Yo thanks for the reviews so yeah I only own Gale, Rose and their "family" other people own other stuff.
Naruto was on a tree outside of konoha staring up at the stars. He had been there all night trying to wrack his brain about Gale. Who was he? What was he? How strong was he? All the questions he could think of was swarming in his brain as he tried to figure the man out.
He had helped finish the bridge he could make as many shadow clones as Naruto could. He hadn't seen Haku until the trip back she seemed happier. She was wearing black clothes just a black shirt, pants and sandals. Her hands were fixed and he couldn't even tell that gale had broken her fingers.
Tomorrow he would be back in konoha where maybe he could talk to Gale in private. He felt a presence behind him and looked behind to see Rose with her hood down. "Can't sleep huh?" Her voice was soft and comforting. "Too many questions?"
"Yeah?" Naruto wasn't surprised that she was there he couldn't put anything beyond these people. "So what are your questions, I'll try to answer some." "Is he my father" Naruto was ashamed that his voice shook but he needed to ask it. "No, he is your uncle actually. Next?" "Where is the village hidden in the shadows?" Her smile was sad "it no longer exists. A Nin from there destroyed everything before Gale and I could stop him. We're the last two left from the demon village."
Demon? What the hell was that about there were no such things as demon's is there? "If you want to know the story you should ask Gale. Next?" He hesitated on the next question "wh-who was my father?" Again she had that small smile. "He was a great shinobi the only one who could have beaten Gale. He loved us both a lot. You look a lot like him but I can't tell you his name. Next?" Pissed was an understatement "What do you mean you can't tell me. You said you'd answer my questions so who was he?"
"Wrong I said I'd answer some I can't answer that one nor can I answer your mother's name but that one I don't know. Next?" Her smile was still sad. Again he hesitated he hated being so scared of the answer. "What was my mother like?" "She was beautiful I only met her on the night you were born but I remember that she was beautiful and strong she wasn't a shinobi but better then most jounin." He felt happy that his parents were strong. "How did she die" "kyubii" he could tell that she wouldn't answer anymore about that subject so he decided that he would change the subject. "What's Gale like?"
She smiled happily this time. "He is the strongest nin I have ever met. He can do almost all jutsu without hand signs. He has unbelievable kekei genkai he has quite a few wanna hear about them." He could only shake his head yes, any jutsu without hand signs is almost impossible isn't it? "Well first the only reason he has Odin is because he has the sayjin coils it allows him to forcefully increase his chakra supply into an almost limitless level. Also the more chakra he uses the greater his chakra capacity becomes almost doubling."
"In fact the only way you can tell is by the color of his hair and eyes the silver hair with the red eyes that change color depending on his mood is the sayjin. He has two doujutsu the sharingan which he has both stages and then there is the onigan the demon eye. It sees all that the sharingan, byakugan and even my ryuugan (cookie to whoever can name the anime that that's from). He also is the best kinjutsu and shadow user that I know. He has even reached a level that only a handful of people can claim an S-zero level Nin. A nin who is the elite of elite one who could crush any kage who stood before him."
"What do you mean by demon village?" That was his next question a very important one since that would explain who or what Odin was. "There are nine celestial beasts that are counted by the number of the tails that it has Haku has the yobii or four tail. My son has the hachibii or eight tails. When a demon attacks you can't really kill it but you can seal it in something. In my village every boy was a jinchuriki or demon container and the girls were sealers and healers. The kage is to be the strongest demon and human in the village. My father was the previous onikage or demon lord that's what they call our kage. It is the kage and all S-Zero Nin's job to kill any S-zero Nin that harms the balance of the world that is the first job of both the onikage and an S-Zero nin."
"Who killed your village I mean it's a demon village so how could one person kill the entire village if Gale is so great couldn't he have stopped him?" Again her smile was sad "Not when it was Gale who was the Nin." And with that she got up and left.
He stared at the stars again some of the questions where gone now but so many more were left.
so tell me what you think and is that easier to read then chp 1? also i'm tweaking rock lee and yugito in the fic he'll be a jinchuriki and yugito will be younger.