Chapter One:
ThunderClan Patrol
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Fireheart trotted along the RiverClan border with the dawn patrol of Tigerclaw, Graystripe, Whitestorm, and Lionheart. It was a pretty boring morning, they had patrold Snakerocks, Fourtrees, and were now heading back to camp along the RiverClan border. There was nothing really happening, except Graystripe caught a vole, and Lionheart renewed a few scent markings.
"I smell something!" exclaimed Whitestorm. Fireheart stopped, and opened his jaws to drink in the scent of the forest.
"Me too!" exclaimed Fireheart. "It smells like ShadowClan!"
"ShadowClan! In ThunderClan territory?" roared Tigerclaw. "Brokenstar's gone way to far this time!" Tigerclaw sprinted forward, his patrol followed a tail length behind. When they came to a small patrol, of a small tabby queen, two warriors, what looked like an apprentice, and three kits. Fireheart pushed himself in front of Tigerclaw, for his bad mood was worse in the morning.
"What buisness does ShadowClan have in ThunderClan territory?" asked Fireheart. His voice was strong, but not as fierce as Tigerclaw's would have been.
"We are here to see Bluestar. My name is Dawncloud, my companions are Littlecloud, Whitethroat, Oakpaw, and my three kits, Twilightkit, Sunkit, and Shadowkit," replied the tabby queen.
"Why must you speak to Bluestar?" demanded Tigerclaw, pushing past Fireheart.
"It is buisness of our own! Brokenstar said we are not to tell anyone," Dawncloud growled.
"We shall take you to Bluestar, Dawncloud," mewed Whitestorm, pushing past Tigerclaw and leading the patrol.
"Thank you," mewed Dawncloud, greatfully.
Bluestar was awaken by a sheer yowl. She pushed out of her den, and saw a very angry Tigerclaw standing at the enterance to the camp. Bluestar looked around, and saw frightened ShadowClan cats. She looked as if she was going to scream, but, her face lightened when she saw the kits.
"What buissness does ShadowClan have here?" asked Bluestar.
"We need to speak to you, Bluestar," replied Dawncloud. Bluestar nodded, and flicked her tail to signal the ShadowClan cats. The cats followed her into the den.
"I wonder how long they are going to take," Graystripe said. Fireheart just shrugged.