Thank you for all the comments on my criticizer. I actually got a response from them, which is funny b/c on their page they said they WILL NOT respond to emails. XD I guess i got through to them. Well, this is what they said:

So I have to have written a story in order to offer other people criticism? D: Wow, obviously you haven't read anything on Ebert's Law. And I can leave criticism where ever I please. :) Whenever I feel a story is lacking in something, or is just plain ugly, I comment on it because...well, freedom of speech is a reason, and also because it's entertaining when "writers" like you reply back which clearly tells me you're not used to getting criticisms. :D ... I think I'm gonna go look up WTH Ebert's law is XD. Anyway, this is what I responded. No, I've received criticism before, there is just a certain extent a person can go to before it's not considered criticism. I've dealt with someone like you before, and I think it's sad that people have nothing better to do then make people feel bad and want to quit something they love doing. People learn when you tell them what they did wrong so they can try and correct it or incorporate it into their next story, not when you tell them they suck, or they should delete their work. I'm pretty sure that's online harassment which has resulted in people killing themselves. You don't know what's going on on their side of the computer. For all you know writing about stuff could be their way of leaving their world behind, and that one comment is all it takes to send someone over the edge. I've gotten criticism before, and I take it and apply it to my next work. I've written multiple stories in the Fruba category, and the fact that you have not criticized them all tells me something. Also the fact that your page states you don't reply to email only proves that you feel in someway what I said was right, and you don't like the way that sits with you. I don't care what you believe all I have to say is lighten up on your criticisms. There is no need to go as far as to tell people to delete their work. If it's not good, it will not receive comments, and people will learn from that, not from harassers who just look for someone to beat down upon because they're insecure, or are having problems in their own life. I don't know if someone is mean to you, and tells you to give up on stuff you love, but that doesn't mean you need to tell it to someone else. And if I'm wrong I'm sure you at least know they feeling of someone picking on you, at least once. Don't develop a hardened heart and take it out on someone else. Not everyone becomes stronger from it. ... I sound like a therapist XD. Oh well, I'll keep you guys informed if she responds. So, on to the story. I do not own Fruba. X3 XXXXXXXXXX Kyo growled. He was being driven back to the house by Hari, after he'd tried to strangle Akito. XXX Flash Back XXX Kyo ran up to Akito. "You BASTARD!" Akito glanced at Kyo, an annoyed look graced his features. "What do you want you filthy cat?" "You RAPED Yuki!" Kyo screamed, moving towards him. Akito smirked. "Really? He never said he didn't want it, he just lied there like a good pet should. He WANTED it." Kyo growled before he tackled Akito and slammed his head into the ground. His hands then fixed tight around the god's neck, choking him. "What's wrong? You're not saying anything, you must WANT this!" Kyo screamed, nails digging into Akito's neck. "Kyo!" Kyo blinked a Shigure suddenly pulled him off Akito, holding him back. "let me go god damn it!" Kyo growled, glaring at Akito. Akito then stood up and glared, then a slow smirk spread on his face, and Hatori began to take him inside. Akito glanced at Kyo one more time before Hatori got him inside. "Hey Kyo! I must admit, I loved how he screamed as I fucked him raw!" Kyo screamed and struggled as a laughing Akito went inside. "You asshole!" XXX flash back end XXX Kyo shook as they pulled into the drive way. 'God damn it!' XXXXXXXXXX Yay XD one more, Go Kyo! I'm not anti- Akito though, I love him actually XD especially in the later books. Guess what, I just read the whole series XD I know how it ends, yay! I love Akito, and Yuki, and Kyo. To tell the truth, I'm kinda anti-Tohru XD. Lol, I'm all for Rin though and Kisa, I don't really like Kagura though. X3 thank you for reading!