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Okay so Fang's dream will be in this one and so the dream will be in italics. just to clear that up for everyone. Also there is a questionable part on the rating about blood and death but 1 it is a dream and 2 you can skipp over it if you want i will put those around the part you might not want to read. But remember this is only a dream (a horible dream but a dream no less)
Oh thank you to all 18 reviewers. I'm so happy, I've never got that many reviews on one chapter!! claps hands. Now on to the story!!! Fang's Dream
I sat there with Max's head in my lap. I was running my fingers through her silky blond-brown hair. She was absolutely beautiful, radiating in her own way. She stole my breath away without knowing it. The other Max didn't stand a chance, she may have looked like the real thing but she wasn't even close.
I listened to my surroundings, nothing but the night animals and their normal nighttime noses. I wasn't going to let my dream become reality. No one was going to take my Max from me again. I let the corner of my mouth rise in a smile. My Max I liked that.
I thought about my memorable dream. Ari had my Max and me captive. But it hadn't started that way. The movie I had made in my mind of the dream started replaying itself.
Max and I were sitting on a park bench. Angel, Gazzy, Nudge, and Ig were playing on the equipment. They were playing a game called Spider. Angel had learned it from the kids at that school (the real one) we attended a few weeks, or was it months, ago.
Anyway Angel began explaining the game, "How you play is the person who is it counts to twenty and then it is hide-and-go-seek but the person who is it has to keep their eyes closed." Angel paused. "The people who aren't it can run around the playground trying not to get tagged. You can touch the ground but if the person who is it calls 'Spider' while you are on the ground then you are it. Understand?" Everyone nodded. "Okay Iggy will you be it first?" Angel looked at Iggy.
"Yeah I guess." Iggy shrugged and walked to a post to start counting.
"No peaking Ig." Gasman called out.
Iggy glared in Gaz's general direction. I laughed. Iggy would be able to hear if anyone stepped foot on the ground anyway. "What are you laughing about?" Max asked me.
I turned to her hiding my emotions behind the mask I always wore when around other people. My breath caught in my throat, in this light Max looked more like and angel than when she was flying. "Just what Gaz said about Ig not peaking."
Max laughed, I love her laugh; it was rare but beautiful just like the rest of her. You don't see girls like her with the unique qualities that she has, and I am not talking about the wings sprouting from her back. "Yeah that would be kind of hard for him to do wouldn't it?"
I nodded in agreement. It was hard for me to look at her and retain thought. Why did she have to be so gorgeous? I crossed my arms and stretched out my legs turning back to look at the other four. Iggy had Nudge cornered.
"Your it Nudge." Iggy put out a hand and touched Nudge's arm.
"How did you know it was me?" Nudge asked in disbelief. "Your freaking blind for goodness sake."
Iggy smiled. "I know up five better than you think. I may be blind but I am not deaf. Besides you take lighter and quicker steps than Angel and Gasman. I know it was you."
"That's so funny. I mean Nudge has known Ig for just about all her life and she still doesn't know how he works." Max tried to make conversation.
"Yeah I know. She is so funny sometimes," I said in agreement, though I didn't look at her.
Max snuggled up to me wrapping her are in between my crossed ones and resting her head on my shoulder. "Uhum," she muttered.
I smiled quickly; unfolding my arms I put one around her shoulders. "You know you look ravishingly beautiful today."
Max blushed a deep red. "Fang you are embarrassing me. Stop it." She took the hand that was around her. "You look quite handsome yourself Fang." She looked up at me with her big bright eyes.
"So I guess that Sam guy is out?" I asked. I looked down at her smiling sweetly.
"Sam was never in. I just went out with him to make you jealous, because I was jealous of… oh what is her name? That girl you kissed at that school." Max looked away.
I put my finger under her shin, turning her to face me. "She kissed me," I informed her.
"I don't recall you pushing away." Her eyes flashed.
I smiled, "I didn't push you away either." I lifted her face closer to mine. "She wasn't as good as you if you wanted to know." I kissed her softly on the lips.
Max leaned into me prolonging the inevitable end of the kiss. She was much better at kissing that the red head, whose name escapes me.
"Aww look at the two love birds. Don't they look so cute together?" a growl came form the direction of the playground.
Max and I sprang apart. We had been lost in the moment and now everything was going wrong. Ari and about ten other Erasers were standing around. What happened to Angel, Nudge, Gasman, and Iggy?
I looked around to figure out the answer. Then I saw it, my second worst fear had come to life. Max gasped beside me. I followed her gaze to the body of poor Angel lying in a pool of blood undoubtedly dead. A ways was Gasman's bloody corps. Iggy was a bit higher up, slumped over the edge of the jungle gym. Then there was Nudge; she seemed to have gotten the worst of it. She was hanging off the tire swing, which hangs for kids to play on, with the chain around her neck and her head facing up while the rest of her body faced downward.
Max looked on the verge of crying. Tears welled in her eyes threatening to overflow. I took hold of her, wrapping my arms around her, protecting her from the slimy git that did this to our Flock.
"Whose next loves? I haven't got all day," Ari sneered.
I positioned myself between Max and the dog-boy. I turned to her, "I promise I will protect you. I will never leave you. I…I love you."
Max smiled through her pained expression. It hurt me to see her like this. "I love you too Fang."
"Touching really. But come on let's get this over with." Ari approached us. There was no way in hell I was going to let him hurt the love of my life.
I launched myself at him, but he was ready for me already in full morph before I got to him. I punched at him and lashed out with my foot at the same time, I even hit him in the leg before I heard the ear splitting scream. "Fang!" Max yelled at the top of her lungs. I had forgotten her for the briefest moment.
Erasers were tying her up, putting a bag over her head, and carrying her away from me by the time I noticed what was happening. They had gotten her making me break my promises I had made only seconds earlier. Then it came, Ari used my distraction as an advantage and cracked me over the head. I didn't feel a thing, but who can in a dream? Blackness enveloped me.
A blinding light hit my closed eyelids, moaning escaped my mouth unwillingly. I opened my eyes to the brightest white light I had ever seen. I blinked away the unwanted tears from my eyes. A cackle of laughter met my moan. I looked up; about ten yards away stood Ari. I tried to stand up but found my arms bound behind my back. Ari laughed again. I wanted nothing more than to get up and slap the grin off his filthy face.
"Morning sleeping Fangy." Ari snickered. "Have a nice nap?"
"Where's Max?" I asked calmly.
"Oh your girlfriend is here don't worry we are taking good care of her." Ari sneered.
"Now that would cause me to worry the most. Thanks dog-boy," I said, sarcasm leaked from my mouth.
"Now that is not very nice. I don't go around calling you bird-boy." Ari smiled innocently.
"Nope just mutant freaks, so much better." I rolled my eyes for added affect.
"Now Fang as nice as this conversation is let us et down to business. Frankly you discuss me and the less time I have to spend with you the better," Ari hissed.
"Oh so there was a reason for you bringing Max and me here? You see I thought it was because of your obscene obsession with Max. And by the way doggy-boy the view from where I am sitting isn't any better." I smirked.
Ari was trying so hard not to morph. "If you don't tell me exactly what I want to know you will face the consequences." I could tell he was trying to ignore my comments, but then again pressing a few more buttons would break him.
"If you think you are going to get anything out of me you are wrong, dead wrong." Funning I struggled against my bonds.
Ari seemed not to hear me, or if he did I couldn't tell. "What is Max's favorite color?"
"Like I am going to tell you," I answered. Ari came up to me and pushed the chair I was tied to over. I fell to the floor like a sack of potatoes. "Ow that hurt," I said even if it didn't. "But you still aren't getting anything out of me." I kept struggling trying to break the ropes.
Ari pulled the chair up roughly. "Maybe this will help change your mind," he growled in my face. If I had ever met anyone that needed a breath-mint more I couldn't recall it at this point in time.
Ari walked out for a second leaving me by myself. He came back in with Max in his arms. She looked unconscious. "What are you doing with her dog-boy?" I asked with curiosity and anger, Ari had his filthy paws on my Max. "If you think that hurting her is going to make me tell you, you're so wrong." I growled.
"If you don't answer my question I will hurt her. She may be unconscious now but pain will rouse dearest Max rather quickly," Ari threatened.
"Ari if you love her why are you threatening to hurt her?" I questioned. Evermore I struggled to find a weak spot, and the ropes seemed to be giving but not enough to get my hands free.
"I love her and soon she will love me. With you out of the way, Fang, she will learn to love me," Ari answered.
"Ha," I barked. "She will never love you Ari. You have taken too much from her. Plus you are seven years younger than her." I spoke with logic in my angered voice.
Ari pulled a knife from under his shirt. He placed it on Max's milky white arm just above her wrist, sliding it upward the knife cut into her skin, a line of dark red blood followed the tip. "Let's see how much pain you will cause Max to suffer before you talk."
I stiffened, "You are a dirty scum bag and that is what you will always be." My eyes followed the knife. I kept at my struggling praying silently that the rope would break and I could kill Ari right where he stood.
Ari had other plans. He came over to me and slapped my face. My head slammed to the side but I didn't feel any pain. He walked back to Max and said, "Suit yourself." He stabbed her arm with the knife. Max screamed in pain, she was conscious now.
"Stop hurting her you bastard." I yelled at him, my hands battled the ropes. Ari started twisted the knife in Max's arm. Blood gushed from the wound. "That is no way to get her to love you."
Ari smiled wickedly, e pulled out the knife from Max's arm; a gapping hole of red was still there. "Answer my question or I will kill her."
"You wouldn't dare." My jaw clenched at the thought. He had already hurt her. The wound was huge and like he hand hit the artery. She was going to die if she didn't get medical assistance now. "No not Max anyone but Max." I pleaded out loud.
"Sorry bird-boy but you brought this on yourself. I asked you a simple question but you wouldn't answer. Now Max will pay."
With that Ari plunged the bloody knife into Max's chest. "NO!" I yelled my head hit my chest and I stopped fighting. How could he be so ruthless? I watched the light leaver her once bright eyes through my bangs. I heard her dying breath rasp out of her throat. "No, no, no." My voice got softer with every 'no'. Ari had taken away the most important human being in my life and now he was going to pay for it. I glared at him through my bangs, starting to lift my head slowly I said in a whisper then progressively getting stronger and louder, "No, no, no, NO!" I struggled harder than ever before at the ties that held my hands together. "You bastard." I screamed; venom dripped wildly from my mouth. "You bloody…" I glared at him. Lowering my voice to barely a whisper I said, "You will pay for that, and you will pay dearly." Ari caught every word. I thrashed around finally breaking the tethers that had captured my hands.
Ari advanced on me, which is when I heard it. An angel's voice, "Fang, Fang wake up." I recognized it the voice belonged to Max.
I smiled; Max had saved me from my dream. Now she was sleeping, using my thigh as a pillow. She was the most beautiful human being on this earth and she was only 98 human. But why couldn't I tell her that I love her? She didn't have a clue of her affect on my. She was so different than everyone including the rest of the Flock.
I had to tell Max I love her before Ari could come and ruin everything. He always seemed to get in my way. Why was it that Max was so different that even the bad guys loved her? I thank all the gods above that she didn't love him back.
But how could I tell her? I mean the timing had to be right. Unlike in my dream, that had been forced. I wanted when I told her I loved her to be perfect. I wanted to be alone somewhere where Ari couldn't find us. But then again did I really want to wait that long to find a place. Ari seemed to be tracking us somehow. We needed to find out how if we are ever going to be alone.
I spent the rest of the night planning the way I was going to tell Max that I loved her. I thought up one where Max and I were on the top of the Statue of Liberty, getting there by way of flying of course. I would have set up a picnic up there and then I could tell her I loved her.
There were others similar to the first one but on the Eiffel Tower, the Leaning Tower of Pisa, in dead center of the Parthenon, oh and on the ceiling of the Alamo. Any of those would do, I wasn't picky. It just depended on where we were heading next. But most likely we wouldn't be going across the sea, so that crossed three off my list, and I think New York was out of the question. So that left the Alamo unless I could think of a better place to say it.
But then again we never really shared a kiss yet, other than my dreams and the one on the beach which wasn't much at all. Maybe I should have been thinking about where we would share our first kiss, or even better my surroundings cause that is what I was supposed to be doing. Good thing nothing happened that night. I guess I would have to watch my thinking a bit better tomorrow night. I might not get lucky again.
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