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Broken PromisesTwo days ago, Naruto had been tricked into accepting a mission from Tsunade. He was supposed to train Hyuuga Hanabi, and he would, but not in the way everyone expected. Breaking her would be hard, and he had spent two days pondering how he would do it. Finally he had come up with a plan.
First, he would have to rid her of her arrogance by humiliating her and asserting himself as her superior. Then, he would break her physically. After that, he would destroy her spirit. And last, but certainly not least, he would break her mind, twisting it and making her the perfect servant. It would be a delicate operation as he had to keep her strong enough to fight and lead her clan, but she would have to fear and serve him. That was the tricky part, but Naruto liked a challenge.
Today was the day he was to meet his future servant, and he was prepared. A scroll of supplies, purchased yesterday, was in his vest. The scroll held everything he would need to break the girl. Looking at the clock, he saw that he was two hours late for his first lesson with her. Allowing himself a smirk he left his apartment and headed for training ground twenty. He had chosen this area because it was far away from anything else, and they would not be disturbed.
Arriving at the training ground a few minutes later, he took a look at the girl. She was a decent height, standing at 5'5", with raven hair that went to the small of her back. She had an athletic body, with lithe limbs and perfect legs. The pervert in him took a look at her other aspects next. Her legs were long and smooth, and she had an ass that was to die for. When she sensed him and turned around a moment later, he noticed that her breasts were small and perky.
"You're late, sensei."
Hanabi allowed some anger to seep into her voice as she greeted her new sensei. This commoner, had forced her to wake up at four in the morning so she could get to the training field on time, and he had the audacity to show up two hours late! She would not stand for it! She was the heir of the Hyuuga clan ever since she had defeated her sister two years ago! She demanded respect, and she would get it!
Naruto was amused at the girl's anger. She was displaying all the signs of classic Hyuuga arrogance. This was his first obstacle. The entire plan hinged upon his ability to get rid of that arrogance. He had done it with Neji, but Hanabi would be slightly different. Now that he had let the girl's anger stew for a while, she would be easier to provoke. By provoking her he would get her to do something stupid, giving him the opportunity to punish her. Deciding that he had waited long enough, he graced the girl with a greeting.
"So you're the little cunt that Tsunade wants me to train huh? Why she wants me to is far beyond me, personally. I think that you'd be better off dead or serving society as a whore. By the looks of it, being a whore is the only thing you'd be good at. You're obviously failing as a ninja if you need someone outside your precious clan to train you. Strongest clan of Konoha indeed."
Naruto paused his speech, and pulled out a bottle of sake as he watched the girl. Her anger was rolling off her in waves as she glared at him. He could see the fists at her sides shaking, and the grinding of her teeth as he took a gulp of sake. It took a moment for her to speak, and her voice was positively venomous.
"How Dare You!"
In her anger, the words came out in a near hiss. Hanabi couldn't believe the nerve of this commoner. He had just called her, the heir of the great Hyuuga clan, a cunt. And on top of that, he had suggested that she would better serve the world as a whore. Anger blinded her, and she charged at him with a palm aimed at his heart. And in her anger she failed to notice the satisfied smirk on his face.
'Perfect'
The palm was stopped when Naruto grabbed Hanabi's wrist faster than she could see. Her scream of pain when he broke said wrist was heard throughout the forest. Naruto held tight to her wrist as he watched her face. Pain was clearly written on it as tears poured down her cheeks. His tone as he spoke was admonishing, as though he was speaking to a small child.
"Now now my little cunt of a student. It's not very nice to try and kill your sensei when you first meet him, now is it. I had expected better than that from you, little cunt."
Naruto paused to give a long, dramatic sigh.
"You know I had planned on just getting to know you today, but since you seem so eager to start, we'll simply jump right in with some sparring. Is that agreeable to you, cunt?"
His last sentence was accompanied by him squeezing her wrist, eliciting another scream from her. Once she recovered, she spoke through her ragged breaths.
"O-okay."
As soon as she had spoken Naruto hit her with a punch to the solar plexus, throwing her back into a tree. He heard the air leave her lungs as she hit, and waited for a minute while she caught her breath. He watched with sadistic amusement as she stood, only to fall over on all fours. He walked in front of her, and spoke.
"That's where you belong cunt. On your knees before your superiors."
He watched as she raised her head to glare at him, before rising on shaky limbs. When she stood, she spat in his face. Wiping the spit off with his hand, he looked at the girl with a small glare before he backhanded her, hard.
She flew to the side, and didn't move much as she touched her face. Naruto walked over and turned her onto his back with his foot. He looked once into her pain filled eyes, noting the defiance there, before he stomped on her chest with enough force to break her ribs, but not enough to crush her. He couldn't take over the Hyuuga without her now, could he?
Once he realized that she wasn't getting up anytime soon, he knelt down and straddled her chest. Once he was comfortable, he looked into her pale eyes, and took stock of the emotions there. Anger. Defiance. Pain. They all blended together to make her eyes beautiful. But such thoughts were ended when he got down to business.
"This is what I meant when I said that you should become a whore, cunt. I defeated you within seconds. But I suppose I'll train you anyway, just because I want to keep Tsunade off my back. Since you're injured, I'll heal you before I give you your uniform and end today's lesson."
He began the healing techniques he knew, before a positively evil thought came to his mind. Once he thought of that he pulled out a small amount of the fox's chakra and pushed it into the girl, forcing it to heal her wounds.
Her screams echoed through the forest once more as the red chakra worked its way through her system. The chakra itself was burning and painful, but when it healed her wounds, the pain was even worse than the pain of receiving them. She screamed until her throat hurt, and then the chakra healed that too. Eventually it was over, and she was left panting on the ground.
Naruto smirked from his position atop her as he watched the chakra work. Judging by her screams, the pain was just as bad as when he inflicted the wounds. That could be useful in the future, as well as a deterrent to help her keep from getting hit. Like that would be possible.
Once she calmed down, Naruto stood and hauled her up with him. As she leaned against a tree, he pulled out a scroll and unsealed a few items. The items he pulled out could hardly be called clothing. They were small bits of leather, combined with fishnet to create an overall, slutty, appearance.
Walking over to her he pushed the items into her hands and told her to put them on. He was met with flat refusal, and his voice took on a slight growl as he spoke.
"If you do not put your new uniform on I will be forced to punish you. And my punishments are very harsh. You will wear that uniform everyday without fail, or else."
He couldn't suppress the pleasure he felt when he saw the fear enter her eyes. But the defiance was still there. Oh well, it wasn't going to be crushed in a day. Waiting for her to emerge from the bushes, he pulled out one other item that he had had made just for this occasion.
He couldn't hide the lust in his eyes as his new student emerged. She looked positively sexy, and it took all of his self-control to keep himself off of her. It wouldn't do to rush into things. There would be plenty of time to do that later, but now he had to fit her with the final piece of her uniform.
Walking behind her, he noticed the disgust and hatred prevalent in her eyes. He allowed his fingers to brush her shoulder, savoring the soft flesh as she shuddered. Once he was behind her he moved quickly and snapped a collar around her neck before she could move.
This particular collar was simply a larger version of a shock ring that was used to wake a ninja silently during field missions. He had bought this one and tuned it to react to seals so that it would help him train her. One seal, and electricity would course through her body.
He watched as her hands flew to the collar as she turned to glare at him. Her fingers would never unlock the collar, but she tried anyway. If she was angry at him before, now she was positively seething.
"You bastard! How dare you do this to me! You have no right to do this! I demand you take this off at once!"
Naruto raised an eyebrow at her.
"No authority, huh? As your sensei and master, I have every authority to do this."
"You are not my master!"
As soon as she said that she felt pain coursing through her whole body. The pain was so great that she fell to her knees. The pain left after a moment, and she glared up at the man in front of her. His smirk was so smug that she desired nothing else but to wipe it off his face.
"If I am not your master, why are you on your knees before me?"
She snarled at him, but every time she tried to stand, pain forced her back down.
"You will address me as Master from now on cunt. You will also not speak unless spoken to. You are my student now, and that means that you're in my world. You'd better get used to it."
He began walking away from her.
"Meet here tomorrow at five a.m."
And with a swirl of leaves, he was gone.
A.N. There's the second chapter of Broken Promises. Thanks for reading.
