Out of His Mind
Chapter 3:
We Need to Save Her
Editors: William Whisk and Shriner
Disclaimer:
Disclaimer: Maxwell Atoms is the owner of "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" I am just making a fanfiction parody. I hope you enjoy it.
Description you need to know. Billy and Mandy are around sixteen years old and Mandy is still wearing what she normally wears and same goes with Billy.
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"Hahaha…that idiot boy, I don't care if his brain is, working now, he's still as dumb as ever," Grim laughed, remembering the last moments for Billy, who looked sad and was not caring about his own life but of Mandy's.
"Why does that boy care so much for her? I don't get it…" He began to ponder, as he still freshly remembered Billy's pleas, with the sad face, the boy expressed. This made him begin to feel emotional.
"Well, I guess I can help him…that way I can personally chop off his head, when his true time comes," Grim rationalized, not wanting to admit he was taking pity on the boy. He opened a portal and Billy fell out, landing on his face.
"Thanks…Grim," Billy said as he felt tired and walked to the sofa and passed out. Grim was feeling tired himself and headed to Billy's room where he fell asleep on the bed.
A week passed before Billy woke up. He began eating and drinking wildly like he normally does. When he was finished he took a shower, then changed into his usual clothing, and when he was all done he called for Grim.
"Grim!" he called, but received no response. After a few moments a dark portal opened and the reaper appeared.
"Where were you?" Billy asked.
"I was using this scythe for a replacement, for now. It doesn't seem to have much magical capabilities but its physical enhancement powers are a bit greater then my scythe mon. The only thing magical about it is that it can shoot powerful blasts and open portals. This is a fighting weapon Billy, it's only meant for destruction mon," Grim told him and then he handed the boy the scythe.
"Why are you giving it to me Grim?" Billy asked.
"I said I would help you, but you're going to be doing the hard work mon. Plus I don't like using that scythe very much. It has more negative affects on supernatural users then mortal ones, if used to long." Grim said.
"Well, let's get going then," Billy replied, and then he began to think for a moment.
"This should be like your scythe, right Grim?" Billy asked.
"Yeah, but it's powered by your emotion and energy boy, so make sure you don't let it drain you too much or you'll be on my list," Grim darkly told the boy, with a dark grin on his face, and then suddenly he began to suddenly shake.
"What's the mater?" Billy asked.
"I don't know, but let's get going and save your girlfriend," Grim jokingly replied.
"She is just my friend Grim. Now let's go save her," Billy said with a voice that seemed near emotionless, but had a tint of sadness and anger in it. He then opened a portal and the two were sucked in.
"Hey! Where are we? This isn't a place that they would keep Mandy!" Billy angrily asked, not pleased with the situation.
"I see, so Venage set up precautions mon. That would explain my shaking," Grim said.
"So, where are we?" Billy was wondering as he looked around confused.
"Don't worry mon. We're in the right spot but just a far distance away from where we wanted to be. It seems like he didn't want to take a chance on me or you trying to save Mandy," Grim responded.
"Hmm, so that means you're going to have to point the way to me, right Grim?" Billy asked.
"Yeah, will do mon," Grim said as he pointed to the direction Billy needed to go.
The world they were in was orange, red and black. The ground was blood red with holes in the area, many of which many were filled with lava. The mountains and hills were an even darker shade of red, while the sky was a bright orange with black clouds. There were also large black trees that looked withered and dead.
"I'm going to warn you mon, if anything looks alive, then it's a trap. Boy there are things that would love to eat you here. So don't go running off and being reckless," Grim warned.
"Thanks Grim," Billy replied, giving the skeleton a small smile.
In Venage's lair he felt the presence of Grim and Billy. He then went to the room Mandy was held in order to put her back to sleep once more.
"So you're back," Mandy said sounding as she had given up.
"Don't play tricks on me. Your skeleton friend has given up on you, your other friend is too stupid to even conjure up an idea or even follow through saving you, soon you will meet your end, and it will not be Grim, but me," Venage said, moving closer to her he noticed that she had realized her attempt to fake helplessness had failed, and that she was truly falling into despair.
"Good, stay that way, and maybe I won't have to knock you out anymore, but until I am satisfied, good night," the demon said as he touched a few weak spots on her body, causing so much pain that she passed out. Venage left and made sure he was away from Mandy's hearing range. He began to call for one of his underlings. A strong large green ogre, with a pink caveman-like clothing, came to his bidding and listened to what his master wanted.
"Listen Lucy, go play with my two new guests and then eat them," Venage told the ogre, knowing it was a dumb, hungry, but a strong monster. Venage opened a portal for the big green monster.
"So, Billy, I've been wondering, how does it feel to have a brain now?" Grim asked. Billy began to open his mouth, but was interrupted, as both he and Grim bumped into something large and green.
"Lucy bored," the ogre shouted as it picked up Grim, and got ready to swallow him.
"Let him go!" Billy shouted as he gave a small cut on the leg of the giant ogre, that was about twenty feet tall. Grim was let go and began to fall, screamed like a little girl.
"I got you Grim!" Billy yelled, as he caught the reaper and set him down.
"Lucy will smash you and then eat you, just like Lucy eats his toe jam," the Ogre said as Grim and Billy dodged its large foot.
"Eww! That is gross!" Billy shouted.
"You used to do the same thing!" Grim shouted at him.
"Yeah, don't remind me." Billy said constantly spitting on the ground as he dodged the ogre's foot.
"Grim, distract him for me!" Billy shouted.
"I'll try mon," Grim replied, as he stopped, but had to quickly sprint to avoid being stepped on. Billy aimed the scythe and a powerful blast hit the ogre on the head, which caused the monster to fall to the ground unconscious.
"It looks like we won't be getting to Mandy as easily as I would have hoped," Grim sighed.
"I don't care how hard it'll be, we need to save her," Billy retorted as he walked past the ogre but then heard Grim shout for help. Billy turned back to see the ogre gripping Grim and getting ready to break the reaper's bones.
"Let him go!" Billy shouted.
"Nuh, uh," the ogre said with a smile, preparing, to devour the reaper.
Billy became angry and shot a blast towards the ogre's head, making it fly off and letting Grim be dropped to the ground.
"Run!" Grim shouted as he ran away and Billy followed.
"That was a close one mon, I don't want to go through both ends," Grim said, and Billy began to laugh a little.