Alright, well to start I thank all of you for your reviews and support- I've just been really busy with school work and passing my driving class- plus studying for SAT- I'll try to get something out, my ideas have just been painful. I started writing something and it's not what I wanted so I have to work on it more- I'm not going to put up something quickly just so I can get by with a new chapter.
On that note, I'm sorry if I offended anyone with this story but really you're exaggerating. If you want to report it fine- but these are all my own ideas and I've worked hard on it. So let's deal with these inhumane actions.
1. Why doesn't Sakura go to the police? Well it's also the same reason she doesn't tell her parents or her friends. Really, if she's not going to tell Naruto someone she's starting to trust how could she tell a cop? She's afraid and she's smart—back at her old school she had a really tough time and all she wants at her new school is to stay out of trouble and possibly make a good friend—she also knows that that picture could be shown throughout the school and it's not just the embarrassment fact but that people could think of her differently and it could lead up to the school hating her all over again including Naruto, Hinata, and Tenten. There's also the fact that these guys are very popular for their looks and wealth so the girls- some of the fangirls- see her as a problem already. Despite her attitude she's a fragile being with painful scars- not physical abuse, but a very painful mental kind after being forced to be alone. Hopefully she will gain the courage to tell her friends and one of them will explain to her that its better that way- for now she's trying to figure out a way to handle it back herself. All she needs to do is find a way to get that picture back right? Aside from that if you're sensitive to the fact that it was a picture without her clothes on, or the harshness of the bullying that is why this fic isn't rated Pg-13; it's rated M. The definition of M rating: Contains content suitable for mature teens and older. Not suitable for children or teens below the age of 16 with possible strong but non-explicit adult themes, references to violence, and strong coarse language.
If you don't like it, don't read it.
2. Breaking & entering: Okay in the concept of breaking and entering was anything broken a key used, glass broken? No, the door was unlocked just like the night before- The Haruno parents are very busy with their new jobs even more so then where they last lived so they (and Sakura) tend to forget things and sometimes don't lock the door- the times they accidentally forget they trust their smart daughter to be safe. The first time Sakura was brought home the door was unlocked- and when Neji threatened that he'd come up- it was just to scare her he didn't actually know the door would be unlocked- he just got lucky. As for the fact Neji went upstairs into her room, he's a spoiled bastard he doesn't care about anyone really except for the other guys he hangs out with- he wouldn't really make her dress in front of him or dress him herself he just does that to tease her. Feel better that after their whole plan with the photo the door 'was' unlocked or Sakura would have been left outside her door till her parents came home.
3. Bullying: Okay I'm sorry to say but this isn't a honey and peaches story. This is a girl who was faced with the worst bullying of her life and even though she wasn't beat up- the girls and guys at that school did some pretty bad things because they didn't see her as she really is- but a quiet weird girl who acts differently (how she tries to be happy and friendly then not bug anyone so she can fit in) – even though she tried her last school was a miserable place- and renewed bullying at her new school shows that she can't escape by just running away- she's going to have to face it with her head held high.
4. Disrupting her education: They. Don't. Care. To them Sakura is a new interest, something different at the school- they don't hate her or like her they've just taken an interest…or maybe they're even beginning to life her, but they aren't used to people not respecting them, or fangirling them so they want to make her be just like everyone else. As for the classes, its been three days- she's gone to a lot of her classes but she's been "sick" and the favored students ( a few of 'those' boys) were the one to confirm her illness—the teachers know that Sasuke, Neji, and such are higher up- if Sakura would confide in someone they definitely wouldn't stand for it, but until then Sakura will be shown as the slacker/ sick person and the teachers will listen to the kind, smart, rich boy instead. Again, they're so smart and you've seen how nice they are to anyone outside their group! Their new slave is more important than school- I'm sorry but they're bastards (cept for Dei, oh he'll learn- remember he's the most gentle)
5. Stripping her, taking pictures, and not telling anyone: Okay to make this simple as possible they needed something on her and they had to get drastic. This is an M rated fic so don't be so surprised it went to an extreme, but there is something you're missing. Neji wouldn't even mess with her clothes how could he possibly get the nerve to strip her? I didn't go into long detail how she was unconscious and they tore every piece of clothing off and laughed at her with a camera—No, simply put someone else stripped her, they're rich guys they can do it- and even though I wanted to save this- it was a girl who stripped her, there was no violence and it no sex or lust or ANYTHING- it was just a job.
6. Last, but not least the slave part of this. I'm going to go outright and say you KNOW that she isn't being forced into labor or sex or pleasing anyone- they call her slave to know her place- practically calling her a servant, which she is currently due to their blackmail. It his cruel to human rights but like how Sasuke sees Sakura as dirt- everyone, EVERYONE (to them) is beneath them. On an added note they call her many other names as to their personalities but they're practically saying servant. Gaara: calls her a bunny, Sasuke: slave (to know her place), Neji: (the same or princess. or other things- shh he likes her) Itachi: idiot, Deidera: little slave (he sees this all as a game and doesn't remember her real name) Sasori: (hasn't really called her anything yet)
My reviewers do not read this because they're perverted freaks. The people who favor this/ review it/ praise it enjoy the story as a whole because it's just that a story. A story about a bullied girl who gets her break for a new life only to have it come back to her and how she's going to get through it. Things aren't marshmallows and sunshine but she has to become this new person she'd thrived to be no matter whether it's with friends or blow for blow. In time maybe she can even change the school or the guys- time will tell but it's a true struggle.
I am not changing my story because I wrote this for the purpose that I had a good idea, I enjoy Sakura's character, wanted to see a 'different' Naruto high school fic, and for people to really enjoy it and want more when they read it.
If there are any other questions, complaints please tell me. I'm sorry my next update had to be this- hopefully I answered any questions and you'll continue to enjoy this story upon my next update! That's all.
