As Freezing as it is
Sorry about the long wait but I have been busy during the summer so I didn't have time for the story. But I am back kind of; this chapter is nothing but a tease sorry. I promise I will update faster now but school is starting soon so you can probably expect a chapter once or twice every two weeks, sorry. I am kind of at a stand still though about what to really do next for there are about three things that can happen, the box secret can finally be exposed, they talk to the detective, or you see more J.D angst. So tell me what you guys will like to see next because I can't decide. Again I am sorry about the wait and here is the tease, enjoy?
psychotic KAT-thank for the review, and yes JD is in serious trouble.
dingus485- Thank you for the review. I know I hate stories where there go from one country to another and everyone speaks the same language. Its so unnatural. And it was hell for me to write, the Spanish sentence and then the English sentence but I'm happy that you liked it.
XAngst-PrincessX-Don't worry nothing life-threatening will happen to Isabella, it will just too evil to write such a thing but I can't promise you that she will be okay mentally and physically. And don't worry JD is going to have one hell of a time for the next four days. It will be sad and I cant promise you that he will be okay either, hell I cant even promise that JD will live or not.
Reptilian Goddess-Congrats, you are correct Jose is part of a cult which means JD is in serious trouble. Just wait…I was wondering about the whole Spanish and English thing trying to decide where to put in the English words and frankly I am not certain how I am going to construct it in the next chapter but thanks for the idea I may just have to use it.
YinYangWhiteTiger-Thank you for all the reviews. I hope to continue to like the story and I can promise you four people are going to die, two will be taken to prison, and three will be heart broken.
Zetapie-Thank for the review and to finally get to see what happens to JD but remember it is just a slice not the whole pie. And also the grammar thing and the Beta thing…enough. I know my grammar is not perfect hell I never even pretended and all of my friends have the same grammar problems if not more than me so I am doing my best so I cant ask them and any ways I think they would never look at me in the same way again if they read any of my stories. Trust me! They all think I am the most innocent person in the face of the planet and I don't want to ruin my impression.
Anyways six reviewers for the six chapter that is freaky…thank you all who took the time to reply and I swear the next chapter will be better and Beta'd but remember my friends have the same grammar problems so sorry in advance if it isn't perfect.
I was cold when I woke up, no not cold, freezing. The whole room felt icy and the coldness stabbed at my body. I tried my best to get up but my head was pounding and I could see the blood hitting the floor one at a time. I put a hand on my forehead and felt such an intense sense of pain that I forced my hand off my forehead and froze when I saw my now red hand. I turned my hand slightly and blood splattered to the ground. I tried to remember what the last thing I remember was but nothing came up. All I know I was depressed in my hotel room and now…and now I am somewhere that I have never been before. A room so cold that I knew I had to get out of this room fast. I painfully rose into a sitting position and felt so nauseous and so dizzy that I was surprised I didn't collapse back to the hard ground. I took a deep breath as I struggled to pull myself on my feet. The first time I tried I fell right back to the ground in a giant heap. I tried it again this time using the nearest wall to slowly ease myself to my feet. It worked; I felt proud that I managed to get to my feet no matter how much my legs seemed to be shaking. I'm up, I did it! I smiled to myself before I notice something; my hands feel like I just touched a thousand needles. Confused I pull my hands away from the wall and much to my surprise my hands are covered with ice. I kept staring at my hands without noticing that I am slipping until I hit the ground hard. I groan in pain as my nose connected with the marble tiles of the floor and I heard a crack and my nose felt funny. It felt like a numb-dull pain and I knew I had just broken my nose.
It didn't hit me until I saw the ice forming on the walls beside me that something was wrong. I was freezing! Once again I slowly rose to my feet but I felt so dizzy, so sick. Holding on to the icy wall beside me for support I took a small step forward, and nearly slipped back to the ground. Looking down I discovered why it was so hard to walk, there was ice particles all across the floor. Taking a deep breathe I took another small step and then another and another until I came to a door. I was going to turn the knob but I noticed that the knob was icy which means my hands can stick to the knob like a tongue sticks to an icy pole. It would be foolish to touch it with bare hands. Taking off my shirt I wrapped my hands in it exposing my torso to the extreme coldness and tried to turn the knob. To my discomfort I found that the knob would not turn, it must be locked, probably from the outside too. Sighing I put the shirt back on and realized how little it helped. I was still freezing. I carefully turned around and saw three other doors in this room and I also saw what I tried desperately not to notice when I first woke up, the room was full of bodies. Not human bodies mind you but sheep, cows, and horses bodies. It reminded me of some type of meat room. There was so much blood, everywhere. It was like somebody gutted these poor creatures in this room and left them there to die. I slowly and carefully walked up to the carcasses, I am not really sure why I am walking up to a bunch of corpses but for some reason I felt like I have to. I walked by the horse first; it was gutted, its intestines oozing out of the cut. I turn to the cow and I tried not to puke, its head was removed, the only thing that remained was an eye-ball that was leaking and the poor animal seemed to be missing its spine. I was shaking really bad when I came to the sheep. Both the horse and the cow looked healthy but this sheep looked like it had never been healthy a day of its poor life. I couldn't really find any sign of injury on the sheep at all. Could the sheep have just died from the temperature in this room? Gaining a small sense of courage I touched the fury side of the sheep and waited to see if there was a heartbeat, sadly it was dead. I sighed as patted the sheep as I tried to figure out where I am and how I got here. I remember being in my hotel room and I left, but where would I go, the bar? No, because my wallet was inside the hotel room. Could I have gone to the lake? No because I didn't feel like running into Elliot's Jose. Where else would I have gone? Turk's hotel room? Yes, of course, whenever I am upset he has always been there to make me feel better. Then Carla and Turk were fighting and I took Isabella out of the room but where did we go? I looked at the sheep once more before I realized I must have given Isabella a car ride. Then what happened, I mean why would I be here? Oh god, the ambush! Where is Isabella, is Isabella here someplace? Did those bastards already killed her? Is she seriously died? Did somebody save her? I had so many questions and getting no answers. I was so deep in thought that I didn't realize the itching until I felt a bite and when I looked down at the sight of the pain which was my right arm I saw hundreds of Mexican red ants which was surprising because usually red ants liked between sixty and seventy degrees and it had to be around negative ten degrees in this room which means that the ants was on the sheep when the sheep came in here. It also means the sheep had probably been here less then thirty minutes.
I felt another bite and I start to panic, I really am afraid of ants, and I stood up instantly and I tried to get the ants off of me. As stupid as I was I forgot how slippery the ground was and I lost my footing and fell heavily. I hit my head hard on the icy ground. Sitting up I tried to straighten my vision out but everything was warped together. Pretty soon all my energy was consumed and my eyes were so heavily that I didn't have a choice but to give into how exhausted I was and I passed out.
When I woke up I wished I that I didn't. I look around me to sadly say I was still trapped in this awful place. With a shaky cry I bring my legs close to me trying to somehow bring any type of warmth that I can find. I knew I needed to find some type of warmth and fast my feet and hands were both feeling numb and I knew that was not a good sign. With effort I quickly stood up and made my way toward the door I have to get it open. I somehow managed to make it to the door and with a cry I kick at it feeling surprised that I didn't feel anything but somehow the door budged and my feeling of finally getting out of this room suddenly turned to fear as I saw what was behind the door. Falling to my knees I looked in at the thousands of eyes that seemed to stare right back at me. At the moment I knew what would befall me…I am just two more eyes.