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Please reviews also want to add a character or suggestions just put in review or PM me ok, I know its' not that greatly written but next chapter will be better I promise.

Ch 5 Mark V.S Datenshi

Datenshi awoke and looked around he was in a room filled with sleeping children he crept up and tried to get out of the room when Mark appeared in front of him "You're not leaving" Mark said in a bold voice "you're going to help me fight my war" Mark continued "or else" "Fuck no, I want to go home, Im not going to fight some freaking war just because you say so" Datenshi replied "If you really want to go fight me, even if you win its your lost" Mark said as he walked through a door, Datenshi followed.

They where outside in a desert-like city ruin "Wha-what the hell this defiantly can't be Earth" Datenshi said shocked "even I haven't ever saw this place before" said Ichigo "This is the Outer Lands a place outside Rukongai and Sereitei the Ghost capital's" Mark answered "You mean this is where ghost's go after they pass on?" Datenshi said in awe "the least richly but yes it is, and now WE FIGHT" Mark said as he drew his broadsword and then slashed, "huh, urrrggghhhh"the attack was blocked just in time by Datenshi but was shocked by the brute force of the attack "NOW IM WIDE AWAKE" Datenshi said as his lust for battle grew.

"GETSUGA TENSHOU" the blue shockwave was released and was aimed at Mark who jumped back and swung his sword causing a red shockwave "HHHHHHAAAAARRRRRGGGHHHH AKA ASSAIKI (red grinder) , when the shockwaves clashed Aka Assaiki absorbed Getsuga Tenshou and got bigger and then slammed into Datenshi who fell back and flinched "DUDE YOU TOTALLY COPIED MY ATTACK" Datenshi screamed outraged "nope I made it better, see Aka Assaiki means red grinder it grinds the reiatsu of a attack and absorbs it making it stronger" Mark explained "GETSUGA TENSHOU" Datenshi used the shockwave again hoping to catch Mark off guard "AKA ASSAIKI" the two shockwaves hit each other but this time cancelled each other out "Huh" Mark said astonished "see now my Getsuga Tenshou does the same that attack is useless against me now and you made me learn a new skill "wow he picked that up quite fast" Mark thought and he smiled "ok time for phase two" Mark continued to think.

"Stand up to this AKA ENGETSU" (red crescent) thousands of small shockwaves were being fired from Mark's broadsword "can you take 1000's AKA ASSAIKI AT ONCE" Mark challenged "Ichigo you know I'm really pumped and just thought of a move I can do with these WINGS OF MINE HHHHHAAARRRRGGGGHHHHHHH GETSEUEI TSUME" (moonlight claw) Datenshi flapped his wings and ten's of thousands of small blade like shockwaves were released and they absorbed the Aka Engetsu's and than piled together creating a giant blue reiatsu claw that pressed itself forward, "wow that's a powerful attack with a lot of reiatsu well,…..." Mark lifted his sword to take the attack; the claw pressed itself forward and than exploded causing burns on Mark "ARRRGGGHHH" Mark yelled "he's good getting better the more powerful he becomes the more better are changes our, wait someone's behind me" Mark turned and saw a figure "SIT UPON THE FROZEN HEAVENS HYORINMARU" A voice shouted, and Mark was frozen in ice.

A small boy with spiky white hair appeared and was apparently was the attacker, his zanpaktuo's hilt was like a shuriken and had a chain at the end of it "mission complete now I just got too-" The kid said as he approached Mark "HEY THAT WAS MY FIGHT WHO THE HELL ARE YOU SHORT KID" Datenshi shouted angry at the fact the battle was interrupted the Kid twitched "I' am captain Hitsugaya Toushiro of squad ten and if you know what's good for you than you'll leave this man accused of treason" Hitsugaya said slowly "I don't care about something like that don't you know on a one on one fight you don't Fucking interfere!" Datenshi shouted as he raised his sword.

"AAARRRGGGHHHHH" Ichigo yelled as he held his heart "FUCK NO HICHIGO YOUR NOT COMING OUT" "OH YES I'AM" "NO WAY IN HELL" "THIS KID'S WILL BECOME STRONGER THAN YOU I WILL ABSORB HIM" "I WON'T LET YOU" Ichigo said all of this changing in between two voices.

What will happen will Hichigo break out and Datenshi challenges Hitsugaya who's going to win find out next chapter and more of the plot will be revealed!