An Untold Love
Authors note: Hello people I'm really sorry for the long updates I was waiting for 1 review and I got so on with the story
Hiashi was stricken with hate, he saw the nine-tails fox demon that killed his grandmother, in his household. And all he could think about was killing him for what he had put his family through. His grandmother Hinashi (I made up sorry its dumb) was the strongest Hyuuga to every live. She was the only Hyuuga to master all of the clan techniques, but of course was not able to beat that demon.
As Hiashi was thinking about all of this Naruto was yelling at him about how he shouldn't hurt Hinata like he did. Hinata was blushing because he had just came to help her out with her problem, maybe he liked her, but fainted at this thought. As Hinata fainted Hiashi said something unexpected, "what did you do you demon, did you use some sort of telepathy"?
"What the heck are you talking about, you really are a crazy old fool." Said Naruto
"You ignorant demon fool, not only am I going to kill you (or brutally beat because Naruto has the nine-tails fox demon inside him) I am also going to beat Hinata."
(Demonic noises are herd)…..
"Hahaha, im finally free, Hiashi im here for one thing, and that's to hurt you".
" aaaaaaaaa, the fox demon has emerged, please spare me fox demon, I will let that filth of a child take care of Hinata, she can live with him, date him whatever, just please don't hurt me."
Hinata herd what her father said and fainted againthe fox however wasn't pleased with this answer so he attacked. (Slash) And all that was herd through all of konoha was Hiashi screaming.
"Fox" Naruto said, "what have you done, you attacked Hinata's father, I asked you not to" said Naruto in a now saddened voice.
"Hahahaha, I don't have to listen to you, stupid brat, you unleasehed me now i'm going to killl everyone.
"O no you dont", said Naruto in a loud voice, and Naruto pushed with all his might and the demon fox's energy resided into Naruto.
Naruto, feeling very pround of himself walked over to Hinata, picked her up and he then walked over to his house.
That night Hinata woke up in Naruto's apartment, in his bed, alone, not completly knowing what was going on Hinata walk out of Naruto's bedroom and opened the bedroom door.
Naruto was on the couch dead, hinata was in shock but looked at the table to see a note there that said
"Hinata i'm sorry I couldn't have helped you earlier with your father and stuff but i've done all i can, i also wantted to tell you that I love you very much I dont know how you feel about me but i love you thank you so much Good Bye"
And hinata just fell on the ground knowing that she never told Naruto her feelings and her love was now untold.
Hello readers that was the last chapter of this story i didnt expect to end this so early or like this but no1 really liked it so i just ended please tell me if this was any good for my first story.