The man replied "wait that can't be your-" Mark started before he was cut across the chest and than the man grabbed Marks broadsword zanpaktuo and spoke "HAHAHA at last my revenge now" pointing the sword at some people "Hollowfication, now become a soul again, and now a shinigami" the sword glowed and did this too the people changing them into shinigami then soul and then hollow and vice versa till they started changing eventually into a person wearing half a Shihaksho and a Arrancar suit. "AH HA so the legends are true the so called beings which are like arrancars or vizards but much more advanced with two zanpaktuo's the "NEW BREEDS" perfect now phase two will commence now that they have lost their memories and they serve me thanks to this" The man said as he took out a blue gem and then the new breeds and the man disappeared and Mark could do nothing about it.

After the attack the only people left were some kids, "Im sorry guys I caused this I'll take care of all of you now", Mark decided to treat and care for the survivors and became a bounty hunter and killed Hollow using kidou and getting money to feed them, one day he heard of a legend about a mountain that gives anyone who goes to the top incredible power one that rivals the entire Gotei 13 put together, Mark found it and climbed it but he could never rest since Hollows appeared every were even though Mark slew them more just appeared. Eventually Mark was out of food and was starving and was surrounded by Hollows, down to the last ounce of reiatsu in his body and then it happened all the Hollows disappeared, and they were all an illusion then he heard voices calling him to walk into one of the pillars of light that had appeared and Mark dove straight into one and was no longer hungry he than was given knowledge of everything about Zanpaktuo's and learnt techniques lost in time. "Come back to me" Mark declared at the mountain top and his sword appeared out of nowhere and Mark grasped it, he learnt of the horror of the new breeds and their victims from that day on he was called Hollow saviour and The Crimson Crusader wearing crimson to mark the blood of the victims and his mission now was to destroy the new breeds, which created castles all over Soul Society.