Wow. O.o
Thanks so much everyone! I can't believe how many reviews I'm getting, considering, that this was only the second story I put up on here.
To answer some questions..
Age: I'll be fourteen in August... yes I am a bit young, so don't go all commenting OH yOu'Re SucHH A pERvErT!!!!
Too much moaning: Yeah... I thought that too, I think that I went a bit overboard . O.o I'm rereading now, and I see what you mean. ;
First: Yes, even though some may not believe me, this was my first Fully-fledged lemon. I've experienced with other writing before, some graphic scenes, but I've never written a full one. So it is my first, kind of... I guess...
Tips: Um... I'm not really a teacher, I would just recommend reading a bunch of other lemons,... lord knows I read enough. .
Oneshot or not: Um, I MIGHT continue it... I don't really know where I would go with it... but if it will make you happy, I probably will add a bit on to it. But until I make that decision, I'm just going to keep it labeled as completed.
Again, thank you so much everyone! You are luffed!