Authors crap: This story is no long going to go on, the point was I wrote it to see if I can drag people into reading it see how many review or what they thought but not much reviews so this fanfic it's going to get abandon (This is what I call a debut) and I'll make different stories cause I found out what the other people needed in the story of what they liked and I figured it out, so sorry for the ppl who maybe or did like the fanfic sorry, this was a test for me to see if I'm good or not? (New fanfic will come out in a few days it's call second generation) O.o