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"Wake up Lily! Wake up!" screeched Petunia, throwing he rather skinny body onto a large lump. The lump in question was Lily Evans curled up in a ball and trying to block the sunlight with her duvet.
"Oof," Lily grunted, "Get off Pet, you idiot. Let me sleep until ten o'clock. It's Saturday for heaven's sake."
"It's such a beautiful day!" Petunia sang bouncing around the room.
"Whaddever," Lily mumbled snuggling back into her cocoon of warmth and drowsiness so only a red head was visible.
Petunia frowned, "Oh, get up Lily," she snapped, "Mum says we can go shopping after we have breakfast."
Upon receiving no response, Petunia flounced downstairs, swiftly returning balancing a stack of pancakes on a plate.
"Mmm, pancakes, gooey and thick. The golden syrup's just oozing to the bottom of the plate," she coaxed.
A hand risked the cold air and shot vaguely to the direction where Petunia stood, "Gimme."
"Noooo, you can't eat this in bed, you'll get sticky bed sheets, and whatever would Mum say about that?" she teased.
A growl was heard from the bed and Petunia ran squealing down the stairs, through the corridor and into the kitchen, a ruffled Lily at her heels.
Petunia set the plate down at Lily's place and grinned, "Breakfast's ready!' she chimed.
Lily grumpily sat down and began to eat the now cold pancakes with her hands.
"Lily Evans!" her mum scolded, "Eat with cutlery, you're not an animal."
Rather sulkily Lily took a fork and knife and resumed gobbling down her pancakes.
Petunia sat down across her and ate her steaming pancakes in a more dignified manner; after all she was three years Lily's elder and had to set a good example.
"Morning honey, Pet, Lily," Mr Evans greeted, kissing his wife.
A chorus of Good Mornings was sounded back at him.
"Is this pancakes I smell!" he exclaimed in mock disbelief, "I'm starving!"
Mrs Evans handed him the next platter and Mr Evans gave her, her mail, gave Petunia her mail and gave Lily her mail.
"Catalogues… there's a sale at Esprit tomorrow… we're invited to the Suri Vishnu's wedding! We've met her fiancée before- tall Indian guy," Mrs Evans informed everyone.
"I've got a message from Raymond, you know, my pen pal," Petunia said, slightly disappointed at not having anything exciting."
"What did you receive Lily, dear?" Mrs Evans prompted.
Lily mumbled through her food, "Inorthubirayartanrankter."
"Don't speak with your mouthful. What did you say?" reminded Mr Evans.
Lily swallowed with difficulty, "An invitation to Courtney Hu's Birthday party and a prank letter," she repeated.
"A prank letter?" asked Petunia.
"Yeah, something 'bout Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and I'm a witch, yadda yadda, and a R.S.V.P. date."
The room was silent for a moment.
"I think it's a really good joke," said Lily resuming her eating, "What?" she asked when everyone stared at her, "It is, I mean it's better then… I dunno, like a fake love letter."
Everyone returned to their breakfast and the matter was soon forgotten.
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