Yeah, still no reviews. What's wrong with my story?! Is it too short?! Is it badly written?! Somebody tell me what you think! Please?!
Anyway, like I said, this chapter has my character Galaxy in it. You'll find out who she is. Plus, it has Knuckles and Sonic in it. Whee.
Disclaimer-I don't own sonic or any of the other real sonic characters. My friend owns Sheema and Ask'em. I own my characters. We both own Sarula. Moving on.
Burn layed on his bed, stairing at the ceiling of his room. The necklace that Tracy had given him sat in one of the drawrs of his desk. He had kept it there, locked away, scince he had found out that the mice Darkness and killed were her parents. Burn couldn't bare to think about the pain she must have been in. The slashes made it hard to lay on his back. He had bandaged them up but that hadn't helped the pain. Burn closed his eyes and sighed slightly. There was a small knock on the door and his eyes flew open. It had been too soft for Darkness and too hard to be one of the wolves scaping on the door.
"Who is it?"
"Galaxy." answered a quiet yet stern voice. It reminded him a lot of Lenette's meow. "Are you the new apprentice?"
"Yup. My name's Burn." Burn said.
"...Burn?" She asked.
"Yeah..."
"...May I come in?"
"Sure." Burn sighed. "The door's open."
The door opened and a white female hedgehog appeared in the doorway. She had quills that went down to the middle of her back with three locks of hair in the front. She had a jagged black hairband, black boots, and a black dress that had a shredded look to the bottom of it. She looked to be around seventeen. Galaxy's gray-blue eyes widened in surprise when she saw him.
"..."
"What?" Burn asked.
"...Darkness said you were a clone. Who's...clone are you?" She asked quietly. Burn sat up and got off his bed.
"I've never met him. His name's Flame." He shrugged. The clone hedgehog sighed and looked at her. "Why?"
Galaxy was staring at him but it seemed to be a blank stare. "You okay?" Burn asked. She slowly nodded as she dropped her gaze.
"I...need to go talk to Darkness. I'll be right back." She turned and walked out the door without another word. Burn blinked in surprise. Something was werid about the way she had looked at him. It wasn't just in surprise...there was something else there too. He shrugged and sat down on his bed. A few seconds later, Galaxy walked back into his room. She sat down next to him on the bed. "...Do you know anything about Flame the hedgehog?" Burn looked at her in surprise.
"No. Just his name."
"Well..." Galaxy said. "I think its time you learned. Can you controle fire?"
Burn nodded and lit a flame on his finger.
"That's beacause Flame is the Guardian of Fire. His father also had fire powers. He has a sister...Kim. She's the Guardian of Light and extremly powerful. And yet...she doesn't act the part. She would rather goof off than perfect her moves. Her mother had light powers as well. Darkness killed their parents. I thought they wouldn't survive more than ten minutes...but they did. They fought back and survived for ten years. They both also have what you would call super forms. Kim's is called Angel form and Flame's is called Inferno form." Burn stared at the ground. This was so much to take in. Flame was twelve...that ment that he lost his parents when he was two. That was so sad. Before he could ask anymore, Galaxy changed the subject. "Why do you have bandages on your back?"
"Hmm? Oh. Darkness scatched me." Burn replied. Galaxy looked surprise but only for a second.
"They need to be changed. Here." She reached over and started to take his bandages off.
"H-hey! What are you doing?!"
"Changing your bandages. Hold still."
"Ow! Quit it!"
"Hold still!" Galaxy had Burn's bandages off and had found the first aid kit under his bed. "These are pretty bad. When did he scatch you?"
"Last night."
"Hmm...Well, they'll heal but you will have scars." Galaxy told him. Burn merely shrugged.
"No big deal."
"...No, I suppose not..." She sighed as she finished. "There."
"Thanks." Burn muttered.
"Don't mention it." Galaxy leaned over and kissed him on the forhead in a sisterly way. Burn leapt back in surprise.
"What the heck was that?!" Galaxy merely smiled.
"Yes. Just like Flame..." She stood up and walked over to the door. The white hedgehog was about to step through the doorway but stopped and looked at him over her shoulder. "Be seeing you soon...little brother." A gray portal appeared in front of her and she leapt threw it without another word.
Burn glanced around through the leaves of the plant he was hiding in. Darkness had told him about a place called Angel Island, where he currently was, and something called the Master Emerald. It was hard enough to get on the stupid island now he was supposed to find some big glowing rock and bring it back?
'This mission is so stupid!' Burn thought, more than a little annoyed. No one was around so he got out of the plant and started to look. 'No one's even on this island!' He slowly passed a shrine but stopped and looked at it. There was a bright green emerald bigger than he was at the top of it. He slowly climbed up the steps and looked at it. "Okay..." Burn said quietly to himself. "I found it now how do I get it out of here?" He stared at the big rock for a second. "Hmm...Maybe I could-!" WHAM! Something slammed into his head, knocking him halfway down the steps.
"Hey, what do you think you were doing with the Master Emerald?!" A male voice asked angrily. Burn's eyes flickered open to see a red echidna with stormy purple eyes and boxing gloves glaring down at him. "Huh? Oh, Flame its you. Sorry, I didn't see it was you. You know, from the back you really look different with dark fur. So what are you here for?"
"I'm not Flame! My name's Burn." Burn said, standing up and crossing his arms.
"Oh, yeah. Sure." Knuckles said, rolling his eyes.
"I'm not Flame! And who the heck are you?" Burn said with a glare. Knuckles sighed.
"You KNOW I'm Knuckles."
"Okay. Well, I have to get this stupid thing back to Darkness so stay out of my way, got it?" Burn said, pushing past him. Knuckles stared at him. Bored or not, Flame would NEVER joke about being on Darkness' side.
"Your not Flame, are you?"
"Well, look who's catching on!" Burn snapped in annoyence. "No, I'm not Flame and for the last time my name is Burn!" WHAM! Burn stumbled away from the big green jewel, holding his head. Once his vision cleared, he glared at Knuckles. "Quit doing that!"
"Flame look-a-like or not, I won't let you take the Master Emerald!" Knuckles growled. The echidna and Burn both took fighting poses and got ready to kill each other but they stopped as the sound of fast footsteps approched. Knuckles got out of his fighting stance. Normally, the sound would annoy him but now it just meant back up. He KNEW he didn't need it but still he didn't know if this kid had Flame's powers or if he was stronger. Burn, on the other hand, turned to stare at where the sound was comming from. The footsteps didn't even sound like footsteps. They were way too fast. After a few minutes, he was able to see a blue streek zooming across the island toward them. Burn stared in surprise as the streek disappeared.
"Hey Knux! Hey Flame! You at it again? Let me guess. It's about Kim again right?" A boy's voice asked from behind them. Burn turned quickley to see a blue hedgehog with green eyes and red and white running shoes laying on the top step. The hedgehog blinked in surprise. "Hey, your not Flame..."
"Thank you! Your a lot smarted than this idiot!" Burn shouted angrily as he motioned to Knuckles. "Oof!" The clone hedgehog was knocked down the steps again by the echidna's fist. Sonic blinked in mild surprise, not from Knuckles over reaction, but this strange hedgehog's comment.
"Definatelly not Flame..." The blue hedgehog grumbled and stood up.
"No duh!" Burn snapped as he stood up. "I'm Burn! Now who the heck are you?!"
"I'm Sonic the hedgehog." He replied with a smirk. "Now..." The blue hedgehog said as he stepped down to join Knuckles in the middle of the steps. "What do you want?"
"That stupid emerald! ugh..." Burn's vision blurred a little and he felt dizzy, probally from all the hits to the head. Pain shot through his body and he remembered the claw marks on his back.
"Hey, are you ok?" Sonic asked.
"WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?! HE'S TRYING TO STEAL THE MASTER EMERALD!" Knuckles roared. But Burn wasn't even listening. He felt dizzy and his whole body ached. He stumbled and nearly fell over.
"Hey!" Sonic said worried about him.
"Forget it." Knuckles grumbled. The echidna was mad but he could tell Burn wasn't faking.
"Got to...get out of...here..." Burn murmured, his head spinning. Sonic and Knuckles became red and blue blurrs. He saw the blue blurr rush forward and the red one follow reluctenly. "No..." Burn saw fire form around him and then seemed to disappear. He saw the familiar colors and shapes of his bedroom but never got to wonder how he got there. The clone hedgehog fell backward onto his bed and blacked out.
Yup, he faints again. Can you blame him after Knuckles knocked him down the steps like four times? Anyway, next chapter may take longer than I hoped because I think of how to continue. But...REVIEW ANYWAY!!!!!!!! PLEASE?!?!?!?!? I NEED someone to review!
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